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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An old man gets on a train, and thinks about his life as the train moves along the tracks. He thinks about his wife and children as things move past him, reflecting upon things that had happened. However, things soon come to an end, and as it turns out, this is his last train ride of all.

Characters
I liked how the characters were described, both the current present ones, and those not there.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
"You're lucky we're in a church!" - Indeed!

Well, this certainly has an unexpected ending. You have a Pastor, whose church has been having a number of issues lately. Thus, he comes to the conclusion that Satan has somehow managed to enter the house of worship in order to cause folks to turn to sin, somehow. Thus, he tries to root Him out. Problem is, he tries a little too hard.

Characters
Oh, I have to laugh at the exchange between the Pastor and the cellphone woman.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of These 5 years  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute poem to read. It is the journey from a first meeting, to that of love. Initially meeting because of a mutual acquaintance, you have now become Boyfriend and Girlfriend (or whatever the situation is). Sometimes love can take us out of some very dark spaces, and off of dark paths. There is always something.

Thoughts
A very cute poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
There are plenty of reasons to have a team. Many games require them. After all, it's hard to play football without at least a dozen more players. These teams can forge some of the best friendships as a result, especially when everyone works together to achieve their goal. It can be a whole lot of fun as a result.

Thoughts
A nice item to read today.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is a Review you Requested. Enjoy!

You have a woman that's concerned about her daughter's online activities, and thus decided to snoop on her, only to find out that she's talking to a lot of strange men. As a result, mother has decided to teach her daughter a lesson by creating a fake account to, basically, catfish her daughter. Will this plan work, or will it backfire?

Characters
The characters seem interesting, though I do have to wonder.... how old is the daughter? That could make things more serious, or dangerous.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar, but in the "Chat" sections, might be a good idea to use some slang/ shorthand types of writing, so as to convey the "theme" of being in a chat room or whatever. Heck, toss in a few of the more commonly misspelled words, as it were, with the "correct" misspellings. *Laugh*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a quick bio of your work and the like. I am sad to hear about your experience on DeviantArt, although it seems that lately (like the past couple of years, if not longer) DA has been causing issues for folks whose work could be looked at as fetish-adjacent, either causing them to leave, if not outright banning them (which is ironic, given how that site grew because of such work). Likewise, I am sorry to hear about your treatment in other areas. That being said, you shouldn't have much trouble finding folks interested in your work here.

Thoughts
It is interesting to read about where you've come from.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Lucky Limericks  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Oh, this is worth a few chuckles. A young lass has a rude mouth, but hides it behind another language. Another fella proves that snakes were never in Ireland, thus making Saint Pat a fraud. Finally, some fool kissed a certain stone, only, it turns out, he wasn't ready for an Irish disease. Certainly a whole host of laughs.

Thoughts
Worth a very good number of chuckles for sure.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Jewel Thief  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is certainly worth a laugh, or three. Craziness adorns this poem, and I'll need to reread it, for it is rather odd, to say the least. After all, it's not often that one finds out their brother has stolen numerous things from many folks - items of which are hard for the victims to explain. Oh, what a laugh.

Thoughts
Perfect thing to read to get a laugh.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Victim of Changes  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is a painful poem to read, given the implications behind the words. Part of my wonders what happened on that fateful night, but it certainly doesn't look good. Likewise, seems that there was a child as a result, whose eyes remind the mother too much of the father. Makes one wonder what will happen next.

Thoughts
This is a somewhat painful, and spooky poem to read, once one knows what it's about.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Oh, talk about double entradas. Part of me is hoping that Dick is referring to the Knight's horse, least I'd advise raising the rating just a bit higher. If nothing else, this poem is certainly worth the chuckles it will bring to those who read it. Now, to go find a bush or two to hide my chuckles in.

Thoughts
This is certainly good for a laugh. HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I don't know much about Haikus, but I have owned a PlayStation 2, and when I was gaming, I did enjoy it. These days, I watch playthroughs of those games, trying to figure out if I could of beaten them. Some of them, I doubt that I could. Still, this does make me think of my childhood. Ah, good memories.

Thoughts
Makes me think of my childhood. I miss some of those days.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Well  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is a short, and spooky story. One night, a man goes crazy, and kills his family with an axe. He then throws the remains down into a well. He shows no remorse for his deeds, even after he's sentenced to the chair. But now there's a question, for it seems that he cursed his victims. Now one must stay away, especially on certain nights, when the sound of chopping is heard.

