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Rated: E · Lyrics · Music · #2061490
Kind of a tragic love song. Please, review this. I need criticism.
Troubled Paradise

(Verse 1)
We're just two broken souls,
We have nowhere to go.
I was a mess for years,
But with you I grow.

I'll always ignore your emotional scar,
I'll always free your inner star.

(Chorus)
Two freedom lovers in the light of the moon,
We probably go together like snow in June.
But we both are too crazy for anyone else,
We help each other escape our own personal hells.
We're always there when one of us cries,
Living together in a troubled paradise.

(Verse 2)
You're just another voice in my head,
You're just another reason to fight.
I'm lost without your grace,
You're my guiding light.

I can't live without your kiss,
I can't survive without your bliss.

(Chorus)
Two freedom lovers in the light of the moon,
We probably go together like snow in June.
But we both are too crazy for anyone else,
We help each other escape our own personal hells.
We're always there when one of us cries,
Living together in a troubled paradise.

(Verse 3)
We're dogs without a home,
We are prey to the wild.
But you can soothe the fear in my eyes,
You can save my inner child.

We're just two broken souls,
Living off each others pulse.

(Chorus)
Two freedom lovers in the light of the moon,
We probably go together like snow in June.
But we both are too crazy for anyone else,
We help each other escape our own personal hells.
We're always there when one of us cries,
Living together in a troubled paradise.



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