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The Regime: NaNo 2009 Prep
My home for 'The Regime' NaNo prep! I might actually finish the thing for once!
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This journal has been set up to prepare for NaNoWriMo 2009 as part of the October NaNo Prep 2009. It is the same story as the OTHER item called The Regime in my port, but different as well. I've turned what I wrote for that into character development for one of my protagonists (she started out as the main, but now she kinda shares that distinction with another character). Mostly everything is here.
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America, 2368, 60th year in the reign of the Regime...

My family is dead. Burned as Witches, enemies of the State, their crisped remains scattered to the breezes or mixed with wine in a macabre, vile perversion of Cleopatra's pearls.

It's been eighteen years since they disappeared, pushing me into the snow and telling me to run- run as fast as I could- to the Family Altar. The Caves are destroyed now, burned by the hunters along with my family.

All hope of their lives is gone. And, with it, any vestige of innocence. Here do I swear, in ink brewed with my own blood, to be the undoing of those who stole them from me. Here do I swear to be the undoing of the Regime.

As I will, So Mote it Be.
Francesca Jasrin


It started with the Regime.

It holds the United States in a vice of their own devising; the Code, the American Way, the fool-proof plan to return America to its former glory and ensure that it never falls again. In the guise of Patriotism and the Collective Good, the Regime has woven its way into the American psyche, leaving the indelible mark of tyranny-by-invitation. The average American loves the Regime, and would sooner die than betray them.

But many do die. For at the core of the Regime is the American Code, the Constitution of the New American Way, a set of rules and bylaws that define what it means to be American. Tall, good-looking, healthy, wealthy, dressed properly, all-in-all 'proper conduct'. Any deviation, real or imagined, from this Code is cause for death. And, like the Witch Hunts of old, the deviants are burned alive at stakes or in chambers. As many real 'deviants' are burned as are the innocent. But no one cares and most are even happy to see their enemies go.

The streets are lined with beer bottles from constant celebration amongst the ranks of those loyal to the Government; the alleyways lined with secret bunkers for those terrified by that selfsame institution. But some of those hidden caves hide acts of sedition, of treason; and of liberty, freedom, and life as groups of American citizens fight to end the fear and burnings.

Whether 'Witch' or no, these people long to see a free America, hoping that one exists somewhere. And they're willing to do whatever it takes to see the Regime topple- even if it means America topples with it.

They're called The Coalition.
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#21. October 23: Fourth Outline Draft
---->> ID #674005 entered on 06-24-11 @ 1:45 pm EDT

#20. October 22: Character Sketch (#4)
---->> ID #673403 entered on 10-26-09 @ 9:35 pm EDT

#19. October 21: Minor Character Sketch (#3)
---->> ID #672726 entered on 10-21-09 @ 5:28 pm EDT

#18. October 20: Minor Character Sketch
---->> ID #672597 entered on 10-20-09 @ 4:08 pm EDT

#17. October 19: Minor Character Sketch
---->> ID #672445 entered on 10-19-09 @ 4:46 pm EDT

#16. October 18: Second Setting Description
---->> ID #672112 entered on 10-17-09 @ 2:02 pm EDT

#15. October 16: Third Plot Outline (Still Not Completed)
---->> ID #672012 entered on 10-16-09 @ 3:36 pm EDT

#14. October 15: Second Setting Sketch
---->> ID #671907 entered on 10-15-09 @ 10:29 pm EDT

#13. October 14: Second Protagonist Story
---->> ID #671753 entered on 10-14-09 @ 8:14 pm EDT

#12. October 13: Second Protagonist Sketch
---->> ID #671637 entered on 03-19-11 @ 7:22 pm EDT

#11. October 12: Plot Background Story
---->> ID #671445 entered on 10-12-09 @ 2:41 pm EDT

#10. October 11: Antagonist Story (Contest Round)
---->> ID #671378 entered on 10-11-09 @ 11:57 pm EDT

#9. October 9: Outline Part 2 (not quite finished)
---->> ID #671020 entered on 10-10-09 @ 6:39 pm EDT

#8. October 8: Antangonist Sketch
---->> ID #670957 entered on 10-08-09 @ 4:06 pm EDT

#7. October 7: Item Description
---->> ID #670948 entered on 10-08-09 @ 2:53 pm EDT

#6. October 6: Setting Description
---->> ID #670811 entered on 10-08-09 @ 12:17 am EDT

#5. October 5: Setting Sketch
---->> ID #670806 entered on 10-07-09 @ 12:52 pm EDT

#4. October 4: Character Story
---->> ID #670489 entered on 10-04-09 @ 11:40 pm EDT

#3. October 3: Protagonist Sketch
---->> ID #670291 entered on 10-03-09 @ 2:25 am EDT

#2. October 2 Challenge: Outline Draft 1
---->> ID #670200 entered on 10-02-09 @ 2:52 pm EDT

#1. October 1 Challenge: Premise
---->> ID #670068 entered on 10-01-09 @ 5:39 pm EDT


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