About addition #1: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sat, 08/11/2007 @ 11:19pmSize: 186 Characters Stormy is Editing (Continued from "Invalid Item" )
Sana returned in a moment, the teacup steaming in her hands. "Have a drink, it'll help with the headache you might have."
About addition #2: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sat, 08/11/2007 @ 11:25pmSize: 56 Characters M Charlie took it and drank it. "Thank you Sana."
About addition #3: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sat, 08/11/2007 @ 11:26pmSize: 243 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded and gave him a small smile. "You're welcome. Now, I'm going to go get the rest of our belongings from the car. Stay here, finish the tea and relax. Feel free to get ready for bed, I'm sure you're really ready for that."
About addition #4: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sat, 08/11/2007 @ 11:31pmSize: 142 Characters M "I am," Charlie nodded, "I will." He smiled at her as he finished the tea, "and I'm skipping the shower for tonight."
About addition #5: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sat, 08/11/2007 @ 11:32pmSize: 295 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded, "I'll let you have it first in the morning then." With that she disappeared out the door and closed it quickly behind herself.
*She's in a good mood. I'm quite pleased with your progress too.* Janus crawled up Charlie's body and licked his cheek. *Tired?*
About addition #6: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sat, 08/11/2007 @ 11:36pmSize: 118 Characters M *Exhausted, I'll be lucky if I have the energy to change.* With that he set the tea cup aside and attempted standing.
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About addition #8: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sat, 08/11/2007 @ 11:47pmSize: 145 Characters M Charlie dropped back onto the bed, *I just wanted my pajamas and then maybe under the covers,* he explained, closing his eyes and falling asleep.
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In the morning, Sana shook him gently. "Charlie? It's time to wake up Charlie, it's nearly nine."
About addition #10: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 12:04amSize: 63 Characters M Charlie opened his eyes, "Einstein?" he asked groggily.
About addition #11: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 12:42amSize: 126 Characters Stormy is Editing "He woke me up, but you slept through it all. Even the trumpets." Sana grinned. "I think I overworked you."
About addition #12: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 12:45amSize: 81 Characters M Charlie grinned sleepily, "It was worth it. Thanks for trying Einstein."
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"Calm down Einstein, he said it was alright. And honestly," Sana grinned, "It was my fault, not yours." Janus yawned and licked at Charlie's face.
*Good morning sleepy.*
"Don't forget about your shield Charlie," Einstein said quickly.
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"I'm glad to still be of service to you," Einstein said somewhat sadly.
About addition #16: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:00amSize: 332 Characters M Once his shield was right he sat up and went over to Einstein, lifting him out of his case and opening. "Come on now, you still have a 99.999 to infinite success rate. That means you have a better chance of waking me than a ball does of coming back down after being thrown into the air. That's pretty good if you ask me."
About addition #17: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:03amSize: 285 Characters Stormy is Editing Sensana burst out into laughter at that, and patted Einstein lightly. "You can't beat that, can you Einstein?"
"No," Einstein said, and Charlie had the feeling that if he could blush, he would be doing so at that moment. "No, you can't really."
About addition #18: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:07amSize: 224 Characters M "Good, I'm glad we can agree on this one." Charlie patted Einstein appreciatively, "I depend on you way too much to have you depressed." He closed him again and looked at Sana. "My turn to shower?"
About addition #19: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:08amSize: 115 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded. "I went ahead and took one as Einstein tried to wake you, I had a feeling you wouldn't mind."
About addition #20: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:13amSize: 167 Characters M Charlie nodded, "Especially as I was completely unaware of it." He stretched and gathered a change of clothes then went to the bathroom, showered and changed.
About addition #21: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:15amSize: 238 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana was sitting on her bed, delicately painting her nails when Charlie came out. She glanced up and then back down, finishing her pinky nail and closing the bottle of polish. "So, how are you feeling?" she asked nonchalantly.
About addition #22: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:17amSize: 78 Characters M Charlie shrugged, "Still a bit worn down, but over all not bad. Why?"
About addition #23: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:19amSize: 289 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded her head. "I needed to know if you were going to have a lapse into slumber part way through the day or not. I don't think you will, which makes me happy." She blew on her nails for a moment then shook her hands out. "So, breakfast, then we can go see Lisa."
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Lisa was out in the gardens again, and she looked incredibly sad. She tried to smile when she saw them, but Charlie and Sana both could tell she had been crying.
"Hey guys," she said, attempting happiness, but failing miserably.
"What's wrong?" Sana asked, taking a seat near her and reaching out her hand. Lisa shook her head.
"Nothing," she said, then burst out into tears.
About addition #26: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:31amSize: 182 Characters M "Oh Lisa really," Charlie shifted so he was level with her, concern obvious on his face. "What is it? I won't let Sana write a word of it in her report, I promise."
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"What is it Lisa, what is it?"
"He... he's... he's broken up with me finally!" Lisa wailed and she cried out in frustration and anger and sadness once more.
About addition #28: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:36amSize: 190 Characters M Charlie looked up at Sana quickly. *Well that does it. She's no longer here of her own free will. There's no way.*
"Lisa, I'm so sorry," he said simply, and he was.
About addition #29: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:38amSize: 278 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded once and held her closer. "Lisa," she said quietly, her face etched in pain. "I somewhat understand."
*Her energy is fading, but not going out. She's here without her desiring it anymore, if she was here because of her will before.*
About addition #30: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:24pmSize: 321 Characters M Charlie watched the two of them and waited. He'd felt this might be coming but Lisa had seemed so confident in her relationship. How cruel it seemed for him to take away the one illusion that kept her going.
"Lisa, I..." he shook his head. "Sana, let me have a piece of paper and a pen."
About addition #31: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:33pmSize: 277 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded and reached into her pocket, pulling out her pen and notebook she took notes of their conversations on. Then she returned her arms around Lisa, who was still crying.
"I... I... there's nothing I can do! I wish I would just die!" she wailed.
About addition #32: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:41pmSize: 642 Characters M Charlie moved away, leaving Sana to console her. He began writing.
Lisa,
When you die, you can find me at the Detective Agency. I know this makes no sense, just trust me.
When you die, if you decide to stick around, contact me. On my first vacation we'll go to the beach. It won't be a date but I promise you'll have fun because I know you and I can be great friends. Don't let the sorrow of this life win out because there is more to death than you might think.
I Promise,
Charlie
He folded it. *Will you help me? It's a foolish thing, what I'm doing.*
About addition #33: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:43pmSize: 228 Characters Stormy is Editing Janus shook his head. *It's not foolish, it's a girls wish you want to fulfill. You two really can be good friends, and it would make her feel better I'm sure. Where do you want me to put it? I'll help you in any way I can.*
About addition #34: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:45pmSize: 115 Characters M *Either on her somewhere she'll find it or upstairs in a frequently used possession which the staff doesn't touch.*
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About addition #36: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:51pmSize: 248 Characters M Charlie returned and sat by the girls in silence, waiting out the seemingly endless tears. Finally he observed softly, "I know it's of little comfort, but I've found that when things are at there very worst they can only go up from there."
About addition #37: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:53pmSize: 659 Characters Stormy is Editing Lisa gave a shaky laugh. "Yeah, that is true. Its just... he's been with me for years, you know? And he's been so patient, and I've been getting better, and I know it's hard to have a girlfriend you can't be with all the time, but... we've been planning our future and everything, I can't understand why he's let me go now." Sana nodded and backed away from Lisa a bit.
"Who knows what men think," she said, shrugging, "I certainly don't understand them. Perhaps he finally got seriously scared. Perhaps he didn't realize he was scared until recently, and he couldn't handle it. Men are very fragile emotionally."
