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Draft- Chapter 1 He's Got A Crush-

17 September 2014

09:16

Surrounded by the jungle was the tree. A tree known as the Miona Arbor. Unknown was the man who named it or where he originated yet a hint of an ancient language could be traced within the cognomen of the tree. Over a thousand meters above the ground, the peak laid, creamy clouds clocking its very existence. Spiraling from the brown fortress like trunk , was an unimaginable number of twirling branches that swayed as if they pushed the wind, tapping on its fellow twinkling timber. Branches varied in size , some connected to the very permitted of the jungle and some were less than a foot long. The lush green forest would seem dull to any man , when he glances upon a single luxurious leaf of Miona Arbor. Even the smallest leaves of the Miona Arbor forged a radiant rainbow of green, blasting it into the sky. The leaves that clothed the sky , spawned confection , and when the wind dared to batter against the mighty tree it would rain fruit.

One might imagine then that comely creatures of all types will inhabit this natural landmark , but on this day there was only one. At the end of a small branch , stood a member of the Sciuridae family. Its bushy, tail curled above its minute head and from its mouth escaped a small snigger.

Moist silt and smooth loess squelched under the man's boots. Gold sunlight bathed the destructive machine as he inspected it for any damage. Its appearance was of a normal digger but where the claw would lay , were multiple chainsaw each the size of a full grown man. For several days he hadn’t inspected his tool and he knew his technician wouldn’t take it lightly. Visually he saw a tooth missing on the chainsaw and three others were half shattered. From his belt he drew out a black device and noted the damage as well as unusual characteristics. He jogged towards the car eager to get home.

The bulky, black land rover’s door wouldn’t budge but he pulled with all his might , playing tug of war with the automobile. The door gave and swung open. Jumping inside he slammed the door behind. Searching his pockets for the key, he was not able to discover it.

Dam, left it inside.” The man groaned sheepishly.

He opened the door but it wouldn’t budge. Another attempt the man made, but then realized it was locked. He goofed on how it locked for short minutes. He felt fatigued after wrestling with the door several times. Sweat slipped across his sore arms.

I need to get home!”

Upon the bonnet laid a small creature. Its bushy tail curled upon its minute head and the sun transformed its brown fur into fine orange streaks. Between his forepaws was the key to the car. Rather than squealing the way a squirrel ought to, it let out a low pitched growl that sent shattering shivers crawling up the man's spine.

Squirrel.

Rolling his eyes in search of an escape, he saw within the mirror a colossal grey giant that ran with unbelievable speed. Glistening white tusks, at least four foot in length, tore through the rear of the car. The bulky bicuspid ran from the boot and through back seat. With no effort what so ever, the enormous elephant tore the boot and backseat , tossing it to the machine with irreplaceable accuracy. It crushed the roof of the digger like machine and fell into the seat. The elephant slowly reversed and again ran with ineffable, brisk acceleration and surged around a meter in the air and plummeted upon the remains of the car trampling it, crushing it ,the melting metal sinking to the earth's core.

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1. Alliteration

2. Simile

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3. Personification

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4. Alliteration

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5. Alliteration

6. Alliteration

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7. Alliteration

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8.Metaphor

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10. Alliteration

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11.Repitition

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12.Aliteration

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13. Personification

14. Alliteration

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15.Aliteration

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