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Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Bring My Purpose To Light"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This is a beautifully written piece, the title drew me in and the content kept me reading, there was a beautiful flow from start to finish, great job my friend.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The poem flowed extremely smoothly and I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this write, I found beautiful imagery in this write.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors and I found the grammar to also be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
No suggestions for this write, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem and it was an absolute pleasure to read, I shall definitely be giving this piece a big thumbs up and five shiny stars, take care, Lady Elf

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Silent Valentine  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Silent Valentine"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Wow, what a lovely poem my friend, the title drew me in and the content definitely kept me reading, This write was an absolute pleasure to read, this poem oozed emotion, this shall definitely be getting a big thumbs up and five shiny stars.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The rhythm and flow of the poem were faultless and the rhyming words were absolutely spot on my friend.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this write, your chosen words helped to bring the poem to life, Awesome

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors and found the grammar to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
This author delivered a beautifully written piece here and I must say, it was a true delight. I thank you for sharing this piece with us at WDC, take care, Lady Elf.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Winter Series  
Review by Lady Elf
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Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Winter Series"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Wow, I loved this sweet little poem, your word choice helped to bring the poem to life, beautifully done, my favourite stanza being,

The ancient tree stands
Golden fruit in abundance
Bird's joy in winter

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The flow of the poem was extremely smooth and I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this write, your word choice gave beautiful imagery to the piece.Great Job

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:The author has done a fine job with this write, the title drew me in and the content kept me reading, a lovely job my friend, this shall definitely be getting a big thumbs up and five shiny stars. Take care Lady Elf

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of How I long  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem."How I Long"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This is a beautifully written poem, the title drew me in and the content kept me reading, your chosen word choice helped to bring the poem to life, lovely job my friend.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The piece flowed extremly well and I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this piece, my favourite being,

A silver stream glosses
My vision of thee
For as I rest here
Writing these words
I dream of your mind
A poem in thy eyes

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors and the grammar was also fine.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
Overall the author has done a fine job with this write, beautifully worded and I thoroughly enjoyed the read, I thank you for sharing this write with us at WDC, it was an absolute gem, this will definitely be getting a big thumbs up and five shiny stars. Take care Lady Elf.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of March  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "March"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Well isn't it funny how different months seem to be bad luck for people, for you, it's March and me it's December, deaths in the family, everything going wrong, and because of all the payout, I don't recover till March lol, this is a neat written poem with good word choice which helped to bring the poem to life.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The poem flowed extremely well and I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
I found good imagery in this small piece, the author has done a great job describing how the month of March affects her.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors and I found the grammar to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
This is a nicely written poem about the month of March, showing good imagery with the author's word choice, I thank you for sharing this piece with us here at WDC, Take care Lady Elf.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "We Met For A Reason"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Well, my friend, this is a beautiful write, your chosen words helped to bring the poem to life, you are very right, everything happens for a reason, spot on, so glad I came across this piece tonight, this shall definitely be getting a big thumbs up and five shiny stars.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
This poem flowed extremly well and I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
I found great imagery in this write, you have done a lovely job with this write.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors and I found the grammar to be bang on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
This piece was a pleasure to read and I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish, great job my friend, I thank you for sharing this poem with us here at WDC, take care Lady Elf.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Sunlight Dances  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Sunlight Dances"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Awesome my friend, what a beautifully written piece, your word choice was absolutely spot on, excellent flow and beautiful rhyming words, just a pleasure to read, This piece oozed quality from start to finish.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
This poem flowed extremely well and I encountered no distractions whilst reading, great job.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was definitely by far the best thing about this write, your chosen word choice helped to bring this poem to life, what a breath of fresh air.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors in this write and I found the grammar to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
A pleasure to read, this author knows exactly what the reader wants, I have no suggestions for this write, Spot On my friend, Spot on.
If there were more than five stars, this poem would definitely be getting higher, I thank you for sharing this poem with us at WDC, take care, Lady Elf.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Somewhere Else  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Somewhere Else"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This piece is absolutely awesome my friend, what a fantastic job you have done with this, your chosen word choice helped to bring the poem to life, my favourite piece being,

Here my love is a picture of you.
There are your eyes, shy and needle-sharp,
And your imperfect smile; a beautiful imitation.
But there you end, your mind rendered to paper.
So far away is that beautiful mind
That I cherish above all others,
That orchestrates all beautiful things that are you;
Your longing embrace that betrays your shyness,
Your words which quicker than the crack of a rifle
Could scythe me, and as quickly pull me
To the very summit of myself,
From where I could watch the world pass
In blissful silence.

