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Review of The Fight  
Review by BigPapaDan
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Timothy, good work here. the wording is emotive and the flow is really nice. 4 1/2 stars.
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Review of Life  
Review by BigPapaDan
Rated: E | (4.0)
Life - a great title, descriptive and vibrant with imagery.

Punctuation would have been good, but, like all poetry, the breaks tend to lend their own.

All in all I would say this is a very good poem, and enjoyable to read.
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Review of Food in Writing  
Review by BigPapaDan
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Okay, now you are speaking to my heart and my stomach. I love to write and I love to cook... it's like Reese's, two great things that go great together. Well done.
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Review by BigPapaDan
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
As a newbie here, I am not at all sure of the format for this so I will just jump right in.

1. I like the piece. It reads very well and your descriptive representation of the area is nicely handled.

2. Don't stop writing; anyone who "needs to write" should never quit. You have a great grasp of imagery and that is going to take you a long way.

3. As a reader, I like the piece and think it would be a great background for a short or a novel. Work with it. As a writer, I have to admit a bit of envy, those kinds of settings tend to lend themselves very well to fiction.

Keep going... I will look forward to reading more. Dan
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Review of Rhythms  
Review by BigPapaDan
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very well done, nice flow to this; tidal and serene. I like this one a great deal.
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Review by BigPapaDan
Rated: E | (3.5)
Another really well done descriptive piece. I like the visual of the tree and the buds on the top, well written.
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