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Review by trcameron
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Outstanding poem and I love the ryhthm and rhyming that keeps the story flowing. I also can relate to the storyline because I was an Airman in Iraq during Desert Storm. You have a very keen knack for putting together a story that just flows off the tongue when reading and also gets the emotion of the mind working.
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Review by trcameron
Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautiful poem! There's a story within each verse that ends with a wonderful set of three words. Great reading.
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Review of Just The Same  
Review by trcameron
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am really impressed with this poem. There is a very good story line that draws you in emotionally. The rhythm and rhyming were outstanding and there's humor added in. You are definitely going in my favorite author area, patiently waiting for the next poem. I don't have many gift points but that poem deserves more than I gave. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!!!
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Review of Don't Blame Me  
Review by trcameron
Rated: E | (4.5)
A GOOD poem with a story line that kept together all the way through. I didn't check your porfolio yet but with the use of the word "me" consistently, I say you're maybe from the islands or England? I really enjoyed the rhyming throughout and I'm going directly to your porfolio to read more. Thank you.
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Review by trcameron
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can't help but continue to read your poems/stories, but I will say that this is my favorite one yet.

You took the time to make a rhyme that has a story to tell
Gather them all and do not stall, to author a book that will sell

WRITE IT, THEY WILL READ!!
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Review of Good Intentions  
Review by trcameron
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Another good poem with a great story. I can relate to all that is said about resolutions as I know we all can. The only area that made me read twice was the 3 verses you used that ended with Times Square. I really enjoy your poems.
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Review of Untitled  
Review by trcameron
Rated: E | (3.0)
Now I really like that one. Not much more to say but good....really good!!!!!
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Review of Rudiments  
Review by trcameron
Rated: E | (3.0)
A nice poem, but I had to read it twice because I was reading it in a rhythm and had to go back a few times. On some of the versus, the 2nd line ended short. I'm not sure if I was able to explain this properly. All-n-all, the poem had a story and did rhyme well.
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