Monkey Soup

Every Breath     (Rated: 13+)
: Itchy Water~fictionandverse @ 05-23-12 @ 5:55pm
A free verse poem that is on the darker side. Honest reviews please.

LIVING IN THE HOLE OF DEPRESSION     (Rated: 13+)
: ANN Counselor, Lesbian & Happy @ 05-25-12 @ 9:04pm
What a wonderful page. Where in this world did you find the Monkey typist...I like that he's at the old typewriter that i was so proud to own back in 1958...ANN

Drive it Home     (Rated: 18+)
: Joto-Kai @ 05-29-12 @ 7:34am
11 pages. A man quests for help against his own rage; meanwhile, his wife fears something else entirely. (Love it, hate it, Lemme Know!l! Tell me how much and why! I'm cool)

Counterstrike     (Rated: 18+)
: Olivia's on Hi-Carb 2313608 @ 06-04-12 @ 9:38am
A story I wrote for the Rising Stars Contest for the May Competition. It's about May 1 last year and how two men whose sister respective wife died on 9/11 deal with the news of Bin Laden's death. Thought I'd share it. Curious about what you think.

A Precious Face     (Rated: 13+)
: ANN Counselor, Lesbian & Happy @ 06-23-12 @ 10:35pm
Clinical depression has power, for the hope and healing began when i 'see' the precious face.

The Search     (Rated: E)
: brom21 @ 06-24-12 @ 8:14pm
total rewrite

Schizo     (Rated: 18+)
: john h. @ 06-25-12 @ 11:14pm
Schizo is a pretty intense, subjective expression of the experience of schizophrenia. i welcome any/all constructive responses.

Bea Leaver-Gentle     (Rated: E)
: john h. @ 06-25-12 @ 11:22pm
Bea Leaver-Gentle is a poetic depiction of the joyful and sorrowful feelings of a mentally ill homeless woman. i welcome any/all constructive responses.

Over Cups of Coffee     (Rated: E)
: ~*Arpita*~ @ 06-28-12 @ 8:14am
This is an Indian story, but I hope everyone will be able to relate to it! Would like some in-depth review

SQUIRRELY SQUIRREL (revised)     (Rated: E)
: mystic angel @ 08-30-12 @ 6:40pm
I hope someone sees this. Monkey soup don't seem to see much traffic. Where is everyone? Please review this.

Moving anxiety and Asthema attacks     (Rated: ASR)
: Gifted Young Writer @ 10-09-12 @ 3:56pm
Some stuff i've been going through latly

There's that feeling again...     (Rated: E)
: KerrieAnnS @ 10-27-12 @ 8:42pm
I wrote this earlier in the month when I was having a particularly low moment. Since then I feel I have been really improving but I like to look back on this to remind me of that improvement. I'd love feedback on this please :D

Your eyes are my Salvation     (Rated: E)
: KerrieAnnS @ 10-29-12 @ 7:46pm
This was written for an interactive story; the prompt made me think of the many times I have fallen prey to panic attacks. There is one person who I always wish was there, because when they are they can bring me back from the brink. Reviews appreciated :D

Fear(1)     (Rated: 13+)
: john h. @ 12-12-12 @ 7:59am
Fear--edited version: i would welcome any constructive comments to the poem on the left. note: one line is out of line. thank you, j.

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