Characters
The characters seem to be very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A group of young mutants decide to fight crime in an unorthodox manner - by stealing the pants off of villains. However, they soon learn that making ideas is easy - trying to carry them out is the difficult part. Will they be able to acquire the pants from their first target, or will they fail miserably? Only time, and luck, will tell.

Characters
The characters look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Mutant Sucker  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles try to raise the next generation of mutants. However, some strange creature is going around and sucking the mutagen out of the various mutants, turning them into ordinary animals. Will they be able to stop the creature in time to save folks? Only time will tell.

Characters
The characters are interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Fairy Tale  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah, fantasy - fairies, pixies, and elves. Some of the things that folks like to write stories about. Creatures that like to hide and watch. Do they exist, or are they fictional? There's plenty that makes one wonder, as they traverse the realms of fantasy, alongside the paths of one's childhood.

Thoughts
A delightful set of poems to read, which make one think about their past.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Ah, a Christmas poem. There's something about that time of the year when you are a child. One Christmas I can remember was when I had to wake up in the middle of the night, for the usual reasons - and since my bedroom was upstairs, I had to go downstairs. My father heard me - guess he, and my mother, were wrapping/uncovering the hidden presents - and thus came over, told me to shut my eyes, and he picked me up, carried me to where I needed to go, and afterwards, took me back to the stairs, so that I wouldn't accidentally see Santa delivering presents. I miss those sorts of days.

Thoughts
Makes me think of Christmas.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of A Lost Escape  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a bit of a bittersweet poem. There are places that once filled us with joy - playgrounds, restaurants, even stores - places we'd go to all the time. However, as time passes, things change. Places close, or are torn down. Sometimes there's something different there. All these things are a part of change. Change can be hard, but, sometimes, change is good.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read. Makes one think of their childhood.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Lost Umbrella  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute story. You have a woman with a favorite yellow umbrella. One day though, the umbrella gets misplaced. She tries to look for it all along her route, but can't seem to find it. Will she be able to reunite with her mission prized possession? Only time will tell.

Characters
The characters look interesting. A very cute story for sure.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a poem that makes one think. The future is something that no one knows, and yet, one must prepare for. After all, one must think about tomorrow, to make what we do today worth while. So, one must do what they can today, to make sure that tomorrow is worthwhile. Worth the read for sure. I hope to see more.

Thoughts
An interesting poem to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The brutal  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A short item about how you tried to start/run a café/library filled with rare books. However, some older man came in, and believed that you were too young to be in charge. Sadly, there's always going to be some critic that believes that younger folks can't be in charge.

Personally, in that case, I would of hired a retired librarian, or grandmotherly/grandfatherly sort to act as a decoy manager - although, having them be an actual manager with a few younger servers/librarians doing tasks would help sell the illusion.

Characters and Thoughts
Well, things look interesting. Sorry you closed you café/library.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a short snippet of a story. While playing an indoor game of tennis, an important object gets broken. The one person wants to say nothing, but the other feels duty bound to tell the truth. Oh, the trouble that could happen as a result of such choices, that one must make.

Characters
Characters could use a bit more description.

Spelling and Grammar
Spelling and grammar look okay, although some space could be used between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Sometimes the price of freedom is high. The price being that of those who serve their country. There's sadness in the life lost, and yet there's the pride in knowing that they did what was necessary, so that we'd be free. This is the sort of thing that some folks need to think on a bit more.

Thoughts
This is a poem that makes one do more than a bit of thinking.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of My introduction  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is one way to introduce yourself. Little bit of a biography, little bit of poetry. I'm sure that plenty will be interested in knowing about your life, learning about who you are, and what you've done. I do hope that you'll enjoy your time on the site, and that you'll be here for many years to come - I know that I have enjoyed mine, and I've been here for quite the while.

Thoughts
An interesting piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of I am jobless  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Imagine loosing a job because someone overachieves something. There's plenty that could bring that sort of thing about. It could be because someone is over-qualified. It could be because the company got sold. It could be because of greed. There's so many ways that things could happen. It certainly makes one think about things.

Thoughts
An interesting poem, which makes one think.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute little chuckle. All I can say is, "Poor Bob - he's got it rough." All the things poor Bob goes through. Clearly, he's missing out on more than a few things, a lot of which would clearly help him out in life. In any case, worth a laugh, first thing in the morning.

Characters and Thoughts
I sure have to laugh at poor Bob. He can't catch a break.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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