This is a little project I'm working on - which will eventually turn into several books I imagine. At the moment, the greatest help you can point out to me is instances where I've switched from past to present tense. When I first started writing 1st person, I was rather clumsy and those mistakes are mostly left over from then. I've gotten better at it since then.



The first chapter is short I know, I may change it later but for now that's how it is - its by no means that odd for real books to have a few short chapters.



So thanks for reading, and i hope you get some enjoyment from this.



Write on everyone,

Aaron