Thank you for entering round 16 of Pixies and Parsecs Contest. I appologize for the long delay in judging.
I think your story has a good start. I'd like to see what happens as a result of this mass communication breakdown. I think it could lead to a fantasic story that has conflict woven into it by nature of the lack of communication. If you expand the story further I would be happy to re-read it.
You also happen to be the winner for this round. Hope to see you in future rounds.
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