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two poem challenges and many many poems...
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Entry #662816, added on 08-08-09 @ 9:58 pm EDT
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A Lonesome CalmEntry #662816



A Lonesome Calm


Tense stricken muscles take in midnight oil:

Stress loosens in moans,
Away from hearts toil under aged deep tones; empty ducts can’t tear

Emotions remember pain before joy:
Neurotic searing-

Every future ploy fails present feeling until the new worst.





Untitled Form (for now):

syllables: 10-5-15-10-5-15
rhymes: are at the syllables of the letters.
(note: I see it as two stanzas however it's only one)

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