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| [Introduction]
After every human war had ever occured, 2050 had ended every war from ever starting again with a tight and permenant alliance. Soon, they formed a comminity that reached for the stars. Mars, colonized, and soon other planets beyond the Solar System were colonized after the invention of hyper speed. After 507 years, the comminity known as United Galaxies formed its first Galactic Army. The UGAA. United Galaxies Army Alliance, humans with specialized training. That training will now be put to use by these men when they enter the middle of a civil war between colored Nations. The Elementalists. Stickman human elemental weilding people with massive weapons. The Red Imperialists Vs the Blue Nationalists, The 5 clans, Black, Gray, Brown Orange and Purple fight the mighty empires of the Yellow Legion. And the Green Republic, fights along side the clans and Blues. 2 Corrupted council governments, the Reds and Yellows spread throughout the Galaxy to spread their empires. Other aliens will also come in the path to aid the humans. Aliens known as Anthros or other alien species. will do all they can to end the deadly civil war. |
 MS  Now I hadn't made much Scifi stories, so this is kinda the second for Writing.com. This Campfire story is a mixture of Mass Effect and Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic.Jordan Maxamillan: Fleet Commander of the Star Fleet, Black Scorpians. Yellow hair and dark trimmed beard. Kyle Armando: Human soldier of the Black Scorpion Land Forces. Messy blue hair and muscular physics for a 25 year old. Kind and kindered personallity, and a strong troop. Nate Armando: Brother of Kyle, blue hair cropped and thin shaped and slender. More arrogant, comical and enthusiastic and 5 years older than Kyle. --- Black Scorpian star fleet scaled through out the outerim of the galaxy. Rebel attacks had increased each week yet a lot were very unsuccsessful. The Black Scorpians were sent on a mission by the council to find a Rebel Headquarters on an astroid colony. After one recent attack on planet Eden, a tracking device was planet on an enemy carrier to trace its signal back to base. Jordan Maxamillian, leader of the fleet, was determined to end the rebels attacks with their strike fleet. Two brothers, soliders of the ground force, volunteered to lead the attack against the astroid base. On the Flagship, Leonidas, Jordan calls out through the intercom and ordered everyone to get to the shuttles. "Attention! Attention! All ground forces are to report to the hanger bay! We have found the base repeat we have found the base! Prepare to board and take over. Whatever you do don't harm any civillians in there!" he said on the communicator. Twiga Meanwhile on a faraway planet an intelligent races (Actually several races) Were watching the black scorpions through their telescopes.This planet was Elder, home of the Anthros a planet where every animal was intelligent highly unusaul for a planet where normaly one species becomes the dominant one. "What do you make of it?" Asked a young Fox-Woman "I don't know..." The Fox-Man said "They could be friendly extraterristrials or they could be hostle." The fox man continued to watch through his telescope. Suddenly there was an explostion! Not in space but in the laboritory behind the two foxes! "What the hell?" The Fox-Man crused He rushed into the lab, the Silvery Bat Anthro who was his asstant was coughing through the smoke. "What happened Inky?" The fox asked the bat "I don't know what happened Mr. Ontario!" The Bat stammered "I was testing that peice of Extra-terrestrial stone we found in the water chamber...And it just exploded!" "Leco!" The Fox's wife called to him "Come look at this! What was too be seen through the telescope was unbeleivable! The Black Scorpions were being chased by Rebel Fighter Aces! "So..." Leco Ontario the fox said "They are a warlike race. We should prepare for a possible invastion." Steve Ellen The Leonidas performed a double helix maneuver, a fast twisting spiral that kept them just out of the reach of the rebel gunship chasing them. "Where did they get that kind of firepower?" yelled the Leonidas' navigator. "Surprise, surprise," Commander Jordan said. "Looks like we let things go unwatched for way too long out here in rebel space. We'll have to come back with reinforcements." "Commander! Drive unit hit!" Jordan stared at the control panel. "Let's land on the closest planet. We would be sitting ducks out in space with a busted