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| [Introduction]
Let us collaborate on a poem. I hope you all would love to add a line or 2 of your own. Once all of us concur that the poem is complete, I shall put together the complete poem at the conclusion of the campire. For any queries, invites, and suggestions please ping me. The tentative title I am suggesting is: Silence is Golden Suggestions/Changes most Welcome. Silence is Golden! Silence is Golden Silver Tongues Spout |
 mars  And true heavy Metal Blasts unbearably Loud mars I flee from the Noise And hide in Woods' Shade Where brazen Flute Tones The Air tingling invade DntdKnight my senses, my soul, my everything Sweet chirps from birds add a sweet bliss blocks_in_writing Heaven & Hell Paradise Won & Paradise Undone mars Below those heavenly Trees My Tantrum takes to the Sky DntdKnight Turned into sweet caresses New Desires burn within blocks_in_writing Sharpened Shrapnel Spawns a Death knell mars A tiny Bird Tumbles in my Lap Blood deadly Drips It's Eye a gaping Gap DntdKnight Razors slice to the bone Ears are deaf to the dying moan mars Sealed with my crystal tear Empty now the steel-grey sky An other silence befalls me Black as decaying tin; oh why Nicky A delicate little sparo's wing stretch out over my fingers A vision of how delicate life is How small mars The sparrow's heart defeated by hunters delight I make a vow The coward killer I'll fight DntdKnight The hunter's delight shattered by the fear of his upcoming demise The soiled clothes, the smell of urine, the terror in his eyes. Nicky What makes man so corrupt, that he would ruin such a calm, such a peace, All for the sport of the hunt, And the victory of taking a creature's heartbeat blocks_in_writing The piercing scream of the wolves Shattered the still calm Gathered in the mist Lay the puzzled hunter's whip mars He stands in wetted pants Pride of the human race Fear of death staining His lustre lorn face The wolves howl Forseeing a cheap meal Him or me; I run for the whip Beasts snapping at my heel DntdKnight The Crack of my whip echoes loud in the night, as I held them at bay, they turned to see the beer drinking hunter, who became their new prey. He tries to drop his gun, tries to run, he is no longer having any fun, They drool, hunger is their fuel, they chase after the fool. Nicky The hunter is now the hunted, nature had taken the reigns, It no longer grovels at the mercy of a gun, for the roles have been switched in the hunting game blocks_in_writing Why is blood such a fancy? Why are the wolves in such a frenzy? The beast roams in our midst Clothing itself in designer garb Awaiting the hunter's final call mars Though who is calling who? Does the hunter call the beast, Or is the huntsman invited To offer flesh at beasts feast? Enamel teeth blickering Chromium guns flickering Warm blood dripping Fearful city flipping Nicky "A War!" Says Nature, "War!" It has now become war between man and nature. Every animal, every creature, Is tired of man's vile ways, And is rising up, To shut him up, To shout out, and call out, For their rights! "But hark! Why can't we compromise?" says man to nature. Animal may be food to man, And occationally man to animal, But must we play these foolish games? Of gun and teeth, and nail? Josh Delyc As snow falls over the trees The war begins as we dwell within these blocks_in_writing ...mirage of dreams The snow covers the footprints of the animal Or is it the man? Does this War have a conclusion? Will they call a truce and co-exist? Will peace reign? When can we bring out the wine and celebrate? ... Shattering the calm of the GOLDEN SILENCE blocks_in_writing The End! © Copyright 2007 mars, DntdKnight, blocks_in_writing, Nicky, Josh Delyc, (known as GROUP). All rights reserved. GROUP has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work. |
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