White Case Memorial

Here's another review from one of the White Cases that I've got floating around in my port. It's for my "True Grit Scene Spoof" , which makes fun of a certain movie staring John Wayne. Took place on February 25, 2010

This one is Public, so I can give you the link. Review of "True Grit Scene Spoof"

Of course, if that doesn't work, here's Marshall's Words.

Hi, my name is Jaye and I'm reviewing your piece on behalf of the Simply Positive Review Forum where you are listed as one of this week's selected reviewees.

General Impressions: This is a really cute piece that seems to reinforce the old saying, 'If it's not to be . . .".

Grammar & Punctuation:
Specific Suggestions:
In this line, ‘ and says, "Fill Your Hands you Son Of a-" '
Suggest: Using only the capital letters of normal sentence structure.


These comments are only my personal opinion. My suggestions are made in the spirit of making a good piece even better. Keep writing!

Apparently, while reviewing on behalf of Simply Positive, I ended up giving them a good laugh- funny thing is, lots of people from Simply Positive found that to be a laugh around that time.

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