This is my 4th assignment for my Comma Kazi class. |
Rule #1- Lucifer Webster is the sheriff, and his wife, Cydia, is the mayor of Deacon, Mississippi. Rule# 2- After Johnny and Sally Grayson returned from the party, she was four sheets to the wind. Rule #3a- Ludia Webster is such a low-down, batty demon faerie. Rule# 3b - Jesse Gray is a tall smart werewolf for her age. Rule# 4a- Maddie's nanny Marta makes great fried human skins. Rule# 4b-Ludia's grandmother, Marigold, was exiled from Deacon because she smelled like sulfur. Rule# 4c- Marion Webster has a garden that she tends to everyday. Rule# 5- Ludia's friends are Jackie Grayson, Maddie Hart, and Kathy March. Rule# 6a- After eight tonight, Cydia will go dancing at the Blue Note. Rule# 6b- Laveil Gray is a wonderful werewolf saving humans all the time. Rule# 7- Beginning Sentence: June Grayson is in a plural marriage. Transitional Sentence: However, she often wishes that she didn't have to share her husband with two other women. Rule #8- "Duh, I told you so!" Ludia smacked Jesse on her head. Rule #9- Cydia gave the man a willow weed joint after he arrived in town. Rule# 10a- One day, Judia Webster will run away with Kenny Cochran. Rule# 10b- Susie St. Ives never understood why Ludia quickly turned on her. Rule# 11- Samdy resolved not to give up on his parents, his love stronger than ever. Rule# 12- Mildred Everhart too liked the stranger pie. Rule# 13- Mildred and Winifred Everhart had an affair with Dylan Walsh. Rule# 14- The most important aspect of living in Deacon is to become a supernatual being since humans become slaves. Rule# 15- Comma Splice: Cydia ran after Marion, She shot Marion with the beams from her eyes. Correction: Cydia ran after Marion. She shot Marion with the beams from her eyes. |