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Unfinished Lie

by vbrandon

Rated: 13+ · Book · Other · #1794659

Chilled energy fixes me incomplete; writhing without sleep, I live an unfinished lie.

Chilled energy fixes me incomplete; writhing without sleep, I live an unfinished lie. Here my thoughts and holes. Fill them in, please. I can't finish on my own.

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Chrys O'Shea

Mar 8, 2013 at 6:41pm
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I loved the Lion King, I even cried. I'm a softy - Great entry, If only more people would take the time to view the world in the same manner - Life all over would be grand.
Kristina

Brother Nature

Mar 5, 2013 at 9:24pm
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Good point on "gardening"
Community gardens have become an excellent projects to provide inner city youth with productive and wholesome experience.
Just like you said.
Great entry.

vbrandon

Jan 25, 2012 at 12:42pm
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I just found out Emily Dickinson agrees with me!

"I know that He exists,
Somewhere in silence
He has hid his rare life
From our Gross eyes."

Karen

Sep 30, 2011 at 5:36pm
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I like the wingman!

LinnAnn -book writer

Sep 23, 2011 at 4:02am
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I feel so sad for you. To live with so much fear but be a horrible thing. For what it's worth, there are a lot of us out here that are kind, loving and pretty predictible in our kindness.

Each one of us can leave a bit of light everywhee we go. Peace may not be a constant at this time, but little bits and pieces of peace can surround us throughout each day and night.

I have had an horrific life, so many awful things have happened to me, yet I CHOSE to stay kind and loving, and have hope.

Hang in there, you are loved.

love, LinnAnn

Ghostranch

Sep 5, 2011 at 2:48pm
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"Don't weaponize words" -- I really like that! I enjoyed reading your entry.

Karen

Sep 1, 2011 at 12:12pm
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I really like your story.

QX ~ Brenton->

Aug 28, 2011 at 6:35am
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Hahaha, you are absolutely correct. Straight to the point, cold hard facts. Seemingly the ones that most people have seemed to over look. Your perspective is amazing, I never thought about any of that. Definitely a new way to see this woman in a shoe.

Karen

Aug 25, 2011 at 9:39pm
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I wish it was not so long before you could start, but I can't change it.

Karen

Aug 20, 2011 at 3:01pm
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Amazing story!

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