Manifest World: Book One
        by: Sir Bob the Wise  (sirbobthewise@Writing.Com)
Myst Beckitt believes herself to be utterly ordinary, or at least as ordinary as she allows herself to be. Everything in her life changes after the passing of her father and sister, but things turn even more bizarre when she learns of all that is in store for her. Myst goes through a series of life-altering decisions, proclaimed lunacy, and situations that can only lead to death, all to leave a world that she doesn't wish to. The Manifest World.

So, so, so, my people of the dark, this is finally finished! WOOT! Long live the Lima beans revolutions! Ah hem. Right. So, basically, I'm having a grand ol' time ripping this piece to shreds for changes of grammar and just little what-nots to make the story flow better, so ANY kind of aid would be much appreciated. Even virtual cookies, send over some virtual cookies, and I'll love you forever. Just saying.
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#61. sixty: rambling destiny
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#60. fifty-nine: unmanifest big brother
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#59. fifty-eight: moon ring with bite
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#58. fifty-seven: bubble of doom
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#57. fifty-six: insanity runs in the family
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#56. fifty-five: silky-smooth new play-dough-like
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#55. fifty-four: fuzzy pink bra safety
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#54. fifty-three: forties cartoon rape scene
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#53. fifty-two: potty power
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#52. fifty-one: by these hand
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#51. fifty: don't whack your ex, it's not nice
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#50. forty-nine: sentence of doom
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#49. forty-eight: down the proverbial tube
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#48. forty-seven: monster claws
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#47. forty-six: I'd rather eat the markers
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#46. forty-five: regurgitated information
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#45. forty-four: double-mint double-licious double-gum
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#44. forty-three: prepubescent boyhood girl
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#43. forty-two: tongue talents
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#42. forty-one: karaoke giggle jiggle
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#41. forty: on the topic of poop
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#40. thirty-nine: leprechauns and little floaty ball dudes
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#39. thirty-eight: pyro witch
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#38. thirty-seven: mayonnaise butt
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#37. thirty-six: cotton candy web
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