About addition #38: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 1:59pmSize: 220 Characters M "Is that how we are?" Charlie asked a bit of laughter in his tone. "Sana is having trouble with her own love, so she understands, although they've called a truce to their great years long breakup fight."
About addition #39: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 2:03pmSize: 1,062 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana blushed, "Well... yes, a truce for the moment. We're on speaking terms again." Lisa looked up in surprise.
"You... you were years in a break up? How could you stand it?" She asked it as though she was searching for some kind of hope.
"Not very well, I'm afraid." Sana sighed. "We fought over a change in him, something I cannot understand, and it was terrible. We had to separate, but we work in the same business, so it was like we were constantly seeing each other, but not being together. Then when things happened to me, things he used to protect me from, I would get all angry with him again, because he wasn't there. I know he didn't get together with anyone else while I was gone, but... that almost made things worse. Charlie here," she motioned to Charlie with a smile, "Has helped us partly mend our relationship. We're no where near as close as we had been, but we're talking again, and that's a vast improvement for me." Lisa thought about that for quite a while.
About addition #40: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 2:08pmSize: 327 Characters M "They're probably meant for each other, although Jared knows just how to irritate the living daylights out of me," Charlie said. "Still, when Sana told me she was still in love with him after two years of fighting I knew that there was something there, something more than I can see as an outsider looking in."
About addition #41: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 2:15pmSize: 724 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana blushed a great deal at that and looked at Lisa.
"I want to hate him," Lisa said softly, "I mean," she looked down at her hands, "Really, really hate him. But I can't, I just feel regret, sorrow and a lot of pain."
"You can't hate him, not really," Sana said, lightly touching Lisa's hand. "I hated Jared, but only when I was angry. It wasn't really hatred, it was confusion, and disappointment. I love Jared, and I know he loves me too, and that's what's hard. I don't want you to feel that it'll be the same with you and your love, but it's possible that you feel the same way I did." Lisa sighed and tears fell, but she didn't shake or sob.
About addition #42: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 2:18pmSize: 139 Characters M Charlie nodded, but said nothing. He had never had a relationship. Much as he wanted to help he'd gone as far as he could for the moment.
About addition #43: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 2:20pmSize: 394 Characters Stormy is Editing It was several moments before she calmed down a bit, and then she said, "So, do you have anything in particular you want to talk about today?" It was a somewhat falsely cheery voice, considering how she'd been crying, but Sana shook her head.
"I think we've got enough information today, perhaps we should just talk, without any pressures. How does that sound?"
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"Yes, all living creatures feel pain. Most dead creatures feel pain as well, just a different sort." Sana blushed, and shook her head, "Well, that's what I think anyway." Lisa looked at her curiously.
"I suppose you have a point. Do you believe in Heaven?" Sana nodded.
"Yes, I know it exists." Lisa smiled.
"I do too. When I almost died, I could see this man, and he was trying to hand me something. Then he said I could got to Heaven. I think I'd like to do that. Is it permanent, do you think?" Sana shook her head.
"No, I don't think it's permanent, I think if you wanted to leave Heaven, you could, I think it's more of a decision than a destination." Lisa beamed at Sana.
"You're being too nice to me."
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About addition #47: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 2:34pmSize: 622 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana smiled at Charlie and then returned her gaze to Lisa.
"There's something there you're not telling me," Lisa said, her eyes peaked with curiosity.
"There are many things we're not telling you, but don't let that bother you," Sana said, grinning. Lisa grinned back.
"Well, that's allowed I think."
Lisa went off onto a new subject, and several minutes passed in relative peaceful conversation. Then Lisa sighed and looked around.
"I should be getting back to my room now. Thank you both, I feel a lot better."
About addition #48: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 2:41pmSize: 157 Characters M "Take care Lisa," Charlie smiled, "and don't forget to call us if you need anything at all."
*Janus? She's about to head up.*
About addition #49: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 2:44pmSize: 308 Characters Stormy is Editing *I'm out, I just wanted to wait until you weren't around each other.* Lisa headed up with a nod at Charlie.
"I will I haven't lost your number, thank you." Once she was out of sight, Janus lept up onto Charlie and crawled onto his shoulder.
*I got it in a good place.*
About addition #50: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 2:48pmSize: 143 Characters M *Thank you Janus. Thank you very much.* Charlie stood and looked at Sana.
"Have we set things up around her room yet?"
About addition #51: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 2:50pmSize: 181 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded, "I did that this morning. So, do you think we should cut the line tonight?" She looked somewhat worried about it. "It might be a good time to do so."
About addition #52: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 2:53pmSize: 135 Characters M "She's ready, I considered asking you the same. I think the real question is how important is it to find out who's using her?"
About addition #53: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 2:55pmSize: 382 Characters Stormy is Editing "That is a good question. The thing is, it's our job to take her out, not to figure out who's using her. I've sent a message to the chief, and he knows, but we need to finish this job. She is ready," Sana said, somewhat sadly. "It's very sad for me to think like this, because I want her to live now." She laughed a bit, although it rang cold in Charlie's ears.
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"This is a mess and yet..."
*It's not so hard as all that to do,* Janus said, *It just requires you to cut the line that attaches a person's soul to their body.*
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About addition #57: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 3:10pmSize: 301 Characters Stormy is Editing "Well," Sana said, "The thing about cutting a person's soul from they're body is, it has to be a clean cut or you'll injure her soul."
*You take a blade of energy and cut the line with it. But first you have to get her out of her body. I think that won't be too hard.*
About addition #58: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 3:13pmSize: 92 Characters M "Do you have trouble making a clean cut?"
*Why is Sana so reluctant?*
About addition #59: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 3:14pmSize: 277 Characters Stormy is Editing "I botched up my first soul separation," Sana admitted. "I don't like to do it now, but I do, and I don't hurt them anymore, but the first time..." she trailed off.
*I think it reminds her of Jared,* Janus said, curling up on Charlie's shoulder.
About addition #60: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 3:23pmSize: 213 Characters M Charlie nodded, "I would offer to do it, but I think I should have more practice with my magic first. It sounds fairly straight forward, and I think you'll be fine. Are you worried about something else?"
About addition #61: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 3:25pmSize: 400 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana shook her head, setting the seat up right and turning on the car. "No, it's just a sadness that I feel. I think we should wait until dark, slip out of our bodies, we have to be out of our bodies to do this, then head to the hospital. We should be able to take care of this fairly quickly."
*I'll be going with you as a ghost as well,* Janus said, pleasure in his voice.
About addition #62: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 3:31pmSize: 240 Characters M Charlie nodded, "Sana, her life will be better in death at this point. She might find happiness if she lives, but the world is meant to be turning without her on it right now. She's way out of her proper place and time, you know?"
About addition #63: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 3:32pmSize: 200 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded, "I know, and I do know Charlie," she turned her eyes on him and he could see the sincerity in them. "I just can't help but feel badly. I'm too much of a softy that way."
About addition #64: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 3:35pmSize: 92 Characters M "I understand, but I wonder if we shouldn't just do this for the old woman as well."
About addition #65: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 3:37pmSize: 194 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded. "Perhaps. I'm wondering if that would be the best way." She looked thoughtful. "They have a branch of detectives that just go and do soul separations, you know?"
About addition #66: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 3:43pmSize: 492 Characters M "And we aren't them, but under these circumstances we may need to just... forgo our instincts and morals in order to right what is terribly wrong. If there are evil individuals gathering magic from many of those lingering on and we don't act swiftly, they will only gather more. If there's no time to figure out who's doing it than the best thing to do is get rid of the source. There are many reasons to keep someone alive I think, information, money, other resources. You know?"
