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Review of Is This Thing On?  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This sounds like a man proposing to his future wife.
I like the rhyme scheme and you do a good job keeping the readers attention.
There are emotional tags and that's a good thing, as it causes the reader to become invested in the story as a whole.
Your writing is polished,
Your grammatical skills are evident.
Your pace is good and smooth, a decent flow brings it all into perspective.
Thanks for being with the WdC for so long and here's to many more years ahead.
Copenator out!
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Review of Run, Run, Run  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The truth shall set you free, Iris, and maybe your next poem should be the secret and just how it impacts your situation.
I like the flow of this piece. It's smooth, active, and emotionally charging.
As a runner I can identify with the running theme, so that's an emotional tag for me.
The pace is rapid, but the meaning is not lost in the whole running going on.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by the absence of grammatical snafu's.
No recommendations for improvement are needed and you are encouraged to write on in he WdC!
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Review of Why Me?  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Ah a good weekend had by some.
Your tale relates a lot of emotional moments that are creepy and funny along the way.
Were you grounded for a month? One wonders. I do think the beginning starts off a little slow, in fact I was about to move on but thinking twice about it here we are at the review.
I like the flow of this piece and it is enhanced by the absence of any major grammatical snafu's.
The pace is okay after the slow start and there is enough material to keep the readers attention from beginning to end.
Maybe reworking the first paragraph will help the slow start. Otherwise thank you for sharing on the WdC and you are encouraged to write on!
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Review of Red Prayers  
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Found your poem in Poetry Newsletter 6-27-19

I love the rhythm of it.
There is life flowing throughout the poem.
It's amazing to feel a connection in here.
The pace is steady and the structure is simple and easy to follow.
There appear to be no grammatical snafu's and that helps thing flow much better.
Thank you for sharing your prayer here in the WdC.

Write on!
Copenator out!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in Spiritual Newsletter 6-27-19.

Thank you for sharing the light of the Lord present in the heart of the believer.
The first person in this piece is awe inspiring. A visit with the Father in a few short lines.
The form and structure are poetic in nature.
The flow is so smooth, almost seamless one might say.
The pace is slow as the reader soaks up the message found here.
Grammatically speaking nary a jot nor tittle has gone awry, enhancing the natural flow of your piece.

Write on!
Copenator out!


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Review of Doubts  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in Spiritual Newsletter 6-27-19.

You can feel the emotional tug of war going on here.
It's palpable and impacts the readers emotions as well.
The flow is smooth and there are no grammatical hiccups along the way.
The pace is slow and that's a good thing because you have a lot to say in a compact form.
There is nothing this writer could suggest to improve your piece so you are encouraged to
Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Found your piece in Spiritual Newsletter 6-27-19.

I love the rhythm of this piece.
The rhyme scheme gives a gentle lilt to the piece that is just right.
It's a full story written in poetic form and tells of your journey through the day.
I feel peace as the dominant emotional factor here. Not sure why but I just know that's what I feel as I read through your piece.
The form and structure are consistent.
The flow is smooth a glass.
Grammatically you have a gem here.
Smooth and written with purpose.

Write on!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The Boston Marathon bombing was a despicable act of terrorism and in the midst of it all humanity banded together to express their resolve to continue on in spite of the hate and rage that festers within so many people groups.
I like the flow of this piece and can see that you are expressing your heart through these words.
The pace is smooth and grammatically speaking there are no stumbling blocks along the way.
Found your piece in Spiritual Newsletter 6-27-19, and it's awesome that someone found it so others might be able to read and review.
Write on!
Copenator out!


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Review of Mistaken  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I'm arachnophobic and yet the story intrigued me.
You tell a good tale here with emotional triggers scattered here and there.
The form is a well developed and the flow is enhanced by the absence of any grammatical errors.
The pace is slow at first but picks up the pace toward the end.
Spider-Simon/Simon-Spider is a truly freaky character and makes for a great opponent for Spider-Man.
Write on in the WdC!
Copenator out!


