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26 Public Reviews Given
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Review of Trapped  
Review by BettyB
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great work expressing the feelings of many. I have been there myself. Sometimes we have to make choices that we don't want to.
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Review of Letting Go  
Review by BettyB
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can relate to this poem. I have had a very hard time siting by watching my daughter grow up and making wrong descions. I know I can't live her life for her or tell her how to live so it is struggle for me.
You did a great job expressing you feelings here.
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Review of Apologies  
Review by BettyB
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great work with your expressing your regrets. Yes we make mistakes but it is good to make apoligies while we can. Yes Moms always forgive their children.
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Review of Remember Me Not  
Review by BettyB
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Great work good rhyming
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Review of Hurt  
Review by BettyB
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I am a survivor of domestic abuse and what you have written has been my thoughts also. You have expressed the feelings of many. Hope your words help others in that situation.
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Review of Friendships  
Review by BettyB
Rated: E | (3.0)
It is true that sometimes our friendships end this way but Thank God for the friendships that are forever true. Great work.
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Review of Untitled  
Review by BettyB
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is really good writing expressing what we all feel alot of the time.
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Review of My Wish For You  
Review by BettyB
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is such a wonderful writing, it should be the wish of us all.
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Review of CHRISTmas  
Review by BettyB
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great poem , you have expressed the true meaning of Christmas. Great work.
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Review of Sometimes  
Review by BettyB
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great writing!
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Review of Friends forever  
Review by BettyB
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is trully a beautiful writing of friendship.
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Review of Letting Dad Go  
Review by BettyB
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This reminded me of three and a half years ago when my own Daddy was in the hospital dying. It was a tough time and I felt all alone though I had some family with me. We just don't want to let our loved ones go. I still miss daddy also. I am glad that you have shared this. It helps us to know that we aren't the only ones to have to deal with this. Excellent writing!
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Review by BettyB
Rated: E | (4.5)
I know how you feel, I have a cat and he is like my baby, I don't know what I would do without him. You have expressed your feelings very well. Great write!
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Review by BettyB
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a very comforting poem. My Daddy went to heaven three years ago and I still miss him so much. That is why I write to express my deepest feeling instead of bottling them up. Great writing!
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Review by BettyB
Rated: E | (4.5)
I can really relate to this poem as I have been through divorce and know what it does to the children . Great work expressing this.
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Review of Sometimes  
Review by BettyB
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem very much. Good work!
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Review of short life  
Review by BettyB
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great poem about a sad subject.
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