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Review by Montovani
Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice piece of writing. Something I can relate to. The ritual of filling up the pillbox for the week and keeping track of my meds is meditative for me. Even if it only takes a few minutes, those minutes are very focused and deliberate. Nothing distracts me during that process. It also forces me to think a bit more of the upcoming week if I am low on something and will have to make a trip to the pharmacy. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by Montovani
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great piece. I have recently started writing in this format as well. Not necessarily an easy task. I like the appearance of the reveerse format you used as well.
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Review by Montovani
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Your rhyme scheme is excellent. A rather dark piece that is carried throughout. Very nice. Write on!
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Review of Look at Him Stand  
Review by Montovani
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice piece. Good rhyme scheme and format. Write on!
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Review of Words  
Review by Montovani
Rated: E | (5.0)
4th stanza second line I think the word should be nothing. Very nice work.
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Review of Piece  
Review by Montovani
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think you are missing the word "be" in the second stanza fourth line. Not totally sure on that though.
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