If Enosa was in prison how did she know she had a sibling that left her behind? Why would she be mad at him. That he forgot her presupposes that he knew about her but how did she know about him? Being alone and in prison is enough to make one angry and bitter but does she have a target for her rage? She picks up on what has happened over time so does that change her character or turn her into a daemon? Does she wreak vengence on mankind by inciting them to kill other and then gloat at their stupidity or does she become transformed on learning the full account of her heritage?

Acacia, like the thorny tree that shares her name is tough. She is the physical product of violence. This is reflected in her own physical prowess and her willingness to confront. I think she will stop the fighting by exposing the folly of both kings in the public arena and daring them to be men enough to stand up and do right.

I think Destiny Rose may have more character than warrior man but is a bit confused. Her sister did not drag ripple belly away. He went after her. Her sister is probably young and stupid so falls for the guy. What is Destiny's problem? Hasn't she figured out yet that muscle gut is a dud? A cad. What is the origin of the masochistic urge to run after someone who has already dumped her for her sister. I think the development of her deeper character may result from her realization that only she can save her sister.

Could Kymber, Julia and Ephwin all be the same character or are they simply linked by similarity, destiny or context? I think they really do have much in common.

I think it might be helpful if you took a look at Heironymous Bosch's triplet The Garden Of Earthly Delights. The tortured souls there may have something to say to you about Julia

Somehow I have the impression the details are in weaving together the disparate parts from the three worlds. There is a reason why Elendar is half catlike creature. I suggest it is the source of a special strength.

This little club is down on main street. Reference the song. The man in love with the dancer is observed by the Gargoyle who thinks he is bad but when the girl is killed in a robbery the man is so grief stricken the Gargoyle feels sorry for him and helps him to stalk the killer through the nights and finally has satisfaction in watching from her stone perch when the killer brought to justice. She is really good friends with the human but the other Gargoyles and humans never know.

When Ephwyn finds the special she discovers it has arms but cant walk. It requires great effort for the both of them to get her to the spring to drink in the full of the moon. During the journey she discovers the creature makes her complete by providing arms. She makes the creature complete by providing legs. When she reaches the spring in the full of the moon she must make the choice not to drink but be complete by bonding with the creature or drink from the spring gaining the ability to fly but remaining incomplete without arms.

I like the camp fire idea with slimy octa leaches slowly attaching to their legs then locking their tentacles tying them all together to drag them away.

Hansel and Gretel catch catch the old witch by tracking the candygrams. They have her committed to a mental hospital where she is given Haldol and ends up thinking she is normal. The hospital keeps her locked up because she is schizophrenic

The Kokopelli is a cool blues singer. Everyone thinks he is great because he always sings in costume and no one can figure out where he gets has great songs..

Everyone thinks the faeries are drag queens. Hells Angels are really upset. The faeries give the Hells Angels acid.

I had a Zippo once that had a genie in it. It was a liquid genie called lighter fluid. It leaked in my pocket and nearly burned the skin off my leg

After the dragon cleans her lair she goes to McDonalds for lunch. No one recognizes her as a dragon. Everyone thinks it is a great promotional.

Stimulating, have you ever thought of moving forward a little by adding a table of contents to each of the titles?