Hand is the original short story. Included in this book is a video recording of the narrator telling the story. Fist is a sequel, written by request, that details the 'rest' of the story.

I would appreciate input on consistency of story line between the two chapters (Hand and Fist), quality of writing, believability of the characters and narrator's voice. If possible, please read Hand before watching the corresponding video. I'd like to know if the 'voice' the reader 'hears' in the written version matches the voice in the recorded version. Is the recorded portrayal consistent with your expectations as a reader?

Any input - typos, grammar, punctuation, flow, you hate the dialect, you love the dialect, anything! - is appreciated.