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Rated: ASR · Other · Tragedy · #1944385
a poem about someone moving on, breaking up
I say to you my love
Why did you leave me here?
Is there any hope for us?
This not knowing kills

Love is not something given
Above the world clouds gather
You brought the rain
Do you know how?

Now I guess all is lost.
How can I believe you?
When did you fall away?
Then did you ever love me?

I guess not
Why continue on?
Leave me now
Grieve me no longer.

Darkness falls on me
Hearken unto me cry.
Fly away into oblivion
Lie beneath the stars.

Be silent for me.
See what I see.
Hide your lying eye
Ride into the night.

Goodbye my love
Should we ever meet again,
I will run
Die away sad memory

The format of this poem is hidden rhyme scheme (rather than a rhyme scheme easily noticeable because of where it is located).  Most of my poems have a rhyme scheme where the rhyme is located at the end of each line.  This one is a reverse of one of the typical rhyme schemes I use.  Rather than aabb at end it is located in the beginning.  Of course, it's not so easily noticeable.
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