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Review of Lost Within  
Review by J. A. Buxton
Rated: E | (5.0)
Having had brief spells of depression years ago, I understand the feelings behind this poem. Like all good writing, it did pull me in and bring back memories of those days, if only for a few minutes.

I will be reading more of your work and hope some are more uplifting as I refuse to be unhappy today. Well done!

Judity
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Review of Crazy Days  
Review by J. A. Buxton
Rated: E | (4.5)
It might be cruel of me, but I found myself laughing all through this and thinking, "Better you than me!"

Looking forward to more of your adventures, and hopefully you survive then, too.
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Review of Just A Cat  
Review by J. A. Buxton
Rated: E | (4.5)
I loved it, Nicole, and can just see one of my five cats looking at me like that.

As Oliver Twist would say, "More, please. I want more."


Judity
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Review of Vanish  
Review by J. A. Buxton
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I didn't see that ending for her child coming. Very well written, in my opinion, with excellent descriptions of the characters. I'm new here, so hopefully this is how a critique should be written and posted.

Only one small quibble, and I might be wrong. Are you sure your use of the semicolon throughout is correct when you separate a dependent and independent clause? For example:
She looked back to the Figerro; her wild, quivering eyes pleading for help.

Anyway, this aside, I enjoyed your story.

Judity
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