drive. Can we make it to ground?" "Yes. There is a planet near us. I'll take her down at max speed. The friction flames from the atmosphere will act as a sheel against the rebel lasers if they try to follow us down." Down below on planet Elder there was excitement and concern. "Holy Crap! They're heading right for us! In a moment you won't need a telescope to see them! Look!" Inky and Leco looked to the sky. A huge fireball came screaming across through the clouds. Inky's mouth fell open. "Where did it land?" MS Mr. Orantio looked through the telescope and saw that it had landed across the land. The marks were still there stretching miles across the scenery. Straight towards a desert."They... They landed in the Dune Sea of Arbanon....." he said coldly. Arbanon Desert was the worst place possible for ANYONE to hit. The giant SandWorms move swiftly across the plains of the wasteland desert. And the temperature, was way beyond 200 degrees Celcius. Even if they were warriors, they were worried about the terrible consiquences for them in the desert. But they were more worried about these other invaders. Those on that ship might have brought their enemies. Orantio can clerely see that the ship was intact yet was damaged in several sections. "Looks like the unknown is now our friend, unless they don't shoot first." Twiga In the Arbanon Desert. A weather station containing the only living things that were not sandworms, saw the ship land a few feet away."Look at that." Said a black cat anthro "It seems we have visitors." A dragon anthro with wings steped up "I know just what to do." She said Because The Dragoness had wings she could fly above the sands and avoid the the grasp of the worms. She flew down, from the weather station she flew low over the sand, she reached the ship She tried to find away to open the cockpit but it seemed to be seeled shut. Suddenly the ship opened with a bang! The Silver Dragoness went flying onto the sand. When she looked in the Cockpit she saw a creature she never saw before a human! "Oh Maker!" She cried "This must be an alien!" MS The human began coughing heavily as he stumbled out the cock pit. Smoke was pouring out of the vent from the damaged section of the ship. He climbed out and landed on the sand."Wait! Don't stand there!!" the dragoness yelled. The human, who was Jordan Maxamillian, looked up confusingly to see the anthro creature. "H-hello? Who's there? Stand where?" he said. The ground began shaking a bit as a giant lump began to arise from the sand heading straight towards him. Thedragoness flew straight towards Jordan and swooped him up as the giant sandworm came up from the sand almost catching them. Jordan let out a yell as he looked down at the giant sandworm and almost threw up. Luckly, the dragoness flew back into the cockpit and rested the human on his seat. He was a bit shaky. A couple of the crew who finally regained conciounce and composure looked up to see the alien. "uhhh.... Commander? Whats that and where are we?" one said. Twiga "Perhaps I should introduce myself." The Dragoness said "My name Proxy I am the Weather Master of this desert.""But...You look like a dragon." Jordan said "Well that's because I am." She said "I don't know what you are however." "Uh huh." Said Jordan Steve Ellen Mr Ontario was consulting a map. "Hey! Look at this! There is a weather station out there and I think that ship must have landed pretty close to it." "Can we call them?" Inky said. Leco looked up. "I'm already dialing the num- Hello? Is this the Arbanon Desert Weather Station? Good! I'm with Mr Ontario, the astronomer, and we observed a ship landing near- You did? Okay. Can you call us as soon as you know? Excellent!" "What did they say?" Inky asked. "They saw the ship go down and they have someone checking it out now." MS Jordan rubbed the back of his neck as he walked around the cockpit dazed."So... Your saying were stuck on a planet.... And the planet's desert is filled with Sandworms.... How the hell are we gonna get out of here then?" he asked. Proxy smiled and fluttered her wings. "Well we got Sandcrawlers that are near the wheather station ready on my command to call them. We can transport your people to the other land so you don't have to face those sandworms." she said. Jordan smiled back and rubbed his head. "Thanks... And uhh sorry for intruding your planet... We were chased by the rebels." Proxy cocked her head sideways in confusion. "You mean those other ships that were firing at you? Why were they attacking?" "Well... On my