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*Partyhatp* Happy WDC birthday! *Partyhatp*
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Rock on! You kicked butt and took names, didn't you? *Wink*
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Excellent additions! This story has it all--action, mystery, magic, love. :::happy sigh:::
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Loved it! Want more!
So Chapter 9 is up...might feel off cause it took a month to write the second half...

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All good in the Ash and Jeffie hood!
Didn't feel off at all. Felt just right! *Wink*
Halfway done with Chapter 9 in Collage. Working on the second half now and hope to post by this weekend. For real this time :D
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But!! I see her writing a short story about her trip and stops along the road. Maybe even a day by day posting at night...lol
JD  
But its been almost a month since shes posted any new chapters! But!!! I do understand. You are kinda sweet. And almost cute. *Wink*
There is no fighting in write club! Stand down!;) Now, on to all that phone sex you keep distracting K with...
Chapter 8 is posted. I thought we would meet Gracie in this chapter, but Jeff and Ash had other ideas...*Sigh*

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They just have minds of their own don't they. lol
JD  
Loved it!
They do have minds of their own...and one of them is a teenager, so we all know how that goes ;)
Matt's chapter is up. Let me know if it gets confusing...
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Not confusing at all. Great chapter, K!
Woot! Somehow I got inspired again. I'll have Matt's chapter up by the end of the week. Should have a new chapter posted for collage by Sunday. Yay!
I went to "dive in" and edit and I messed up the bullet points, CV...


Ooops...
And after the last time, I'm scared to touch it, LOL :D
OK, I think we have formatting and wording issues taken care of. Let me know what ya' think.
Looks great :D
Okay, after much thought and consideration, I am not changing the format or style for Chapters 1 & 3 of Nightwatch 1: Growing Up. I happen to like the current format. So it is back up for reading just like it was before with an addition of a prologue on the Book page...
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JD  
Love the prologue.
So, Stephen King says no adverbs...I use adverbs all of the time. He also says that plan on 25% of your book getting cut when it gets published. So I'm making my book extra long so I won't cry when a chapter or two hit the proverbial cutting room floor. Maybe, someday, I'll actually get to the end so I can submit it to an actual publisher? Hmmmm
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Lana  
I read best selling novels full of adverbs. If the story is great, the readers won't give a crap about a few adverbs. The readers are what matter!They are the ones who buy our stories.
Stephen King is awesome, but he isn't the god of writing. Lots of people turned against adverbs. Adverbs are part of the language and have a use--to modify verbs. They shouldn't be abused, but used when the verb is too ambiguous to get a clear meaning/feeling across. That's my take on it, anyhow. *Wink*
Chapter 34 - Brenna is posted. It got kind of long-winded...too long-winded? Not sure...Anyway...

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