About addition #67: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 3:45pmSize: 289 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded and headed them to a diner. "Yes, I do know. I think we've got to be cold for a little while. Our job isn't to just kill people, but you're correct in stating that that might be what we have to do. I don't like the concept but the necessity for it is overwhelming."
About addition #68: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 4:10pmSize: 111 Characters M "Will we be doing the wrong thing if we follow our instincts on this? I mean will we upset the chief?"
About addition #69: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 4:11pmSize: 282 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana shook her head, "No, ultimately it is our goal to bring these to the land of the dead. However we need to accomplish this is fine, so long as we don't cause any undo stress on the people involved." She stopped at the diner and got out, "I hope you're hungry."
About addition #70: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 4:14pmSize: 45 Characters M Charlie shrugged, "It is lunch time."
About addition #71: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 4:17pmSize: 166 Characters Stormy is Editing Lunch came and went fairly quickly, then Sana was taking them back to the new hotel room. "I think you need to practice getting in and out of your body now."
About addition #72: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 4:20pmSize: 105 Characters M "Show me the way," Charlie said, "and then maybe a nap since we intend to be up tonight?"
About addition #73: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 4:42pmSize: 259 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded, "Yes, indeed." She took them to the hotel and inside. "Let's see, nap first? No, I think we should practice first. Okay, the best way to do this is to lie down and close your eyes." She did what she said as she was saying it.
About addition #74: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 4:44pmSize: 80 Characters M Charlie followed suit, lying down on his bed and closing his eyes, then yawning.
About addition #75: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 4:45pmSize: 296 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana laughed, and Janus chuckled. "Next," Sana said, "you want to imagine that you're floating up out of your body. Some people do this in different ways, a cloud pushing them out, or any number of things. I imagine I'm sleeping and going for a walk alone. That works for me."
About addition #76: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 4:51pmSize: 350 Characters M Charlie realized that the key was to remember his body was separate from him. Since he automatically acquired it whenever they left the agency it was a difficult concept. He knew it intellectually, but not in his heart. He wrestled with it for a while, finally when he felt he'd gotten somewhere he tried imagining he was climbing out of his body.
About addition #77: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 4:54pmSize: 207 Characters Stormy is Editing It was like he was shedding his skin and becoming something fresh, clean, and new. He could feel the change, like his skin was incredibly sensitive.
*Good job, now take your shield with you.*
About addition #78: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 4:56pmSize: 47 Characters M He called his shield to follow his soul's skin.
About addition #79: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 4:58pmSize: 632 Characters Stormy is Editing It didn't like to do that, but after a moment, it slipped around him and he felt less exposed. When he opened his eyes and looked around, he saw that he was standing on the ground to the side of the bed, looking down at his body.
"Very good," Sana said from behind him. "I'm proud you did that in the first go, and that you wrestled your shield back to you as well." She clapped. "That took a lot more energy than you think it did, so we should get back inside, and take that nap. When we get up, we'll eat, then get out of our bodies. Perhaps it should be a pizza or wings night again."
About addition #80: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:02pmSize: 275 Characters M "Pizza sounds really good, mushrooms, green pepper and onions," Charlie replied, "and whatever you want," he added quickly. He hadn't had meat since the meatloaf incident. He wasn't sure why, it just didn't sound good to him. He slipped back into his body.
About addition #81: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:09pmSize: 344 Characters Stormy is Editing It was a strange feeling, meshing his soul with his body once again. It was odd, somewhat uncomfortable, and finally, once he was seated completely, he felt the click of two things joining completely.
"Good! And that pizza sounds really good, so I'm going to order it," Sana said as she bustled off into the other room.
About addition #82: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:11pmSize: 53 Characters M Charlie sat up slowly. *Practice will make perfect?*
About addition #83: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:14pmSize: 210 Characters Stormy is Editing Janus nodded, *Yes indeed. You're doing really well considering you've never done this before. I think you've got a lot of potential. No,* Janus shook his head, *I know you've got a lot of potential.*
About addition #84: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:15pmSize: 50 Characters M Charlie smiled warmly at him, "As do you."
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Sana returned to the room, and sat down on her bed. "It's strange how easy it is to do even after all this time."
About addition #86: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:24pmSize: 64 Characters M Charlie tipped his head questioningly, "ordering pizza?"
About addition #87: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:25pmSize: 246 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana laughed, "Yes, ordering pizza of course." She stretched out on her bed. "I had such a hard time getting out of my body the first time I did it. It took me three days to actually accomplish, I kept getting something stuck."
About addition #88: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:30pmSize: 123 Characters M "Three days? That makes me feel sort of badly for doing it on the first try. I guess I'm just good at that part."
About addition #89: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:31pmSize: 291 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana shook her head, "Don't feel bad, I think you've got a really good handle on magic is all. You're a natural." She laughed, "I'll never forget the time my legs got stuck and I couldn't seem to get out of them, and kept flopping on the ground, trying to get my feet out."
About addition #90: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:36pmSize: 140 Characters M "Fish out of water?" Charlie grinned, "Sorry, the images you just gave me. I hope you don't mind me finding that amusing."
About addition #91: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:39pmSize: 258 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana shook her head, "I laughed, didn't I?" She giggled again, "It doubled Loki over for... months I think, and then when I told Jared, he had fits as well." She got serious for a moment, "Then Loki forgot about it..." she shrugged.
About addition #92: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:44pmSize: 135 Characters M "Loki forgot? Why would he forget something like that?" Loki seemed the type who would enjoy and treasure a memory like that.
About addition #93: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:46pmSize: 352 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana looked at Charlie sharply. "Oh," she said, and shook her head, "I forgot you didn't know about that. Loki..." she paused then shook her head, "Loki has some memory issues. He... it's because of Kaine I think, but it's like a certain amount of his memories get... taken away sometimes. I don't completely understand it."
About addition #94: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:50pmSize: 75 Characters M Charlie looked at her, confused, "His stalker steals his memories?"
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About addition #96: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:55pmSize: 50 Characters M "So... the agency steals Loki's memories?"
About addition #97: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:56pmSize: 133 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded hesitantly, "I... I think so. I'm not really sure I understand it all so please don't ask me too much about it."
About addition #98: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 5:58pmSize: 105 Characters M Charlie shrugged, "Okay, don't worry about it Sana, it's just my curiosity. It's not important."
About addition #99: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 6:01pmSize: 346 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana shook her head, "It's not that I mind your curiosity, it's that it was... really hard for me to deal with at the time, and I don't really understand the whole thing." That was when there was a knock on the door, and Sana got up to pay for the pizza. She returned with it and placed it on Charlie's bed. "Smells delicious."
About addition #100: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 6:04pmSize: 157 Characters M Charlie had to agree. Once they'd eaten they napped, and when Einstein attempted to wake Charlie he succeeded on the first try. "Ready to go Sana?"
About addition #101: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 6:06pmSize: 272 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded, and exited her body. "Yes, let's get this over with quickly. I don't want this to take a long time, or I'll be thinking about it for years." She moved to the door. "Oh, and... try to remember that if you expect it to be solid, it will be."
About addition #102: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 6:10pmSize: 131 Characters M Charlie nodded and crawled out of his body, careful to retrieve his shield. "I'll try." He followed Sana to the hospital.
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About addition #104: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 6:47pmSize: 56 Characters M *Part of me feels like we should have done this sooner.*
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About addition #106: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 6:51pmSize: 98 Characters M *It would have been nice to spare her the break up though.* Charlie followed Sana to Lisa's room.
About addition #107: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 6:52pmSize: 228 Characters Stormy is Editing Once there, Charlie and Sana both recognized the black shadow hovering near Lisa's door. Sana put her finger to her lips and got close to Charlie. "I don't understand why he hasn't shown up on my radar," she whispered.