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for entry "6-16-2019" 
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Today I brought my wife home from the hospital.
She has a broken fibula and ankle.
Miracle that occurred was we were "given" a wheelchair we needed in order to be able to be discharged. She will be off her foot for a good while and the wheelchair would have cost a lot were it not for the one who gave it to us.

Hows things in your garden?
Haven't been able to view anything in awhile. Things are just so busy and life won't stop dumping on us. It's been a mix of good, bad, happy and sad the first 5 months of 2019.
Copenator out!


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Review of the fog  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
For such a short story it is jam packed with details, action, fear, and even wonder.
The flow is smooth and not forced.
The grammar is not a problem with the flow or the emotion that is felt by the reader.
There is a sense of acceptance in the end and a "future" that is promised to come for a family lost to the Principled Man.
Well done and keep up the good work.
Copenator out!


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for entry "1-7-2019" 
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hey Lockwood.
Your day was long.
My day was super long.
Have a great 1/8 and later on in the WdC.
Copenator out!


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Review of Hold On  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Tinker:
Congratulations on your honorable mention in Stormy's contest.
I like the flow of this piece.
There are no bumps in the road that can throw the readers concentration off, it's smooth and feels quite natural.
The form is easy on the eyes and well spaced.
The pace is just right.
The main emotion this reader feels is that of "caution", as a bad relationship has been had and this is from the other side, trying to move on.
Grammatically there are no blaring snafu's which helps the readers progression throughout the poem.
Overall I liked the poem and thankful to see the Scripture verse at the very end.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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for entry "The Gift of Peace" 
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You gave the concept of peace a thorough work out and in the end the reader is thankful for having found your piece.
As I read your piece, I could feel the peace you described in many of the scenarios you presented. That's imagery that elicits that emotional attachment every writer wants the reader to attain.
The form and structure are consistent.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by your excellent attention to the grammatical aspects of writing.
The pace is slow and rightly so, for there is much to digest and much to enjoy along the way.
Who could make suggestions for improvement in this piece? Not I, O'Toole, not I.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
As you know, I found your poem in Poetry Newsletter 11-29-17.

Knitting is becoming a lost art.
Glad to hear that someone is still keeping it alive.
Takes me back to the days we were "made" to hold our hands just so, to receive the "itchy" fabric that will soon become another little creation for one of the grands kids or the children.
The little glimpses of your world revealed in the stanzas of this rhyming poem is a treasure that I'm sure others will be blessed with in the future.
The form and structure are appropriate.
The Rhyming scheme lends a sense of rhythm and a pleasant flow to the piece.
The pace is slow and imagery peppered, keeping the attention of those who are blessed to read this piece.
There is no evidence of grammatical woes, and for that this writer thanks you.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Romantic love and the expression of it in word and deed is such a rarity in this day and age. This writer is glad to have found it in this piece. You are truly blessed to have found one who will love you for all time.
The emotional tags in this piece keeps the reader focused and involved.
The form, in my opinion, is a love letter written in stanzas. That is the best kind of poetry in motion.
The flow is smooth and the pace is slow as the reader just soaks in the wonder of a love that is so true and real.
Grammatically your piece is flawless, and with that being said, only one things remains:

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Lesson#3b  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Transitive, intransitive, linking.
It's Greek to me because it's been years studying grammar in this way.
So this reader want's to know; how did you score on lesson #3b?
Found this using the "read & review" button and really glad I did because it brings the mechanics of writing back into perspective.
I often wonder if the words I write make a difference or if the "reader" is mentally picking apart the grammar that makes it a mell of a hess.
Then I start reading and reviewing here in the WdC, and the jot's and tittle's just don't seem that important. It's the heart of the matter and that is still why I read, write, and review here and in the real world where peoples opinions of places and events matter to others.
All this to say thanks for your passion and desire to carry the torch of writing to the next level. Willing to learn more about the ins and outs of grammar, so you can craft the best piece of writing you can.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Aokigahara  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Read it! Your blurb did say.
So read it, I certainly did.
A sea if trees did greet this readers senses.
The tale of survival in this place of lava and rock is telling.
The tale of suicides that occur there; found in Wikipedia; is saddening.
The flow is smooth, enhanced by your pristine grammatically offering.
The pace cannot be anything other than slow, for your scenes take the reader on an adventure that is awesome and at times saddening.
Overall this reader is blessed by your "just read it!", because otherwise he would have missed a gem in the middle of your life's works.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Prayermantis  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
How cool is that?
The Praying Mantis is everywhere, it would seem.
Kinda like the lizard found in palaces, on the wall, and even in the home of Elvis Presley; God rest his soul.

