Midway through November I decided I needed to change to a plot that was faster to write if I ever wanted to finish the 50,000 words in 30 days challenge of National Novel Writing Month. So I ditched my tecnology-heavy political science fiction story in favor of a daydream I had while waiting for the curtain to rise on Ovo. |
It's meant to be humorous, not offensive. That said if you are easily offended by swearing, sex, violence or poorly concealed jabs at Western culture...this is not the story for you.
I never finished it, or indeed got anywhere close to my 50,000 word goal, but I rather enjoyed the process and I still enjoy the story. Since it was written with speed in mind, it is not well edited. Though I'm not really looking for alphabetical/grammatical edits, I will take whatever comments you are willing to give with a glad heart. :) Thank you!
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