About addition #108: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 6:56pmSize: 37 Characters M Charlie shrugged, "What now?"
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About addition #110: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 7:00pmSize: 76 Characters M "I did last time and he escaped. I don't mind, but..." he shrugged.
About addition #111: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 7:01pmSize: 85 Characters Stormy is Editing "Well, the other option is to have you sever her line and I chase after him."
About addition #112: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 7:06pmSize: 229 Characters M Charlie closed his eyes and shook his head, "I sort of wanted to be there when... but I don't know how to do it." *If I agreed to sever it do you think I could make a clean enough cut? That wind energy is pretty sharp.*
About addition #113: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 7:07pmSize: 270 Characters Stormy is Editing "Perhaps we should go together after the shadow?" Sana pursed her lips. "I don't think you should try to sever it alone actually, and we can always return here."
*The wind energy is what you'd want to use. It'd be a good visualization.*
About addition #114: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 7:09pmSize: 65 Characters M "Let's give chase together than. Sorry to slow us down."
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"Who are you?" Sana asked but the girl struggled more fiercely.
About addition #120: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 7:24pmSize: 76 Characters M Charlie moved to her feet and pinned them so she couldn't kick Sana anymore.
About addition #121: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 7:28pmSize: 624 Characters Stormy is Editing "Who are you?" Sana asked, and the girl said something, but it was in a language that Charlie didn't recognize. Sana held the girl more firmly, and the girl turned her head to bite at Sana. Sana took her fist and held it up, and the girl went still. She said something in the same language the girl had used, and the girl shook her head, closing her eyes and struggling, however not as desperately as she had before.
"She's not talking, I think we need to tie her up and send her to the Chief." Sana held out one hand and flames rose around the girl, binding into her so she couldn't move.
About addition #122: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 7:30pmSize: 180 Characters M Charlie had no idea how any of this was going to work. "What language...?" Actually, it wasn't that important all things considered. "What do you need me to do?"
About addition #123: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 7:34pmSize: 208 Characters Stormy is Editing "Gaelic," Sana said, "I know it by chance. We need to put her somewhere safe. Perhaps to our room until we can send someone after her. Would you like to wait by Lisa's side until I return?"
About addition #124: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 7:37pmSize: 127 Characters M "Yes, I will." Charlie stood and went back to Lisa's room believing the door to not be solid he walked through easily.
About addition #125: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 7:47pmSize: 148 Characters Stormy is Editing "Charlie?" Lisa said from the bed. "Really then," she said, turning her head to look at him. "I didn't think it'd be you."
About addition #126: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 7:54pmSize: 130 Characters M His brow creased, "What do you mean?"
*She must be near death to see me correct? Or is it something else?*
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"Well, I knew that someone would be coming for me tonight, at least, I guessed. I'm past my time, aren't I? But you aren't the man I saw before." Her voice was soft, fading somewhat, but still very much alive.
About addition #128: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 8:02pmSize: 366 Characters M "St. Peter, you'll see him again. He comes whenever someone dies. When you slipped from him, I'm sure that was your proper time. Sana and I were here to help you with any unfinished business that might have kept you here, but I don't think that's what's kept you."
*What's bothering you Janus?*
"Did you get my note?"
About addition #129: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 8:09pmSize: 167 Characters Stormy is Editing "So, I should have died, but I didn't. Am I going to die now?"
*I didn't expect her to be able to see you. I'm just... uncertain, that's all.*
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*This is really odd, what's keeping her here at this point? I'm surprised we have to cut something.*
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"You're dead," said the serious voice of St. Peter. She turned and looked at him.
"Yeah? This means I can run then, right?" she sounded so hopeful. St. Peter nodded his head.
"Once I've explained a few things." She grinned.
"In a moment." She turned to Charlie. "Do you have a way for me to contact you now that I'm dead?"
About addition #136: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 8:32pmSize: 128 Characters M "I..." he smiled at St. Peter, "well, St. Peter should be able to tell you, or I can give you my email address."
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"Yes, it does," St. Peter said dryly.
About addition #138: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 8:41pmSize: 148 Characters M "He's in a hurry, let him do his speech. You're lucky to get individualized attention right away. I was on a school bus." He fell silent.
About addition #139: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 8:45pmSize: 882 Characters Stormy is Editing "Oh, sorry," she said, turning her attention back to St. Peter, "Please go ahead."
"You have options, now that you are dead. You may go to heaven, you may go to hell, you may stay on earth and you may be reborn. If you need to summon me, you may use the button in the middle. I will answer any questions you may have." He held out the watch, which looked significantly different from Charlie's. Lisa took it and nodded once.
"Thank you," she said, and gave St. Peter a smile. "I'm sorry I didn't come before." He shook his head.
"It is taken care of now, so that is fine. Do you have any questions?" She shook her head.
"Not now, maybe later, thank you." St. Peter nodded, and then disappeared. She turned to Charlie again.
"Email?"
About addition #140: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 8:51pmSize: 102 Characters M "It's raised_by_w0lves@yahoo.com," he spelled it out for her. "Will you remember it?"
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"That went better than expected," Sana said, smiling softly.
About addition #144: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 9:23pmSize: 137 Characters M Charlie nodded, "I don't really understand how it worked, but I'd label this one a success. How did things go with shadow girl?"
About addition #145: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/12/2007 @ 9:25pmSize: 132 Characters Stormy is Editing "She's tied up for the moment, and I've notified the Chief, someone's coming to pick her up this evening. How do you feel?"
About addition #146: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 7:21amSize: 113 Characters M "I... feel like good things have happened tonight. Should we look in on that old woman while we're out?"
About addition #147: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 7:56amSize: 112 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded, "I think that would be a good idea. Shall we?" She motioned towards the door with a smile.
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About addition #151: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:17amSize: 375 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded hesitantly. "There are two ways, one would be like announcing our presence with fanfare. The other would be like trying to sneak into her house, which I'm not very good at. It's possible its something she does at night, many people protect themselves more when they sleep." She walked closer and started moving around the house, looking for something.
About addition #152: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:22amSize: 106 Characters M Charlie followed, "Announcing ourselves with fanfare sort of defeats our purpose don't you think?"
About addition #153: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:27amSize: 532 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded, "Yes, I do, that's why I'm looking for the flaw. Usually every shield has some kind of flaw in it, a place where the magic isn't exactly right, where it's a little thin. With a shield like yours, with the different layers, it would take a very long time to find that flaw, as you'd have to figure it out on each layer, it wouldn't be the same place on all of them. So," she peered around another side, moving again, "I'm trying to figure out where it is here. It could be under ground, or overhead."
About addition #154: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:33amSize: 184 Characters M Although he didn't know exactly what to look for Charlie began examining the shield as well. He circled after Sana, his eyes on the barrier seeking something that was not quite right.
About addition #155: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:35amSize: 193 Characters Stormy is Editing What he found was that the barrier was like a waterfall, starting at the top of the house and flowing to the bottom. The energy washed down the the house and thinned out a bit near the ground.
About addition #156: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:41amSize: 124 Characters M "Doesn't it seem to thin out at the ground?" He stared at it, trying to determine what it might be like underneath.
About addition #157: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:47amSize: 193 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded, "Yes, that's what I've noticed as well. I'm thinking of going underground and looking for the flaw there, do you want to try to follow me or does the concept disturb you?"
About addition #158: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:54amSize: 78 Characters M "It does disturb me a bit, but I really want to go. How do we do it?"
