Always wanting to win, but figuring out the true solution is not really your option. And no matter what you try it always does seem to fail. But you can and will try again and again. Same with your poem you should keep writing more and more.
That was a fairly scaryish story. I was holding my breath and wondering what comes next. What is was the noise that is following her? Would it have killed me, her? It just seemed to go on, but then it just stopped making me stop breathing. Yep, I know very weird, but my boyfriend distracted me talking about our cat, Yep, as I. Said, Weird.!
That is so true. This is also, true. But, why is it that when we promise ourselves that we will always remember that or even just never forget this we seem to always remember that we told ourselves how important it is All of the time. And that is the answer.. Yep, that was the time. I think. Okay I have to rtemember I think that I forgot, well, This Time.
Very sad glad I didn't have to read it in a book, the pages would have been very wet. It jusy made me cry so. BUT, yes great plot wonderful reasons and reasoning. Just too sad that many too many people have some reasons like that. One day this that or any thing else like that will happen. Yeah but some day it will not be like that. Right? Heaven will be so great.
Very, very neat, but, what happens next? You've set an interesting site I'm just badly trying to figure out what might and/or might not be. Please write some more of this, please. Oh, and please don't make it like they do on television when they say that they will tell you on the next episode but that episode will finally happen long after you've already forgoten what it was that you were so wanting to know. In other words, please write more of it before the next decade. In other words, please write more of it soon. Thank you for your start. I'll read more of it later, or sooner, please. And, Thank you.
Great poem. It feels like all of the same thinks I had delt with before, but you have written it much better, more presis than I ever could. Thank you and I'm hoping that you will keep writing more, please.
Great idea to think about and pause and wonder how the men haven't realized how smart and wonderful women really are. That might just take a little longer for them. But, I know we will forgive and just keep on waiting . . . ?
And hoping. We do appreciate some of the stuff that they do, though.
Oh, and thank you for your writing, Please do writte some more for all, please.
Thank you! You've written a poem about one of the hardest topics. Everyone writes about love, but everyone also has quite a time trying to find a good way to try it. You really have foumd a great way. So, again , thank you; and write us some more, please.
Wow!!! That scared me! Still trying to figure out if the prisoner waa just the character of the story "The Prisoner" or if he really was an actual prisoner. ? Either way; that was/is a very good story Thank you. I can't wait until I read something more of yours. Please, Keep Writing, please!
Umbert speaks very well. His reality of personal courage and inteligence is surprisingly realistic. Very nice work. When can we read more?
Please continue to write!
A great story! Most of that fear and hesitation comes from time alone in an empty place, but later we see an innocent seeming man that simply needs a light from the lighter that you are already holding for that same purpose. Then come two more men, dressed in the same outfits.both watching you for some unknown purpose. Finally your train comes and just looking over to the person's paper next to you, you see the very happy relief that you did not spend any more time being near them.
This is very good! Try to write more of these stories, please.
Hello. Welcome to this very great place. It seems like a great place to let everyone read this 'very great' story. It made me think. Wonderful as that s. This place you've writen about is scary. I'm glad to have read it, but still I would never want to be there. :( Luckaly I just got to read it. Thank you. And
THANK YOU!!! Can't wait til I can read something of yours again, please. Yes, please keep writing!
That was such a wonderful story! I was just curious at first, but then as it got closer and closer to the end the fathers leg amputated his other illnesses and that huge bunch of other things that he had to deal with it just ended up that I had to grab about as many tissues as I could for all of the crying that I had to do. Okay, and a long answer short; I loved your story and hope that you could write some more, please. You don't have to make them so sad though, please. All in all Thank you. Please, do write more.
Wonderful, touching poem! I hope that your wife think likes it, too. Very nice bringing the deer from just a animal to love. Please, write more. I promise to read more.
Very Wonderful, almost creepy poem-ish. Thank you, but yes it is/was quite a bit scary. Still, I just have to read it again. I would never ever want to stop looking/start killing.
Very cool. Please, write more, please.
I wish my dog could read. He is a very great dog who doesn't quite know how good he has it, also doesn't know how good of a dog he is, and no amount of treats will convince him My dog, Bud, is a very great doggie! And, you really do write very well I'm still not too able to believe that you don't know that yet. I'm still trying to guess your age. 13 doesn't seem possible, but now-a-days kids are maturing younger and younger, so, you should have published some more of your writing.
Yes, again, you write very well.
Very good, edgy line that makes one think. Is that how I will be? Great questions for smart-ish readers of your works. What do you think? Will you write more of this type of things for us, please? I hope so, please.
Thank you.
You've given great a discription of your uncle! Very nice, much better than I can/have ever done (I'm too impatiatiant, I guess) but your words of discription are well thought out and nicely spread. I must say thank you for showing me a different way of using desciptions. So, thank you and please do write more.
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Everyone writes about love, but everyone also has quite a time trying to find a good way to try it. You really have foumd a great way. So, again , thank you; and write us some more, please.