Absolutely Beautiful

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
This poem flowed extremly well and I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
Well, this was by far the best thing about this write, imagery was fantastic

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
This author needs no suggestions for this write, awesome piece, it was an absolute pleasure to read, I thank you for sharing this poem with us at WDC, take care, Lady Elf

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Winter  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Winter"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Well my friend, I really enjoyed this poem, it oozes beautiful word choice which helps to bring this poem to life, even though this poem describes winter, it still manages to give me that warm feeling of Christmas, great job, this shall definitely be getting a big thumbs up and five shiny stars.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
This poem flowed extremely well and I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
Well, this is by far the best thing about this write, the word choice absolutely brought this piece to life.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors and I found the grammar to be spot on

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
This author has done a wonderful job with this write, no suggestions my friend, I thank you for sharing this poem with us at WDC, Take care, Lady Elf

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Goodbye My Love  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Goodbye My Love"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Well my friend, you have done a great job with this lovely write, your word choice was absolutely spot on, I enjoyed the read from start to finish, this piece shall definitely be getting a big thumbs up and five shiny stars.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
This poem flowed extremely well and I encountered no distractions whilst reading, great job my friend.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this write, your chosen word choice helped to bring this poem to life.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors and I found the grammar to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
This author has done a fantastic job with this write, spot on word choice and excellent flow, it was an absolute pleasure to read, I thank you for sharing this poem with us at WDC, take care Lady Elf

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Death at Sea  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Death at Sea"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Well my friend. this poem is absolutely captivating, I thoroughly enjoyed from start to finish, to be honest when I saw the length of this piece, I wondered if it would hold me to the end, but definitely well done you, this poem really took me on a journey, your chosen word choice was spot on, this poem shall definitely be getting a big thumbs up and five shiny stars, great job.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The flow of this write is fantastic.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this write, your word choice helped to bring this poem to life.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors and I also found the grammar to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
This author needs no suggestions for this poem, this was an absolute pleasure to read and I thank you for sharing this poem with us here at WDC, take care Lady Elf.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Solemn vow  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Solemn Vow"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This is a sweet little piece, nice flow and good imagery, I liked the way your chosen words helped to bring the poem to life.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
I found the flow of this piece smooth and I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
Nice imagery my friend, I liked your chosen words.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
A nice write with good word choice, you have done a good job, I thank you for sharing this poem with us at WDC, take care Lady Elf.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of The Cloak of Time  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "The Cloak of Time"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Hello, Prosperous Snow, Lady Elf here dropping you a review on your poem, so glad I found this little gem on the read&review page, what an absolute treat, this piece is so beautifully written with great word choice, my favourite stanza being the last,

At the gate,
I pause to watch moonrise
above a distant snow capped peak
then I step through the gate
leaving
a portrait of myself
in the minds
of those I left behind.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
I found the poem to flow beautifully from start to finish, I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this delightful write, your word choice helped to bring the poem to life, great job my friend.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors and I found the grammar to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
No suggestions for this piece, it was an absolute pleasure to read, I enjoyed it very much. This poem shall definitely be getting the five stars that it deserves, I thank you for sharing this with us here at WDC. Take care Lady Elf

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Midnight Majic from a Porch Swing"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This piece is absolutely spot on, beautifully written and your chosen word choice helped to bring the poem to life, you have done a great job with this write, you shall definitely be getting a big thumbs up my friend, an absolute pleasure to read.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
Well, this piece flowed so well it sang to me, I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
I found great imagery in this write, you managed to paint a beautiful picture with your words, this whole poem was a favourite, but if I have to choose the best part, it would have to be the last stanza,

