To Cliche or Not to Cliche

Lesson 3 Assignment


Write out five (or as many as you can remember) of the most over-used clichés you've ever read.

1. She gasped as he sucked one of her pink, plump, buds into his hot wet mouth.
2. He thrust his into her soft wet center.
3. Her core trembled at his touch
4. He built her on waves of pleasure until she crested and fell over the edge.
5. She took him in her mouth.

Then, write down three of your favorite phrases--ones that you might use regularly in your stories. Would you consider them clichés?

1. He circled her clitoris with the tips of his fingers.
2. She slid her hot wet mouth over the crown of his cock, and down the length of his hard rigid shaft.
3. He thrust deep inside her clenching opening and released his hot, thick, cum inside her.