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  Silence is Golden!
Could we all do a poem together?
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[Introduction] Let us collaborate on a poem. I hope you all would love to add a line or 2 of your own. Once all of us concur that the poem is complete, I shall put together the complete poem at the conclusion of the campire. For any queries, invites, and suggestions please ping me.

The tentative title I am suggesting is: Silence is Golden

Suggestions/Changes most Welcome.

Silence is Golden!




Silence is Golden
Silver Tongues Spout
mars    

And true heavy Metal
Blasts unbearably Loud


mars    

I flee from the Noise
And hide in Woods' Shade

Where brazen Flute Tones
The Air tingling invade




DntdKnight    

my senses, my soul, my everything
Sweet chirps from birds add a sweet bliss


blocks_in_writing    

Heaven & Hell
Paradise Won & Paradise Undone


mars    

Below those heavenly Trees
My Tantrum takes to the Sky


DntdKnight    

Turned into sweet caresses
New Desires burn within


blocks_in_writing    

Sharpened Shrapnel
Spawns a Death knell


mars    

A tiny Bird
Tumbles in my Lap

Blood deadly Drips
It's Eye a gaping Gap



DntdKnight    

Razors slice to the bone
Ears are deaf to the dying moan


mars    

Sealed with my crystal tear
Empty now the steel-grey sky

An other silence befalls me
Black as decaying tin; oh why


Frankly Nicky    

A delicate little sparo's wing
stretch out over my fingers

A vision of how delicate life is
How small


mars    


The sparrow's heart
defeated by hunters delight

I make a vow
The coward killer I'll fight


DntdKnight    

The hunter's delight shattered by the fear of his upcoming demise

The soiled clothes, the smell of urine, the terror in his eyes.




Frankly Nicky    
What makes man so corrupt,
that he would ruin such a calm, such a peace,

All for the sport of the hunt,
And the victory of taking a creature's heartbeat


blocks_in_writing    

The piercing scream of the wolves
Shattered the still calm

Gathered in the mist
Lay the puzzled hunter's whip


mars    

He stands in wetted pants
Pride of the human race

Fear of death staining
His lustre lorn face

The wolves howl
Forseeing a cheap meal

Him or me; I run for the whip
Beasts snapping at my heel






DntdKnight    

The Crack of my whip echoes loud in the night, as I held them at bay,
they turned to see the beer drinking hunter, who became their new prey.

He tries to drop his gun, tries to run, he is no longer having any fun,
They drool, hunger is their fuel, they chase after the fool.






Frankly Nicky    
The hunter is now the hunted, nature had taken the reigns,

It no longer grovels at the mercy of a gun,
for the roles have been switched in the hunting game


blocks_in_writing    

Why is blood such a fancy?
Why are the wolves in such a frenzy?

The beast roams in our midst
Clothing itself in designer garb
Awaiting the hunter's final call





mars    
Though who is calling who?
Does the hunter call the beast,

Or is the huntsman invited
To offer flesh at beasts feast?



Enamel teeth blickering
Chromium guns flickering

Warm blood dripping
Fearful city flipping


Frankly Nicky    

"A War!" Says Nature, "War!"
It has now become war between man and nature.
Every animal, every creature,
Is tired of man's vile ways,
And is rising up,
To shut him up,
To shout out, and call out,
For their rights!

"But hark! Why can't we compromise?" says man to nature.
Animal may be food to man,
And occationally man to animal,
But must we play these foolish games?
Of gun and teeth, and nail?


Josh Delyc    

As snow falls over the trees
The war begins
as we dwell within these


blocks_in_writing    

...mirage of dreams

The snow covers the footprints of the animal
Or is it the man?

Does this War have a conclusion?
Will they call a truce and co-exist?
Will peace reign?

When can we bring out the wine and celebrate?
... Shattering the calm of the GOLDEN SILENCE



blocks_in_writing    

The End!



© Copyright 2007 mars, DntdKnight, blocks_in_writing, Frankly Nicky, Josh Delyc, (known as GROUP). All rights reserved. GROUP has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work.

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