About addition #159: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:58amSize: 499 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana came over and reached out a hand. "Well, first, you have to do the normal bit of thinking that things aren't solid. But see, you have to think of something as solid, or you'll slide through the earth and get stuck somewhere. What I do, is find a nice tree," she looked around a bit, and pointed with her other hand to a large tree nearby. "And imagine it's roots as solid, but the ground as not. That way, I can step on the roots, but slip through the ground. Make sense?"
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About addition #164: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 9:28amSize: 82 Characters M "Yes, it really is." He looked around for the shield they'd bee studying.
About addition #165: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 9:35amSize: 306 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana took a few steps forward, and looked up, finding the blue of the round shield. "There," she said, pointing to a spot that was almost dead center of the bottom. "That's the flaw, see how it's very thin there, like it's connected, but just barely? That's what we've been looking for."
About addition #166: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 9:43amSize: 187 Characters M "I see it," excitement was clear in Charlie's voice. He was pretty sure he'd be able to spot such a thing again if he needed to. "What do we do now that we've found it?"
About addition #167: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 9:47amSize: 395 Characters Stormy is Editing "Well, this is the hard part. In order to break through a shield without anyone noticing, you have to become part of the shield, and then move through it. So," she paused, and walked up a few roots closer to the shield. "What I need to do, is take some of my energy, and make it her energy. Which might take me a few minutes, because, like I said, I'm not very good at this."
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About addition #170: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 10:07amSize: 123 Characters M "Take your time," Charlie said, "I can't do it at all yet, so I have no idea how quickly it might be done."
About addition #171: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 10:11amSize: 432 Characters Stormy is Editing "Loki is very good at this, it takes him a mere moment to do it." She relaxed, and then the blue got darker, forming almost the same color as the water around the house. She strained a bit more, then the colors matched, and it was like the magic was flowing around her. "Take my hand," she said, reaching the hand she wasn't holding towards the house to him, "I need to bring you into my shield for this."
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It was a strange feeling, like water rushing through his system, and they rose into a nicely cleaned, mostly wooden furnished living room. "We're in," Sana said softly, looking around the room.
About addition #174: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 10:51amSize: 177 Characters M "What are the chances we were noticed? Or does the fact that we are in mean that we weren't detected?" Charlie looked around as well. "It's a beautiful home."
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"Unless the person of the house comes and finds you," said a crotchety voice. There was a set of stairs that was just visible through a doorway and the old woman was standing at the foot of them, dressed in night clothes and holding an old lantern. "I'm not dead yet," she said. Sana sighed.
"Well, I said I wasn't very good at it," she said forlornly.
About addition #176: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 11:05amSize: 113 Characters M "You have a beautiful home," Charlie said turning to her. "Did your husband make the furniture?"
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"You're protecting it all, aren't you?" Sana said, and the lady looked up sharply.
"As much as I can, for as long as I can!"
About addition #178: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 11:18amSize: 182 Characters M "He did a beautiful job," Charlie said with a smile. Then he allowed a more serious expression to take over. "Do you know that you're family has been being hunted?"
About addition #179: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 11:21amSize: 430 Characters Stormy is Editing "Do you think I don't know that?!" she bellowed out in anger. "Do you think I couldn't tell when my line was dwindling away and I could feel everyone leave me? Of course I knew it!" She collapsed into the rocking chair. "Of course I knew it, and there's nothing else I can do. I'm the only one left, if I die... how will the legacy continue?" Her voice was small and soft now, with a hint of despair.
About addition #180: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 11:26amSize: 207 Characters M Charlie came over and knelt on the floor near her. He spoke very softly. "There is one other, but your children fear that if you find him those who have been hunting your family will find him too."
About addition #181: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 11:30amSize: 554 Characters Stormy is Editing She looked up at him with amazement in her eyes. "There is? There truly is? You aren't lying to me, are you?" she said, anger rising in her voice now.
"No," Sana said, stepping closer now and putting a hand on her shoulder. "I've asked for a Guardian Angel to watch over the child. That way, he has a bit more protection." The woman looked between Charlie and Sana.
"If I find him, he'll die for sure. But... I wanted to know there was hope, that someone remained. Bards are so rare."
About addition #182: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 12:20pmSize: 197 Characters M "There is hope," Charlie replied, "and there's really nothing you can do at this point to provide more hope. It's possible that no one alive knows about him at this point but you."
About addition #183: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 12:25pmSize: 272 Characters Stormy is Editing She sighed. "I knew you two weren't with Eldercare Angels." She shrugged, "The canned veggies were good though."
Sana smiled and nodded. "Glad you approved. The child will be watched over, and protected, you've done all you can."
About addition #184: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 12:31pmSize: 63 Characters M Charlie watched her, wondering if she would move on on her own.
About addition #185: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 12:43pmSize: 960 Characters Stormy is Editing "This is the end of the line for me then, huh?" the woman said, and Sensana grinned.
"Of course not, it's just the beginning." The woman snorted and shook her head.
"Beginning huh, that's strange to hear from a person who deals in death."
"Death is only the beginning of a new life, didn't you know?" Sana smiled softly and stood up. "Don't think that because you are going to die, you aren't going to live anymore."
"Hmph, sappy women like you make the rest of us seem weak."
"Why don't you trust a little bit?"
There was a shudder through the woman's body, then she stood up, except that she was still slumped in the rocking chair.
"Is this what it feels like to be dead?" she said.
"You're dead," came the voice that Charlie was beginning to get used to hearing.
About addition #186: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 12:49pmSize: 193 Characters M "It is," Charlie told her, "I wish you the best." He smiled at Sana and nodded at the door. "Shall we?" he asked softly, so St. Peter could get on with his own duties.
About addition #187: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 1:01pmSize: 296 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded, and headed out of the house. The shield was gone, so there was nothing stopping them from walking straight through the door.
"I didn't think that would work so well. So that's two cases down, and I'm sure they'll give us more when we tell them they're done."
About addition #188: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 1:21pmSize: 430 Characters M For the next two and a half months they went from case to case some easy, some hard, some boring, some fascinating. For Charlie it was a time of constant learning as he mastered shielding fast, manipulating elemental energies and his gift. He was able to speak with any creature on the earth, with the exception of humans. They were full of information and occasionally willing to help him out, especially for favors in return.
About addition #189: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 1:26pmSize: 516 Characters Stormy is Editing "Here we are!" Sana said, looking at the docks and seeing the cruise ship they were going to be boarding soon. "I can't wait!" She took Charlie's hand and started walking them towards it in excitement. She laughed as she walked, and Janus yawned loudly in Charlie's ear.
*What's she so excited about this early?* he said. Janus had grown over the past few months, becoming a creature that didn't look neglected, and instead glowing in bright silver and looking sleek and beautiful.
About addition #190: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 1:32pmSize: 160 Characters M *Our new mission, it's on a cruise ship.* Charlie smiled, it was exciting. He'd never dreamed of going on a cruise and yet here he was boarding a cruise ship.
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"Isn't it beautiful out here Charlie?" Sana called, waving from near the boat.
About addition #192: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 1:41pmSize: 196 Characters M *Of course,* he replied, sympathetic enough. They could have used a bit more sleep, all of them.
"It's quite beautiful," Charlie agreed. "I'm very excited myself."
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"I hope this goes smoothly, I can't believe we have such work to do." She sighed as she looked at the ship. "And honestly, I didn't want to lose my best clothes, so I sent them back to the Agency."
About addition #194: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 1:50pmSize: 79 Characters M Charlie shook his head, "What makes you think we'll loose our clothes?"
About addition #195: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 1:56pmSize: 237 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana turned to him. "Out in the middle of the ocean, who knows what could happen." She blinked, "Don't you think it's possible the ship will sink into the ocean? I'd hate to lose those beautiful clothes I just bought!"