I rose with the long ago giggles
and rode on the night's sweet breath
carrying me on a journey among gypsy fireflies.
Sounds from their silent flutes,
only I could hear, peacefully pierced my soul
to accompany my resounding heartbeat.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors and I found the grammar to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
This author needs absolutely no suggestion for this write, It was a pleasure to read, thank you for sharing your poem with us here at WDC. Take care Lady Elf

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Loving embrace  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Loving Embrace"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Well, what a great job you have done here my friend, your chosen words were absolutely spot on, this piece shall definitely be getting a big thumbs up and five shiny stars.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
This poem flowed extremly well and I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this write, your chosen words helped to bring the poem to life.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
This author has done a beautiful job in such a short piece, an absolute pleasure to read, I must thank you for sharing your write with us here at WDC. Take care Lady Elf



Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "This Must Be My Exit"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Absolutely spot on my friend, I must say I can never fault your beautiful poetry, this piece had a lovely flow to it and I found the rhyming words to be bang on, this piece shall definitely be getting a big thumbs up from me and five shiny stars, great job.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The poem flowed extremely well and I found no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
You paint a fantastic picture with words in every piece and this poem was also beautifully worded, this author always seems to take his readers on a journey, well done my friend, like I said before,a true master of poetry.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors and I found the grammar to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
This author needs no suggestions for any of his poetry, he always does a fantastic job of painting the most fabulous pictures with his word choice.I thank you for sharing your poem with us here at WDC and it was an absolute pleasure to read.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "See You in the Morning!"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Well, what a beautiful poem this is my friend, your word choice was absolutely spot on, a very nice emotional piece of the terrible loss of a mother, truly a pleasure to read, this shall definitely be getting five shiny stars.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The poem flowed extremely well and I encountered no distractions whilst reading, every line and each stanza flowed beautifully into the next, great job.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
I found great imagery in this write, you did fantastic job.


*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors and I found the grammar to be bang on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
Absolutely no suggestions for this great write, the author has done an excellent job with this poem, I thank you for sharing this little gem with us at WDC,Take care Lady Elf.



Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Melting Fire  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "Melting Fire"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Well, my friend, this was a fantastic write, beautiful word choice, the title drew me in and the content kept me reading, vivid word choice helped to bring this poem to life, great job, this will definitely be getting a thumbs up and five shiny stars, it was an absolute pleasure to read.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The poem flowed extremly well and I encuntered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this piece, the author managed to take take the reader on a journey.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors and I found the grammar to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
Great job with this write, fantastic word choice, I thank you for sharing this poem with us at WDC.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of The Light  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem. "The Light"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Wow! loved this little piece, flowed extremely well, no bumps on the way, excellent job my friend, my favourite being the second stanza,

My eyes are now wide open,
I know just who you are.
Too long I refused to see,
Your love my shining star.

