This is a cute poem. Definitely brings a smile. A bat and a butterfly? Well, stranger things have happened! I love the line, "She desires romance with light.".
This is a beautiful tribute. The part about teaching to ride a bicycle is touching. The last two line are my favourite,
"And even Death must have been a little ashamed
At his fate!"
Regards,
Sara
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