About addition #196: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 1:59pmSize: 204 Characters M Charlie blinked back at her, "I think it's pretty rare for cruise ships to sink." Then he shook his head, "But it's probably best that you aren't worrying about your clothes in any case."
About addition #197: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 2:03pmSize: 331 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded and watched as they lowered the ramp. "And now it's time!" she said gleefully.
Once they were checked in, had gotten their clothes into the ship, and they were on their way, Sana walked out onto the deck and looked out at the sea. "I've always loved water, though not as much as Jared."
About addition #198: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 2:06pmSize: 178 Characters M "Mmhmm, you've really been missing him lately haven't you?" Charlie joined her, looking into the water. "It's beautiful, the air smells so crisp near the ocean."
About addition #199: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 2:12pmSize: 187 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana rested her head on the railing. "Yeah, I miss him. It's been months and I haven't seen him. That's so long for me." She took a deep breath. "I love the air too."
About addition #200: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 2:16pmSize: 239 Characters M The two of them stood there in silence for a bit, watching as people filled the boat. Then, slowly, the boat began to move away from the dock out into the ocean. "It seems like there's no end in site with these cases doesn't it?"
About addition #201: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 2:18pmSize: 303 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded. "We've been in the general Florida area for months, and we're finally going on a cruise, and it's our first time out of the state. Its like as soon as one gets solved, three or four more are found. I think I'm seriously going to need to take my vacation after this is over with."
About addition #202: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 2:56pmSize: 261 Characters M Charlie smiled and nodded, watching the waves as they moved further into the ocean. "I think everyone is probably feeling that way. Too bad I probably haven't earned any vacation time yet. Although for me a normal case load might feel like vacation."
About addition #203: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 3:02pmSize: 143 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana laughed and nodded, picking her head up to look at Charlie. "Yes, probably. I wonder if I can catch something for Jared's tank."
About addition #204: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 3:12pmSize: 91 Characters M "Maybe, that would be fun, although... would you be able to get it to him in time?"
About addition #205: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 3:23pmSize: 225 Characters Stormy is Editing "I could send it to the Agency. He's probably out on missions, but if I marked open immediately, someone would have to take care of it right away." She looked thoughtful. "Maybe it wouldn't be a good idea."
About addition #206: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 3:29pmSize: 219 Characters M "I understand the desire though. If only we had a way of taking care of it properly in the interim." He looked around the deck, no one was especially close to them. "So, what are we doing here again?"
About addition #207: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 6:05pmSize: 238 Characters Stormy is Editing "This is a cruise liner that many elderly take yearly. There are five people here on this cruise that should have died months ago. We're to make a disease attack passengers and only kill those five." Sana whispered back to him.
About addition #208: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 6:09pmSize: 247 Characters M "Oh, this is that one," it had gotten to the point where the facts of each case were bumping together and scrambling in his mind. "I haven't been looking forward to that. At least we get a nice environment for our terrible deed."
About addition #209: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 6:11pmSize: 302 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded. "I agree. That's another reason why we might lose luggage, I mean if we aren't careful, we could kill the whole ship off." She sighed, "I don't particularly like these kinds of missions either. It's something that I feel they should send out the Special's for, not us."
About addition #210: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 6:17pmSize: 140 Characters M "I just don't like the whole disease scenario, it's very messy and we don't even have the option of helping them move on naturally."
About addition #211: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 6:18pmSize: 192 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana shook her head, "I think they're getting impatient, honestly. Things keep piling up and it's like there's no end in sight. I can't blame them, but... you're right, it is messy."
About addition #212: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 6:28pmSize: 328 Characters M "Over two months and no relief in sight. I think there may be a deeper problem, beyond Loki, that is not being addressed." He thought about that as he looked out across the water. Finally he shook his head. "I think I'll go find our room and spend some time with Einstein. Let me know if you need anything."
About addition #213: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 6:30pmSize: 185 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded, then said, "Do you think we'll get to swim in it?" to no one in particular.
*Gods I hope not,* Janus said, his head untucking, *I think she'd drown.*
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"Einstein, give me the information on the five senior citizens destined for disease that I looked up last week."
About addition #215: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 6:44pmSize: 476 Characters Stormy is Editing "Certainly Charlie," Einstein said, drawing up the information asked. File pages appeared on the screen, with arrows for moving between the pages.
*Nice indeed,* Janus said, hopping down off of Charlie's shoulder and taking a sniff around the room. He started exploring each corner and seeing how to move around it all. This was a habit he had these days, checking to make sure the place wasn't bugged and see where all he could get to from the room.
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About addition #217: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 6:55pmSize: 306 Characters Stormy is Editing *Oh, I'm quite sure of that.* Janus sniffed around a bit more, then moved onto a windowsill. *He does like his deaths to be on time, and not delayed.*
Most of them seemed simply delighted to be wandering around the world without a care. There was nothing particularly striking about them.
About addition #218: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 6:59pmSize: 243 Characters M "Hm, I remember now, I thought then and I still do, that something is being missed here. I just don't have enough information to tell what." He studied a bit longer then sighed. "You can move to standby Einstein, thank you."
About addition #219: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 7:01pmSize: 246 Characters Stormy is Editing "Certainly Charlie," Einstein said, and his screen went blank.
*Yes, something is definitely missing. The question is what. Oh look, a bird.* Janus sniffed at the creature that was currently sitting on the sill with him.
About addition #220: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 7:05pmSize: 64 Characters M *Hello,* Charlie addressed the bird, *how are you this morning?*
About addition #221: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 7:06pmSize: 149 Characters Stormy is Editing The bird started singing and said, *Wonderfully! The cruise is about to start, so I get to sneak all kinds of things off of the buffet outside now.*
About addition #222: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 7:28pmSize: 114 Characters M *Do you spend your time following the cruise ship?* Charlie asked with interest, slipping Einstein into his case.
About addition #223: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 7:32pmSize: 127 Characters Stormy is Editing *Oh yes! The food is great, my mate has a nest up near the top of the ship.* The bird chirruped a few more times in pleasure.
About addition #224: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 7:51pmSize: 157 Characters M *That's wonderful, be careful while you're collecting, and if you see anything unusual come to me. I trade food for information and soft nesting materials.*
About addition #225: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:11pmSize: 300 Characters Stormy is Editing The bird chirruped again in pleasure. *Certainly! I'll remember that!* With that, the bird flew off, leaving only the warm feeling of it in Charlie's mind as a reminder that it had even been there.
*Well, we've started getting our scouts out already. It never takes long with you.*
About addition #226: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:22pmSize: 180 Characters M *It helped that you pointed him out. Thanks for that.* Charlie put his laptop case over his shoulder. *Do you want to stay and rest or come check out the buffet tables with me?*
About addition #227: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:25pmSize: 265 Characters Stormy is Editing *Check the buffet of course, there should be something to nibble on for even me.* Janus lept down and back up onto Charlie's shoulder. The move was so common now that Charlie could walk while Janus did it and Janus wouldn't even falter or miss Charlie's shoulder.
About addition #228: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:29pmSize: 57 Characters M *You're feeling better than,* Charlie noted as he walked.
About addition #229: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:32pmSize: 256 Characters Stormy is Editing *I'm awake you mean? Yes, I think for the moment, I'm awake. There are three different mouse holes in the walls. If there are mice alive, I'll let you know this evening.* Janus looked around as they moved, keeping his eyes on the people milling around.
About addition #230: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:39pmSize: 185 Characters M Charlie nodded, "Good, thanks." He found the buffet and filled a plate with fruits, veggies, cheese and crackers. Then he looked around for any of their five victims, or Sana.
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About addition #232: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 8:54pmSize: 80 Characters M *What looks good to you?* Charlie moved to the table, "May I join you?"