planet, called Earth, we formed up a huge union where all are under one nation. The nation soon spreads out the solar system and colonized most uncharted planets. We became a council after many years later, forming the leaders of our planet and colonial govoners in diplomatic solutions. One man has said as president, 'War has always ruined us. Religion, culture, race, and color has also caused great grief. But under one nation, under one power and culture, no matter what anyone is, man is equal.' He was the most visionized person anyone had ever loved after WWIII. But at this time, the people who viewed the old society as absolute began to rebel against us. They think that our union is out own death. But they never knew how much WWIII has caused so many deaths.. So.. That's why were fighting ourselves... A civil war for union and independence. They fight, for the old society." he explained. Twiga Proxy didn't look like she liked the sound of this..."That's what comes off colonyzing other worlds." She said firmly "Sppreding yourself across the galaxy only causes trouble." Commander Jordan didn't seem to like this Dragon, so pompous! Mr. Ontario mean while had gotten the news that Proxy had rescued the aliens. He sighed in releif "I suppose this is good." "Aren't you woried about a possible alien invastion?" Inky asked "We'll worry about that when the time comes" When the humans reached the Weather station they were greeted by the leader of the Weather Masters "Jordan I'd like you to meet my Father." Proxy said "Embanar" "Delighted to meet you." The old dragon said MS Jordan bowed to the old dragon and smiled."The pleasure is mine. Sorry for the rude drop in.." he said. Embanar smiled and patted the human's shoulder. "All is well... Im surprised to see one such species like you can be civilized." he said. Jordan smiled and patted his arm. "Yeah... Truth is, with war, we arn't civilized... But we make what we can to make a better union." Kyle and Nate walked around the huge wheather station. There was many technologies that were almost advanced as the old wheather towers back home. "Hey... Uhh which one of you aliens know how this works?" said Nate. One of the Anthros, a female snake walked up towards him. "Well... technically it runs by itself. We had developed a V.I. To record anything that happens in the desert." she said. "A V.I.? Whats that? And why study the desert's wheather?" The snake typed in the computer console and entered her name, 'Ayana' in and a holographic image of a head appears. "Greetings. I am known as VIA. Virtual, Intelligence Assistant." said the head in a female voice. "V.I.'s are Virtual Intelligence. VIA is one of out prime V.I.'s that has never been decomisioned since we first built her 20 years ago. The name VIA was given to her because we wasn't sure we had the prime requirements for her yet. But miraculously she has developed self awareness and seem to have human characteristics. And that is when she chose to be a wheather overwatcher." she explained. Kyle waved his hand through the V.I. laughing a bit amazed at the technology. "You said she developed self awareness? Isn't that dangerous?" he said. "Actually no. First, we had not placed in the proper functions for her when we made her memory chip. So she began to developed on her own as she watched most of us." "Then why become the wheather overseer?" Ayana the snake anthro walked over and looked at VIA who was smiling back at everyone enjoying the conversation. "Remember what I said about human characteristics? She developed hers when she learned on her own. Her most studies was wheather. Especially in the desert. She always had a fascination for it. She wanted to know how this desert actually works. Why does the dune become cold at night and the worms sleep and hunt in the day, why the temperature increases every summer or stay hot in the winter and how snow befalls on the great dunes." Kyle pulled his hand back and rubbed his head. "To tell the truth, even at this time, we humans never really understood the deserts as well... Especially with A.I.'s." Ayana almost jumped and sighed a bit hearing that. "You develope A.I.'s? I hear somewhere across the Galaxy that they were strictly illegal and more primitive then the V.I.'s." Twiga Meanwhile across the land. Leco Ontario was preparing his report to the university."The details are crrently sketchy." The Fox said "But I do believe I have evidence of their technology." The Fox-Man pulled out a colorful stone. "This Stone." He said "Is in reality an