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First of all, a very warm welcome from me to you. I hope you will enjoy your stay here.
Anyways, this was a very nice poem. The rhyme of the poems was good as well as the flow. The sequence was good as well. This poem had a unique theme and one of those which I liked a lot. It was great to see or read an item about animals and that someone really does care about them. The way you described the setting and how the puppy was lying was very good. My favourite stanza was the first one.
There were no spelling errors or any suggestions. Perfect!
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