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Entry #492391, added on 04-02-07 @ 2:59 am EDT
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VENOMOUS EYESEntry #492391
VENOMOUS EYES



My heart was broken painfully,
It bled but now it’s healed.
As illusion dies, I see there
So much to be revealed.

The deep eyes that attracted me
Were deeper than I thought.
But their depth was full of venom
That havoc to me brought.

It was better that we parted.
Life together was hell.
I suffered silently because
There was no one to tell.

I am now free but in my dreams
Her shadows still haunt me.
I wish I had never met her.
A scourge for me was she.



• Written in abcb 8-6-8-6 format

• Written for "Like a Song" Poetry Contest, ""Like a Song" Poetry Contest

• Written around the prompt line: ‘As illusion dies I see there so much to be revealed’

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M C Gupta
4 March 2007

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