alien artifical intelligence." The room of Anthro professors gasped in shock and horror. "Before any of you get your tails in a knot." The fox warned "I wish to assure that this machine, though primative is harmless." He placed it on the computer and said. "Gin N Tonic." Instantly the PC turned on, and the internet and the internet flashed, searching food websites for recipies, finaly the printer printed out a recipe for a Gin N Tonic cocktail. "You see?" Leco pointed out "It's merely a kitchen CPU! It runs all the cooking devices and kitchen robots so that these off-worlders don't have to do any cooking themselves!" The professors rubbed their chins with thought, others muttered "Lazy aliens." and "Can't be bothered to do any real work." Meanwhile Kyle was searhing his pockets and backpack for for things and realized something was amiss. "I think I lost my kitchen CPU." He said Steve Ellen "You won't need it," Proxy said. "We'll be glad to provide you with food. How do you feel about sand beetles and cactus fruits?" "I don't feel good about them," Kyle said. "I think you should return my kitchen CPU." "All in god time. Naturally we are curious about you and the devices you carry. For all we know this supposed "crash landing" of yours might be a hoax so you can spy on us." "No," Kyle said. "It's not you we are interested in. We have our own rebels to worry about." MS "Rebels?" she asked."People like us. Except, their a thousand times bad and rebellious." he replied. As the conversation continues on, Jordan took out his PDA recording information on the rebels. "It seems they are planning to make a move by nightfall..." he said. Embanar walked over curiously and asked him, "Who and how?" "They are in orbit above the atmosphere, not making a single move... Unless we leave they won't bother you... But our ship is crashed..." he said. "Oh dear... I see then..." The dragon elder nodded and walked over to a console. "VIA. I want you to send in the Epic VTOL. Lets carry that ship out of the desert. The Proffesor shall examine and repair it." Twiga "Coming right up Master Dragon." Said VIA.Kyle grumbled about losing his kitchen CPU. Proxy took Jordan for a walk along the parapet. "Despite the sandworms and scorching heat, your planet really is lovely." Jordan said "Well this planet isn't just desert, there are also forests, oceans, glacers even cities!" She said "I really do have to get back." Jordan said "I'm needed the quell the rebellion." "Stay a little while." Proxy said MS Jordan looked at Proxy who seemed determined to have them stay. What was it that he felt from her?"...I guess we can.." he said. Proxy smiled and walked off. "I'll make you something to eat. You and your troops might have been hungry." Kyle pouted a bit but he wanted to be kind to his saviors. Nate looked around while sitting. "I would like to taste a bit of offworld food. Same stuff I eat on Earth is kinda boring." he said. Twiga Proxy took two large slabs of sandworm meat, placed them in a cast iron skillit and heated them up using her firey breath.She garnished the meat with fruit of cactus sauce. She dished up the meat to her human visitors, Nate was the first to try the stuff. "Weird." He said "Even though it's made of worm it tastes just like a steak!" "You sure?" Kyle asked nervously MS Jordan dug up his food as well as if he was starving. "MMmm oh my yes it does! How can your kind kill such a large mighty beast?" he said. Embanar smiled as he scliced a piece and gave it to Kyle. "It was a bit easy once you find the weak points. Only projectile weapons can kill them. Laser weapons have no affect to its armor nor does it do any real damage to its skin." he said. Kyle took a small bite out of it, his eyes wide and watered, a desire to eat more. He picked up the whole slice of his worm and ravaged it in his mouth. Nate could only stare with an embaressment look. "Whoa! That was deliciouse~!" said Kyle. Jordan smiled as he continued to eat his food. Proxy kept on looking at the alien human with interest without him noticing. "So... you say your humans? What can you tell us about your homeworld and culture? Twiga "Our Culture has really expanded, in the last 100 years, to tell you the truth." Jordan said humbly "We have robots do most of the real work we don't want to do ourselves.""What else is there?" Proxy pressed "We probaly have a thousand different cultures now that we've colnyzed thousands of differnt worlds." Jordan swallowed a bit more of worm meat before continueing. "Humans have evolved and changed