Absolutely beautiful, this shall definitely be getting five shiny stars and a big thumbs up from me.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
This piece flowed beautifully and I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about your poem, your chosen word choice helped to bring the write to life, it was an absolute pleasure to read.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors and I also found the grammar to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
The only suggestion would be, I would like to read more of these lovely poems from you, the author has done an excellent job of showing love through words.I thank you for sharing this great little poem with us here at WDC.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of Green  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem."Green"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Yes, I love this little piece, I absolutely agree, only a keen gardener knows how quick those wretched little sods come back overnight, usually I have lovely vegetables growing, looking great, then out I go with a torch at night to see slugs everywhere, A great poem, most probably written by a keen gardener lol.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
Rhythm and rhyme were absolutely spot on in this poem, I couldn't fault it, I must say it reminded me of another piece I reviewed a while back about garden leaves, raking them away, only to be there again in the morning.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this write, your chosen words helped to bring the poem to life.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors and I found the grammar to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
This is a beautifully written piece, the author has done a fantastic job with this poem, This will definitely be getting a big thumbs up from me and five shiny stars. An absolute pleasure to read my friend and I thank you for sharing this write with us here at WDC.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of School Days  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem."School Days"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Well, my friend, I thoroughly enjoyed this powerful piece, A small write with a strong meaning, you have managed to do a great job with this, your word choice made your poem have an impact, In the few lines, I believed every word.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
A very smooth piece to read. Great job.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
The imagery was spot on here, the strong word choice was very believable and takes the reader aback.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
I encountered no distractions whilst reading this vivid little write and found there to be no spelling issues either.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
No suggestions for this piece, just I would like to see more pieces from you, great job my friend, it was an absolute pleasure to read, I thank you for sharing this write with us here at WDC.This definitely gets a thumbs up from me and five shiny stars.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem."The Frightful Little Dragon"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This is a fantastic piece with great word choice that helped to bring the poem to life, I found it to be a good flowing write with no distractions.This has a big thumbs up from me and five shiny stars. An absolute pleasure to read.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The rhythm of the poem was smooth and I encountered no problems whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this write, colourful and vivid words helped bring the poem to life, great job my friend.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see I spotted no errors.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
The author has done a fantastic job with this poem, I found it to be worded correctly and a fun and colourful little piece. I thank you for sharing this well-written poem with us here at WDC, Overall, this was a great poem.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review of The Anger Within  
Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem."The Anger Within"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This is a beautifully written piece, strong vivid words, and I like that, I felt the pain in this write, your word choice was spot on my friend, you have shown anger and pain through your words, so a big thumbs up from me.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
This poem flowed extremly well and I encountered no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This was by far the best thing about this piece, vivid and strong word choice helped the reader to feel the pain and anger within this person. Great job my friend

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
No suggestions for this poem, the author has done a fabulous job on this write, I thoroughly enjoyed this powerful poem, a big thumbs up and five shiny stars. I thank you for sharing this poem with us at WDC. Take care and go safe my friend.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem."The Geese and the Willow"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
This is such a beautiful poem, you have managed to paint a picture with your words, that helped to bring your poem to life, You title drew me in and the content kept me reading, Overall a fantastic piece my friend.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
The poem flowed extremly well and I encountere no distractions whilst reading.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
This I must say was by far the best thing about the write, your word choice was spot on.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
As far as I could see, I spotted no errors and I found the grammar to be spot on.

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
A beautifully worded poem with colour, beauty and an author with a whole lot of talent, I thank you for sharing this wonderful piece and it shall definitely be getting a big thumbs up from me and five shiny stars.A pleasure to read my friend.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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Review by Lady Elf
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
*ButterflyB* Hello My Friend, *ButterflyV*

*DragonflyR* Lady Elf *DragonflyB* here from the WDC Power Reviewers Group dropping you a review on your poem."What Cats Do At Night"

*Shamrock* Firstly the title was spot on for the content of this write.*Shamrock*

*StarfishB* Overall Impression/Emotional Impact:
Absolutely Awesome my friend, this was beautifully written, you painted such a lovely picture with your words that helped bring this poem to life, great job, I must say your poems are spot on. Scones and Jam and sandwiches of cucumber and ham, lucky little beggars If they are drinking tea in under the tree, it has to be Earl Grey.

*StarfishB* Rhyme and Meter:
All spot on in this section my friend.

*StarfishB* Imagery:
Well, this was by far the best thing about this poem, excellent imagery.

*StarfishB* Grammar, Spelling and Mechanics:
To be honest, I was so into the story I didn't check, let me check now..............Yep spot on, purfectttttttttttttttttttttttttttt

*StarfishB* Suggestions:
Well, to be honest, by my comments this author managed to knock it on the head sweet my friend, absolutely sweet.I thank you for sharing this wonderful write with us here at WDC, it was a pleasure to read.

Thank you for sharing your poem. Write On! *Pencil* *CountryUK* Lady Elf *CountryUK*

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