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"Certainly!" Said a gentleman, motioning to a seat near him.
"Oh of course, although I can't guarantee we'll be much for conversation, we're a little old these days," said the younger of the two ladies. The other lady giggled.
About addition #234: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 9:02pmSize: 132 Characters M "I think that makes people even better conversationalists," Charlie replied, joining them as he handed a carrot up to Janus.
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"What a great pet!" she said, watching Janus.
"I'm glad you think we'll be good for conversation, I only hope we can live up to your expectations," the younger lady said. She held out her hand, "Lynn Adams, I used to be a reporter in my day."
About addition #236: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 9:12pmSize: 147 Characters M "Charlie Barns," he replied automatically, "professional teenager," he grinned, "and this is Janus, God of new beginnings."
About addition #237: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 9:14pmSize: 295 Characters Stormy is Editing Janus bowed and the older lady clapped again. Lynn shook his hand confidently and let go, motioning to the lady at her side. "This is Emily Fletcher," she motioned to the gentleman, "and this is Edward Arkhose." Edward nodded, and Emily held out her hand for Charlie to shake.
About addition #238: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 9:18pmSize: 148 Characters M Charlie shook it and nodded to Edward, "It's very nice to meet all of you. They sure do provide a lot of food on these cruises don't they?"
About addition #239: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 9:19pmSize: 397 Characters Stormy is Editing "Is this your first cruise?" Emily asked, a smile forming on her face, "They're so much fun!"
"Of course they provide a lot of food, dear boy," Edward said, a laugh in his voice, "If they didn't we'd all be angry!" Lynn laughed as well and nodded.
"We pay for that luxury. They certainly get enough money from us," Lynn said.
About addition #240: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 9:26pmSize: 255 Characters M "Yes," Charlie told Emily, "it's my very first cruise ever. Actually, it's the first time I've gone on anything like a vacation." He smiled, *and it's only a little like a vacation let me tell you.* He handed another carrot up to Janus.
About addition #241: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 9:33pmSize: 529 Characters Stormy is Editing Janus took it and started nibbling. *And it's only a little like a cruise. Who knows when we'll be done, although I suspect Sana will try to delay it for some relaxation time.*
"Oh, cruises are wonderful for the spirit," Edward said, taking a deep breath.
"Indeed, I always feel better afterwards," Lynn added.
"I can't imagine only going on one cruise a year, I can't stand to be away from the water," Emily smiled, breathing in the scent of the salt water.
About addition #242: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/13/2007 @ 9:39pmSize: 161 Characters M "The water is amazing. I love the scent of the air," Charlie agreed. "I've honestly never had the opportunity to breath such invigorating air."
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"Again being philosophical? I don't agree myself." Lynn shrugged, "But I was a journalist, and a realist as well."
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"Oh, scientists don't agree on much these days," Lynn interrupted, "In fact, it seems their goals are to disagree rather than agree."
About addition #246: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Tue, 08/14/2007 @ 7:33amSize: 98 Characters M Charlie smiled and ate some grapes, allowing the two to discuss as they might if he weren't there.
About addition #247: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Tue, 08/14/2007 @ 7:42amSize: 511 Characters Stormy is Editing "Well, honestly," Emily began.
It was several minutes later before they stopped talking and realized that Charlie was still there. Emily seemed to sit right in the middle of what Lynn and Edward believed. The whole conversation was quite interesting overall, as all three of them were fairly well informed on the subject.
"Sorry," Emily said, a small blush taking over her cheeks, "I'd nearly forgotten you were there. You must have been terribly bored."
About addition #248: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Tue, 08/14/2007 @ 7:46amSize: 245 Characters M "Not at all, I'm just not nearly well enough opinionated to join in. Besides, I would only tip the balance in someones favor."
*Another carrot, or something else?* Charlie had finished over half his food while listening.
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"Well, opinions come with time and knowledge," Edward said, smiling. "You certainly haven't had enough time to decide all of your opinions."
About addition #250: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Tue, 08/14/2007 @ 7:53amSize: 215 Characters M Charlie shook his head, "No, I haven't, although I think experience contributes as well." He handed Janus some celery, "It seems like the more people have experienced the more opinionated they are."
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"I was a simple house wife," Emily said, "I did a lot of reading, but I was mostly involved with keeping the house nice and my children well fed. Now that the children have moved away, I have nothing much more to do." She shrugged, and smiled.
About addition #254: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Tue, 08/14/2007 @ 8:07amSize: 241 Characters M Charlie nodded, "I think the one career which most badly needs to recruit is that of housewife," he told her. "I know I always wished I could get a few minutes of my mothers attention during which she was not upset with me."
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About addition #256: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Tue, 08/14/2007 @ 11:35amSize: 245 Characters M "I believe that to be completely true," Charlie replied, "based on the observations I've made over the last 16 and a half years." He winked and grinned. The he popped his last grape in his mouth and handed Janus an apple wedge.
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Lynn shook her head, "Not everyone is cut out to be a housewife, that's another problem."
"Oh, I agree," Edward said, nodding his head. "My wife was terrible at it, but she kept trying. She got a decent routine after a while, but at first! Oh, the terrible things she did." He chuckled.
About addition #258: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Wed, 08/15/2007 @ 8:53amSize: 251 Characters M "I suppose I see that," Charlie replied, "but many people aren't cut out for the jobs they take. They have to learn them. Still, I do hate thinking of people trapped into doing things they don't like. I hope I never feel like that."
About addition #259: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Wed, 08/15/2007 @ 8:57amSize: 417 Characters Stormy is Editing "There you are Charlie!" came the familiar voice of Sensana from behind him. The three at the table with him looked up and smiled.
"Hello," said Edward, and the other two greeted her as well.
"Hello," Sana's carroty hair, done in the same way she had done for the antique store lady, bounced around her face. "I've been looking all over for my brother."
About addition #260: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Wed, 08/15/2007 @ 9:06amSize: 191 Characters M "I didn't see you, so I sat down with them," Charlie replied, "This is Edward, Emily and Lyn," he introduced, "and this is my elder sibling Sana." He grinned at Sana.
About addition #261: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Wed, 08/15/2007 @ 9:15amSize: 444 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana smiled back. "It's very nice to meet you all, I hope he hasn't been any trouble."
"Oh no!" Lynn said, smiling and extending her hand. "He's been very nice to talk to." Sana shook it and Emily piped up.
"He's a right delight, your parents did a good job raising him." Sana nodded, and shook Emily's hand as well.
"Thank you, I know they worked hard."
About addition #262: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Wed, 08/15/2007 @ 9:23amSize: 159 Characters M "Oh yes," Charlie agreed, although not with the spirit of Sana's statement, just with the words. "Both of our parents definitely worked hard."
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"If it's really alright?" All three of them agreed, and she took a seat, and joined in on the conversation.
It was about an hour before they all excused themselves, Sana walking with Charlie down one of the hallways.
"What did you think?" she asked, glancing at him.
About addition #264: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Wed, 08/15/2007 @ 9:37amSize: 419 Characters M "I think they are as described. I find it interesting that the cruises revitalize them. They all agreed on that much and it makes me suspicious, not that I don't think cruises would refresh a person. It's just when you consider age and due dates and such." He spoke softly as they walked, pitching his voice to carry only to her. "It makes me feel just a little more rotten about this whole thing."
About addition #265: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Wed, 08/15/2007 @ 9:39amSize: 252 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded, "I've been wondering if there was something in particular that happens on these cruises, and it makes them live longer." She glanced at him again, then looked at the walk in front of her. "Perhaps it's just my curiosity."