to fit a thousand differnt planets." He said "Some larger some smaller, some stronger, some weaker..." MS "Then when was it you fell into war?" she continued.Rebellion. They think the old world was better. They are just blood thirsty wanting everything the way they think works. They are prejudicial and most feel conquoring us would revert to imperialists and they would spread farther conquoring already inhabitant planets. Now I can't imagine what they would do if anyone of them escaped with information about this planet." he said. Proxy leaned her paw and held onto his wrist comferting him. "Listen. We may be alien to you and kind and kindered but we ARE warriors and powerful beings to our own will. We had many wars with our nations thousands of years ago. Yet, we were victorious." Twiga Jordan sighed and smiled. "Thank you." He said the Dragoness.Meanwhile on the other side of planet Elder, a teenage snake-man was looking through his telescope, veiwing the Rebel's actions through his telescope. "I wonder who these aliens are." The young snake wondered "Are they similer to the ones that landed in the desert?" Meanwhile the Rebel Leader Commander Kobra was listening to the report from his scouts. "Commander Kobra." a young female scout reported "We have detected the some our enimies may have crash landed on an unknown planet." Steve Ellen "I know that!" Kobra said. "Why do you think I am in orbit around this planet?" "I'm sorry, sir," the young scout said "The comm system was down. I didn't know." "Make it your business to know before you talk to me. Don't waste my time. We've already determined that this planet is populated by intelligent animals who call their planet Elder. They reached the crash site and now they are hiding Jordan and the rest of his crew somewhere. We don't know where yet. I want two of you scouts to land after dark and check things out." MS kobra examined the entire larged planet from a holographic projector trasnmitted by a spy sattalite. The planet was as much the size of 2 Jupiters together. The planet was severely overpopulated, (to what people compare on Earth,) population was over 225.2 Billion anthro creatures on it."Damn.... This might be difficult. We might have to sneak attack at that crash site by tonight real soon." he said. Twiga Meanwhile, Proxy and Jordan were enjoying some late night stargazing, while Kobra's scouts tried to find away to sneak onto the planet."We don't have many animals on my Planet." Jordan said "My planet just became one big city and soon there was no room left for wildlife. Most animals live on private zoos owned by really rich guys." "That's awful!" Proxy gasped "Isn't just?" Jordan sighed "But I think I could get used to a planet like this..." Steve Ellen "I will be very happy if you get used to it," Proxy said and smiled at Commander Jordan. "Huh?" Jordan said. "But we can't stay that long. We have to get back to our people." "Of course," Proxy said. "But I want you to enjoy your visit here. I want it to be a special memory for you." She put her hand on his hand. Jordan looked down at her hand on his. "Um... maybe we better go back inside and join the others." "Must we? I really like it out here with just you and me looking at the stars." Inside, Kyle was discussing cooking with Ebanar. "I don't want you to think I don't know how to cook. My kitchen CPU is fine, or was fine before you guys lifted it from me, but I like to get in a kitchen myself and whip up something." Ebanar nodded. "I know what you mean. Nothing tastes better than meat you kill and cook yourself." "That's true! It must date back to the days before we became civilized. Even with all these gadgets, I still like to cook raw meat over an open fire." Ebanar pored them both another drink. "Do you think your rebel friends will attempt an attack?" "They aren't our friends, that's for sure!" "I know. It's just a way we have of speaking here. With a thousand different species of anthro all trying to get along together, well, you see we had to learn how to be friendly and compromise if we are all going to survive." "I hear you," Kyle said. "You're saying humans don't seem to be wise if they are calling each other enemies. I agree. But the rebels exist and we are fighting with them, so nothing I can do about it. I am forced to join the fight whether I think it's wise or not." MS Jordan looked into Proxy's eyes who felt so compelled with him here. Jordan can only guess she had an attraction. He turned his hand and grabbed onto Proxy's as he laid down on the