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Rated: E · Poetry · Experience · #2103598
A short, nearly found lost thought train.
Skip ahead a little...right there, you did it.
Oh no! my favorite part already happened?
We'll have to go back, though I'm guessing a million more times wouldn't be too much of a sin...

I wanted us both to watch some of the story neither has ever seen; something new and exciting, with mystery and suspense
By the time the credits roll I want to be hooked, in desperate need of a support group to enroll in...

Feelings retreat back to this world despite the thoughts it does not exist
Replaced by a universe we created, with expired laws and theoretical physics...
Most are unable to comment, is it even possible to analyze something so unique?
Not bothered by insignificant events, and immune to all your pretty anything's...

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