Demons and angels mingle at a touristic destination. 14 chapters this far. |
This is what I believe the best story I've ever written—at least in Spanish! It's set in my hometown, and a lot of things are mixed here: our very particular ways, how international tourism is an everyday element in our lives, and many things I may not believe in, but certainly like to hear about. So you have demons and excursions, fallen angels and great sights, prophecies and majestic mountains, all together. And a love story, of course. Because I'm convinced there's always a love story to tell. Since chapters are long—some 4k words each—and I'm all for short chapters online to allow a quick reading, you'll find them split in shorter, numbered parts. This way you can just read one of the chapter's part, or give it all a go. Don't forget to take a look at the Translation Notes. I put them together when I first shared this English version, and they provide both language clarification and local information, so you don't need to google everything—though you should, especially pictures of the area. Translating is not easy, especially when the setting is so specific, so I will appreciate any review to help me try to reflect in English what I think the gem among my writings. |
Chapter | 1 | Translation Notes | 8.14k |
Chapter | 2 | I - The Crossing .1 | 3.86k |
Chapter | 3 | I - The Crossing .2 | 6.90k |
Chapter | 4 | I - The Crossing .3 | 5.59k |
Chapter | 5 | I - The Crossing .4 | 7.77k |
Chapter | 6 | II - Haunted House .1 | 3.52k |
Chapter | 7 | II - Haunted House .2 | 6.35k |
Chapter | 8 | II - Haunted House .3 | 3.61k |
Chapter | 9 | II - Haunted House .4 | 4.41k |
Chapter | 10 | III - Two in the Mirror .1 | 9.50k |
Chapter | 11 | III - Two in the Mirror .2 | 8.27k |
Chapter | 12 | IV - Reserved .1 | 2.33k |
Chapter | 13 | IV - Reserved .2 | 4.69k |
Chapter | 14 | IV - Reserved .3 | 4.15k |
Chapter | 15 | IV - Reserved .4 | 4.81k |