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| Silence is Golden! Could we all do a poem together? | | by: | |
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Created: 1:45am on 02-10-2007
Modified: 4:00am on 12-05-2007 | |
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[Introduction]
Let us collaborate on a poem. I hope you all would love to add a line or 2 of your own. Once all of us concur that the poem is complete, I shall put together the complete poem at the conclusion of the campire. For any queries, invites, and suggestions please ping me.
The tentative title I am suggesting is: Silence is Golden
Suggestions/Changes most Welcome.
Silence is Golden!
Silence is Golden
Silver Tongues Spout
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 About addition #1: By: mars ![View maria-n's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://imgs.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-stars_moon-40.gif "View maria-n's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]") Added: Sat, 02/10/2007 @ 6:22amSize: 116 Characters
And true heavy Metal
Blasts unbearably Loud
About addition #2: By: mars Added: Tue, 02/13/2007 @ 3:56amSize: 199 Characters
I flee from the Noise
And hide in Woods' Shade
Where brazen Flute Tones
The Air tingling invade
About addition #3: By: DntdKnight ![View markgreenlaw's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://imgs.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif "View markgreenlaw's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]") Added: Tue, 02/13/2007 @ 7:20amSize: 149 Characters
my senses, my soul, my everything
Sweet chirps from birds add a sweet bliss
About addition #4: By: blocks_in_writing Added: Tue, 02/13/2007 @ 7:31amSize: 118 Characters
Heaven & Hell
Paradise Won & Paradise Undone
About addition #5: By: mars Added: Tue, 02/13/2007 @ 8:47amSize: 127 Characters
Below those heavenly Trees
My Tantrum takes to the Sky
About addition #6: By: DntdKnight Added: Tue, 02/13/2007 @ 8:49amSize: 126 Characters
Turned into sweet caresses
New Desires burn within
About addition #7: By: blocks_in_writing Added: Tue, 02/13/2007 @ 9:01amSize: 112 Characters
Sharpened Shrapnel
Spawns a Death knell
About addition #8: By: mars Added: Tue, 02/13/2007 @ 10:49pmSize: 175 Characters
A tiny Bird
Tumbles in my Lap
Blood deadly Drips
It's Eye a gaping Gap
About addition #9: By: DntdKnight Added: Wed, 02/14/2007 @ 1:46amSize: 131 Characters
Razors slice to the bone
Ears are deaf to the dying moan
About addition #10: By: mars Added: Fri, 02/16/2007 @ 6:50amSize: 197 Characters
Sealed with my crystal tear
Empty now the steel-grey sky
An other silence befalls me
Black as decaying tin; oh why
About addition #11: By: Frankly Nicky Added: Sun, 02/18/2007 @ 12:16pmSize: 197 Characters
A delicate little sparo's wing
stretch out over my fingers
A vision of how delicate life is
How small
About addition #12: By: mars Added: Wed, 02/21/2007 @ 11:40pmSize: 171 Characters
The sparrow's heart
defeated by hunters delight
I make a vow
The coward killer I'll fight
About addition #13: By: DntdKnight Added: Thu, 02/22/2007 @ 10:34amSize: 227 Characters
The hunter's delight shattered by the fear of his upcoming demise
The soiled clothes, the smell of urine, the terror in his eyes.
About addition #14: By: Frankly Nicky Added: Fri, 02/23/2007 @ 10:42pmSize: 218 CharactersWhat makes man so corrupt,
that he would ruin such a calm, such a peace,
All for the sport of the hunt,
And the victory of taking a creature's heartbeat
About addition #15: By: blocks_in_writing Added: Sun, 02/25/2007 @ 8:50pmSize: 190 Characters
The piercing scream of the wolves
Shattered the still calm
Gathered in the mist
Lay the puzzled hunter's whip
About addition #16: By: mars Added: Mon, 02/26/2007 @ 7:47amSize: 336 Characters
He stands in wetted pants
Pride of the human race
Fear of death staining
His lustre lorn face
The wolves howl
Forseeing a cheap meal
Him or me; I run for the whip
Beasts snapping at my heel
About addition #17: By: DntdKnight Added: Mon, 02/26/2007 @ 5:11pmSize: 377 Characters
The Crack of my whip echoes loud in the night, as I held them at bay,
they turned to see the beer drinking hunter, who became their new prey.
He tries to drop his gun, tries to run, he is no longer having any fun,
They drool, hunger is their fuel, they chase after the fool.
About addition #18: By: Frankly Nicky Added: Mon, 02/26/2007 @ 7:26pmSize: 207 CharactersThe hunter is now the hunted, nature had taken the reigns,
It no longer grovels at the mercy of a gun,
for the roles have been switched in the hunting game
About addition #19: By: blocks_in_writing Added: Mon, 03/5/2007 @ 9:06pmSize: 263 Characters
Why is blood such a fancy?
Why are the wolves in such a frenzy?
The beast roams in our midst
Clothing itself in designer garb
Awaiting the hunter's final call
About addition #20: By: mars Added: Fri, 03/9/2007 @ 11:14amSize: 335 CharactersThough who is calling who?
Does the hunter call the beast,
Or is the huntsman invited
To offer flesh at beasts feast?
Enamel teeth blickering
Chromium guns flickering
Warm blood dripping
Fearful city flipping
About addition #21: By: Frankly Nicky Added: Tue, 03/13/2007 @ 10:02amSize: 556 Characters
"A War!" Says Nature, "War!"
It has now become war between man and nature.
Every animal, every creature,
Is tired of man's vile ways,
And is rising up,
To shut him up,
To shout out, and call out,
For their rights!
"But hark! Why can't we compromise?" says man to nature.
Animal may be food to man,
And occationally man to animal,
But must we play these foolish games?
Of gun and teeth, and nail?
About addition #22: By: Josh Delyc Added: Tue, 03/13/2007 @ 3:09pmSize: 128 Characters
As snow falls over the trees
The war begins
as we dwell within these
About addition #23: By: blocks_in_writing Added: Tue, 03/13/2007 @ 3:40pmSize: 389 Characters
...mirage of dreams
The snow covers the footprints of the animal
Or is it the man?
Does this War have a conclusion?
Will they call a truce and co-exist?
Will peace reign?
When can we bring out the wine and celebrate?
... Shattering the calm of the GOLDEN SILENCE
About addition #24: By: blocks_in_writing Added: Fri, 04/6/2007 @ 2:21amSize: 65 Characters
The End!
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