About addition #266: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Wed, 08/15/2007 @ 9:46amSize: 343 Characters M "Do you think? I wonder if you aren't just feeling like I'm feeling. If we don't get to the root of what's going on we're just going to be running our tushies off for the next several years." He fell silent looking out across the water. "I'd rather cut every life line than create a disease. I wonder why I feel that way."
About addition #267: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Thu, 08/16/2007 @ 8:06amSize: 340 Characters Stormy is Editing "Because you don't have any indication that it will only affect the people who we are targeting." Sana smiled at him, stopping and staring out at the water herself. "I don't completely understand, but I think you're correct in believing that if we don't get to the roots, the seeds'll grow into something we can't handle."
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(by the by, Charlie is actually only 13, I made him 16ish in this... Sorry 'bout that.)
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Sana grinned, "Swim!" she said happily. "Wanna go change?"
About addition #272: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Thu, 08/16/2007 @ 8:33amSize: 285 Characters M Charlie nodded, "let's go." He couldn't imagine how she was going to pull off a swimsuit, unless her body really was female. Still, Loki had been pretty clear and Sana had confirmed plenty of times since that she was actually male. It was easy to forget, but a bathing suit?
About addition #273: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Thu, 08/16/2007 @ 8:41amSize: 474 Characters Stormy is Editing She led them to the room, where she disappeared into the bathroom, emerging a little while later in a one piece that had a decently long skirt. It was floral, with a black background, large bright flowers splayed across it. Although Charlie knew better, it looked as though she had something, something by way of a chest, granted, not much.
"I'm so excited!" she said, wrapping her arms around herself. "I haven't been swimming in so long!"
About addition #274: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Thu, 08/16/2007 @ 8:59amSize: 281 Characters M Charlie shook his head and smiled, amazed at Sana's ingenuity. "I like your swimsuit, it looks nice on you," he said, knowing it would please her and really the swimsuit did impress him. "Do you think it would be okay to bring Janus's hammock so he can sunbathe?"
About addition #275: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Thu, 08/16/2007 @ 11:10amSize: 191 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana blushed and nodded. "I can't imagine why it wouldn't be alright. Thank you for the compliment."
*Thank you,* Janus said softly, pleasure dripping from each word.
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*You're very welcome, you probably won't want to swim. I'm pretty sure it'll be full of chlorine.*
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Janus shook his head, his hair fluffing out. *No, no chlorine. Yuck.*
About addition #278: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Thu, 08/16/2007 @ 11:25amSize: 486 Characters M "Yes," Charlie joined her as they traveled to the swimming pool. It felt silly really, there they were floating along on an ocean, in a boat, about to swim in a pool when there was water everywhere. He swam for a while, joining in a brief game of catch with a large beach ball. Most of the occupants on the ship had no interest in such a rowdy passtime however and it died out quickly. Eventually he found himself on his towel browsing the internet in the sun next to Janus.
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About addition #280: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Thu, 08/16/2007 @ 11:36amSize: 274 Characters M *The concept of elemental magic is a common one,* Charlie was not researching the case. There was simply no research to be done for this one. *I've just been reading about some of the cultures and religions which believe in and practice it. It's really very interesting.*
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About addition #284: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Thu, 08/16/2007 @ 12:03pmSize: 326 Characters M Absently Charlie reached over and pet Janus as he continued to read. He really did feel like he was on vacation. For the first time since dying he truly felt there was nothing he needed to do at the moment. Eventually he fell asleep, Einstein above him and Janus beside him, the bright sun beaming down on his now dry back.
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"Charlie?" a hand was on his shoulder, shaking him gently.
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He was lying on a towel somewhere warm. It felt nice. He didn't open his eyes.
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About addition #290: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Fri, 08/17/2007 @ 8:15amSize: 266 Characters M He smiled, "You're really worried about me crisping aren't you?" He moved so there was room for her to sit down and told her about the dream with the clouds. "So it was odd, but I don't really think it was significant. Too much reading I suppose."
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About addition #292: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Fri, 08/17/2007 @ 8:29amSize: 226 Characters M "Am I? Well, if I am I haven't let myself know. I was just reading about elemental magic but I wasn't really feeling anxious. I mean wouldn't I pretty much be air? That seems to be my strongest element... I think."
About addition #293: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sat, 08/18/2007 @ 8:07amSize: 207 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana nodded, "Yes, air seems to be your strongest. Perhaps you have a mix of them all, like a spirit person would." She shrugged. "Perhaps the dream means nothing, and I'm overanalizying."
About addition #294: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sat, 08/18/2007 @ 3:37pmSize: 106 Characters M Charlie smiled at her warmly, "Or maybe not. I have no idea. So, did you get tired of swimming?"
About addition #295: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/19/2007 @ 12:21amSize: 126 Characters Stormy is Editing She shrugged, "I'm getting crispy. I wanted to get out for a bit and maybe eat something for lunch. Are you hungry?"
About addition #296: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/19/2007 @ 12:24amSize: 236 Characters M "Wasn't that lunch earlier? Oh no, breakfast huh? They sure did have some weird stuff out for breakfast." Charlie got everything together. "Lunch is fine for me." He followed her back to the ever full buffet tables.
About addition #297: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/19/2007 @ 12:26amSize: 189 Characters Stormy is Editing "I believe they're trying to cater to all the different types of people and what they might like at each time of the day," Sana said, walking up to the tables and peering over them.
About addition #298: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/19/2007 @ 12:31amSize: 126 Characters M Charlie made his choices, consulting Janus every once in a while to see what he wanted, then looked around for a place to sit.
About addition #299: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/19/2007 @ 12:36amSize: 262 Characters Stormy is Editing The three people he'd been sitting with earlier were in a corner table with another person he recognized from the list of people who they were supposed to kill. Sana looked up and glanced over to where Charlie's eyes had caught. "Wanna go bother them?"
About addition #300: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/19/2007 @ 12:41amSize: 176 Characters M "Might as well. I find that people sit still for meals, so it makes them easier to talk to." He headed for the table, taking Sana's suggestion as permission to do so.
About addition #301: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/19/2007 @ 12:42amSize: 237 Characters Stormy is Editing Sana trailed a little slower behind Charlie, but kept up well enough. When they got within sight of the table, Edward looked up and smiled at Charlie, waving slightly.
"Charlie, Sana! Come, come and sit with us."
About addition #302: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Sun, 08/19/2007 @ 12:48amSize: 199 Characters M Charlie sat down with a smile, turning immediately to the new individual who'd joined the group.
"Hello, I didn't meet you earlier. I'm Charlie," he offered his hand to shake.
About addition #303: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Sun, 08/19/2007 @ 12:54amSize: 203 Characters Stormy is Editing The man took it and shook it pleasantly, a smile on his lips, "No, I was in my rooms resting earlier. My name is Ben, I am an old friend of these three." He motioned to the others at the table.
About addition #304: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/20/2007 @ 8:21amSize: 120 Characters M "Hello, I'm Charlie and this is Sana." Charlie chatted with the people who he was starting to know fairly well.
About addition #305: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/20/2007 @ 8:42amSize: 311 Characters Stormy is Editing Ben seemed to add a note of complete and utter randomness to everything. He would agree with people, but then disagree a moment later, on some technicality. Overall, the whole conversation was a certain amount more amusing than the last one. Ben had a lot of energy and spoke quite well, and quite vibrantly.
About addition #306: By: M ![View m_evergreen's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif) Added: Mon, 08/20/2007 @ 11:59amSize: 182 Characters M Charlie truly enjoyed the conversation, and spent a great deal of the time listening. *I wonder what they'll do when they're dead. I hate to think of making them suffer, you know?*
About addition #307: By: Stormy is Editing ![View stormlyht's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) Added: Mon, 08/20/2007 @ 12:11pmSize: 112 Characters Stormy is Editing |