I got two more ideas for Omake Theaters. My mind is having a lot of fun playing with the characters, but I have to remember that I need to get through the novel before writing the Omakes or they won’t make any sense! lol.

I actually got a lot written during my first break and lunch. The train ride in was sluggish at 250 words, but I brought that up to 600 at my first break. Then at lunch, I took it to 1,104! Woo, I rock!

I technically don’t need to write any more since I’ve met my daily goal, but I’m going to try to write more on the train ride home, assuming the sun isn’t in my eyes too much. The more I can get ahead, the better.

I’m really liking Adeena’s younger sisters, though I think I made Janassa much younger than 10. I have a hard time with assigned children’s ages and then having them act that age. I have a lot of trouble judging this appropriately, probably because I don’t act my age most of the time. lol.

But either way, I think she works as a young kid, so I can always change her age from 10 to whatever. If anyone has an opinion on what her age really should be based on her actions, let me know. Also let me know if the twins are acting 14, in your opinion. I’m thinking of changing their age to 12 or something.

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I wrote over 400 words on the train, bringing today’s total to 1,541

My overall total is 5,162. I made it over 5,000 words! I am a super star!

As I’m getting into my groove, the only thing I’m having trouble with is keeping the scene from the point of view of the main character. It’s really hard with the sisters scene, so many people in the room. I start an exchange between two sisters, totally forgetting to put in Adeena’s perspective on it. Ah, well. That’s what revising is for in December and beyond!

"Day 3: Scene 3 continued"