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Review of Come Back, Baby!  
Review by Sarder
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
zeal to get back to lover by panitent or realizations about value of love and its power and essentiality. Very good poem. Keep going..
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Review of My Mind's Place  
Review by Sarder
Rated: E | (3.5)
Abrief introduction one's mind place or level, good writing, but should be more elaborate to integrate your poem perfect. Yet godd writing.
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Review of Six Weeks to Live  
Review by Sarder
Rated: E | (3.5)
A good negative emotional feelings for a terminally ill or for declared individial are expressed by the writer. Within four stanzas not sufficient but a very good writing. Keep it up.
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Review by Sarder
Rated: E | (3.5)
Ofcourse, in this earth's all the human beigns want to live for a long time doing everthing with their enormous miseries and hard struggle for hope and hope comes from or originated from love, so then two line from one of my poem named: Loving,
Love is heavenly, feelings so lovely.
It has many forms, with their different norms.

So, I can feel your ......

very nice romantic poem.
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Review of A Father's Love  
Review by Sarder
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Expose of feelings differ from man to man, due to their different personality traits. There are some father like your father, they are very emotional but their exposing to show something apparently, they never like it. Your poetry expresses that, your father love you much more than you think. nice writing.

Could you please, review my writing, I will be happy if you value my request. Thank you.
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Review by Sarder
Rated: E | (4.0)
nice and very useful.
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Review of War and Peace  
Review by Sarder
Rated: E | (3.5)
I accord with you about present constant war or tension, towards, lacking of rapport, peace, with a hope to shore of peace etc. Good writing and should be more expand. But a tight and powerful writing.
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Review of What do you see?  
Review by Sarder
Rated: E | (3.5)
Short but depth enough. Rhyming or rhythmic style of any poem or poetry by complying meaning of the item is a great skill, because a very good writer can't do it consistently. You complied everything want to mean. Ilove this short piece.
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Review of Michelle  
Review by Sarder
Rated: E | (4.0)
Your great achievement of this writing make successful the foloowing lines,
"Who would like to see good movies & random acts of kindness, Jesus
A resident of 8o acres of God's nature
Estes.
Being a teacher of 3000+ can not be a cruel. A small piece of poetry but extensive thoughts and says,
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Review of PURE WATER  
Review by Sarder
Rated: E | (3.5)
As a spiritual thoughts. Yes faith and trust abot pure water, I think the best practice to stronger our moral courage.
Its a philosophical poem writing. Should be more say needs to add to fulfil thiis writing. Wel done.
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Review by Sarder
Rated: E | (4.0)
Unique, 6 stanza and 12 lines but enormous depthness of expression.
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Review by Sarder
Rated: E | (3.5)
Nice example for sufferers from various problems, and valuable suggestions are great done.
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Review of Dragon Shower  
Review by Sarder
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
A good writing about campfire experienced. Little but weightful.
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Review by Sarder
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nice poetry about questioning the human race. A powerful writing and beyond one's expectation, please keep it up in a full swing.

N. Sarder
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Review by Sarder
Rated: E | (3.5)
Eight line and two stanza very brief but very depth meaning. A comprehensive writing. Well done.
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Review of Angel  
Review by Sarder
Rated: E | (3.0)
Good but should be more good, by using some metaphor. Keep writing..
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Review of Being Naked  
Review by Sarder
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Excellent imagination and feelings.
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