Your rhyming scheme creates a flow that is so easy on the eye and on the readers mind.
The imagery transports the reader into your scene, and he/she can feel the presence of the Mantis all around.
The pace is slow as the reader soaks in you delightful poem.
The attention to detail you display is clear and appreciated by the reader.
Not a jot nor tittle needs to be changed in this piece.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Barfly  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A true love found in a dive diner.
Nothing is more romantic than that.
Appearing to be a loner,
she is really looking for that right one.
Your piece has that emotional feel of real life and it's enough to keep the readers attention.
Structure is consistent,
Flow is smooth.
Pace is not a race, as the reader is privy to a romantic interlude that becomes more.
In the end the reader feels thankful that the time was taken to read this piece, as human life is revealed and drawn to a happy ending.

Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of And  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the way you use a word that is so common; and gave it such a significant meaning.
I like the structure of it and the fact that you carry that structure throughout the piece. That's imagery.
It is an intimate poem between you and your loved one.
The heart of the matter is clearly visible.
Rhyming is adequate and keeps the flow smooth and easy to follow along.
The pace is slow, as the reader realizes this piece is more significant that the small one word "title".
Grammatically, one has no concerns to speak of, therefore only one thing remains to be said:

Write on!
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Review of On Being Blue  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fyn:
Thank you for your item On Being Blue.

My favorite color is blue.
Often I aspire for the blue case too.
In the meantime I'll settle for,
Reading, writing, and reviewing more and more.

One day I will retire,
And then more time I can devote to the WdC.
Then the world will be better,
As I read, write, and review 5 times now and more in the future.
Flowing like a smooth rock skimming across the water,
Your item gives the reader a clear picture of your heart.
Imagery found within blows the reader out of the water as they can see you seek to serve other writers.
You did earn the blue case, and this writer is thankful you are so open and not closed off in the bowels of the WdC.
The pace is slow and detail filled, and the reader is content to follow along as you lead.
Grammatically; as always; you put on a clinic and nary a jot nor tittle can be found misbehaving.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Duke: this poem is no fluke.
You thought it out and gave it a try.
Your stanzas are self contained,
and yet they add to the story from line-to-line.

Your love of the sea,
Is plain to see.
You serenade it here,
And others to it you endear.

That's the imagery that you bring to the table,
Creating a rhyming flow that is oh so stable.
At a pace that is not a race,
Nor is it boring because you keep it in our face.

There is one brief stumbling block in line number six,
where you use the word "befriend", it seems out of context. Is it possible you were going for another image that escapes this writer's senses? Or is there something that needs to be done in this stanza overall?


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Jay:

Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 06/28/17

Wow, what can I say.
Your piece is like a play.
The form complies with the criteria, for your material manifestation of what feels like a sense of peace in the end.
There is rhyming that lends good timing.
There is flowing that keeps the heart glowing.
There is an emotional feeling of peace in the midst of toils and foibles.
There is a pace that is not a race.
And there is a grammatical clinic on display for all to see.
Write on!
Copenator out!
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Review of Ugly Like Rain  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Daniel:
Welcome to the WdC!
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Found your item in the Spiritual Newsletter 06/28/17

From the ugly to the beautiful, the circle is complete. There is a sense of cleansing and completion here as one takes the journey of life.
Your prosaic poem has a rhythm to it that makes the reader feel trapped and then hopeful and then at last free. That's emotional strings being tugged upon by your words.
The flow is smooth and enhanced by your pristine grammatical offering.
The pace is slow as the senses absorb the wondrous transformation that is taking place. Almost like a butterfly emerging from it's cocoon, ready to fulfill it's mission.
Overall this made me feel that there is hope and to continue on, even in the midst of the trials that seem to be so insurmountable.

Write on!
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