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by Rae
Rated: E · Poetry · Nature · #2084697
I need help fixing the end of this poem, from "not the rough" to the very end! Thanks!
Ominous shades of black overlap
a crestfallen light shines-
contrasting with the water, it practically begs,
"Look at me, don't just use me, look at me."

Overlooking the lights longings,
the darkest shade comes alive-
reflecting exactly what the glimmer wishes
everyone would see

But the gleam knows better,
the only thing that will be seen is the
unique patters creating a beautiful wake-
not the rough waters that take everything under.

Nor will they notice the warmth,
eliminating from the bright aurora
that brings everything to life around them.
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