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 Manifest World: Book One Rated:
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 She knew nothing of her family's history and her supposed future. FINISHED!
by: Sir Bob the Wise View sirbobthewise's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: sirbobthewise [Offline / Private] Avg Rating: (1)  
Myst Beckitt believes herself to be utterly ordinary, or at least as ordinary as she allows herself to be. Everything in her life changes after the passing of her father and sister, but things turn even more bizarre when she learns of all that is in store for her. Myst goes through a series of life-altering decisions, proclaimed lunacy, and situations that can only lead to death, all to leave a world that she doesn't wish to. The Manifest World.

So, so, so, my people of the dark, this is finally finished! WOOT! Long live the Lima beans revolutions! Ah hem. Right. So, basically, I'm having a grand ol' time ripping this piece to shreds for changes of grammar and just little what-nots to make the story flow better, so ANY kind of aid would be much appreciated. Even virtual cookies, send over some virtual cookies, and I'll love you forever. Just saying.
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#61. sixty: rambling destiny
---->> ID #558492 entered on 01-02-08 @ 4:28 pm EST

#60. fifty-nine: unmanifest big brother
---->> ID #558486 entered on 01-02-08 @ 3:45 pm EST

#59. fifty-eight: moon ring with bite
---->> ID #558482 entered on 01-02-08 @ 3:20 pm EST

#58. fifty-seven: bubble of doom
---->> ID #558479 entered on 01-02-08 @ 3:02 pm EST

#57. fifty-six: insanity runs in the family
---->> ID #558467 entered on 01-02-08 @ 1:29 pm EST

#56. fifty-five: silky-smooth new play-dough-like
---->> ID #558387 entered on 01-02-08 @ 12:05 am EST

#55. fifty-four: fuzzy pink bra safety
---->> ID #557053 entered on 12-25-07 @ 2:30 pm EST

#54. fifty-three: forties cartoon rape scene
---->> ID #557052 entered on 12-25-07 @ 2:25 pm EST

#53. fifty-two: potty power
---->> ID #548381 entered on 11-11-07 @ 11:12 am EST

#52. fifty-one: by these hand
---->> ID #536385 entered on 09-19-07 @ 11:34 pm EDT

#51. fifty: don't whack your ex, it's not nice
---->> ID #536384 entered on 09-19-07 @ 11:32 pm EDT

#50. forty-nine: sentence of doom
---->> ID #536381 entered on 09-19-07 @ 11:30 pm EDT

#49. forty-eight: down the proverbial tube
---->> ID #536298 entered on 01-14-08 @ 6:45 pm EST

#48. forty-seven: monster claws
---->> ID #532291 entered on 09-19-07 @ 5:19 pm EDT

#47. forty-six: I'd rather eat the markers
---->> ID #532286 entered on 09-19-07 @ 3:45 pm EDT

#46. forty-five: regurgitated information
---->> ID #519665 entered on 09-02-07 @ 11:50 am EDT

#45. forty-four: double-mint double-licious double-gum
---->> ID #485631 entered on 02-04-07 @ 12:29 pm EST

#44. forty-three: prepubescent boyhood girl
---->> ID #482777 entered on 01-21-07 @ 6:24 pm EST

#43. forty-two: tongue talents
---->> ID #482124 entered on 01-18-07 @ 12:20 am EST

#42. forty-one: karaoke giggle jiggle
---->> ID #481927 entered on 01-17-07 @ 12:31 pm EST

#41. forty: on the topic of poop
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#40. thirty-nine: leprechauns and little floaty ball dudes
---->> ID #456576 entered on 11-11-06 @ 8:20 pm EST

#39. thirty-eight: pyro witch
---->> ID #456116 entered on 09-22-06 @ 10:52 am EDT

#38. thirty-seven: mayonnaise butt
---->> ID #454731 entered on 09-17-06 @ 8:02 pm EDT

#37. thirty-six: cotton candy web
---->> ID #454262 entered on 09-14-06 @ 11:04 am EDT


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