grass again."You know? I like it too... I'll stay here with you for a little longer." he said blushing a bit. Twiga Meanwhile Kobra was spying on the Animal-people from above and wondered if he could use these innocent people to his advantage.He spied the teenage Snake Boy asleep, and decided to telepathicly enter his mind (Sorry for shortness I'm really strapped for time) Steve Ellen Snars, the snake boy, immediately sensed the intrusion into his mind. Kobra had chosen unwisely in attempting to enter the mind of a snake person, for they are particularly aware of telepathy since they use it on their prey, or did before they became too civilized to hunt for their food. Snars stilled his mind so the intruder would not be alarmed and sent out a reverse telepathic inquiry of his own. Kobra's eyes opened in alarm. The mind he was probing was probing back! He immediately shut down contact and out op a mind shield. He turned to his navigator. "These anthros are cleverer than I thought. It's not just a bunch of dumn animals down there. I hope those two scouts are careful." Snars smiled. He had learned a little bit. There was someone named Kobra looking for the crashed humans. And two scouts had been sent down to search. Snars picke dup the phone and called Leco Ontario with his information. Twiga Kobra sighed, this was not going the way he wanted to at all!So he tried to search for a more acceptable target to try his telephy on. Meanwhile Leco had phoned the gaurds and told them that enemy spaceships are in orbit around Elder. Jordan and Proxy finally went to bed after the long day, Jordan had a strange dream. In his vison he saw the Animal People of Elder reduced to mere beasts, by a mysterious stone. He saw Kobra holding the stone and laughing as the beasts began to devour each other Steve Ellen The second day of captivity dawned for Jordan and his crew. "I have a bad feeling," Jordan said. "We are trapped on this planet with Kobra overhead. It's only a matter of time before he finds us. We can't just do nothing." "But what can we do?" Kyle said. "For starters we can organize some kind of defense. These animal people are smart and strong. They don't have any army because they don't fight among themselves. But that doesn't mean we can't teach them to fight." Proxy was listening. "Don't think we don't know how to fight. Every year we have ritual games of warfare. It's done only for sport, but we play to win. We aren't completely ignorant of how to fight." "But will you fight for real?" Jordan said. Proxy made a fist. "If it's to save our homes and our planet we would do anything." MS Jordan nodded his head and smiled."Ok then... I just pray for your safety." he siad. Proxy walked over and hugged Jordan warmly. "There's no need. I'll be ok as long as you are." she said. Jordan blushed a bit but resided and hugged her back. "And besides, this is the perfect oppertunity to test 50 of our new prototype starships." Jordan blinked a couple of times in confusion, "Wait wait wait... You have Starships?" "They were designed a few months back. We couldn't test them because we were afraid the anti gravitational generator wouldn't succseed." Twiga Meanwhile Kobra Commander was hovering on the other side of Planet Elder serching for a young Anthro's mind to probe.He had learned from his previous experiance that predators were most likly a bad choice for mind probing so insted he chose a young Sheep Anthro named Vesta. The young Sheep was inside her room doodling her name in her notebook, she had no means of defense against Kobra's mind! When Kobra invaded here mind it felt like she had been stung by a flash of light! She felt herself faint under the telepathic strain. 'Not much good info here.' Kobra thought to himself 'This one is a mere school girl, does not have any practical knowalde we can use against ...' Suddenly he found something in her mind that looked interesting! Vesta's mother Colonel Milange Ramsby was a test piolet her flew expeimental aircraft, occastionaly she took her daughter to work to show her the new ships she would be flying. One such image of an experimental aircraft flashed through his mind... Steve Ellen Kobra recoiled from the image of the ship he found in Vesta's mind. Antigravity! Impossible. These people were anthros. How could they have perfected an antigravity drive? And yet, the image was of a triangular ship lifting straight off the planet. Only antigravity drives required that peculiar triangular shape. The three drive units acted like a tripod, the most stable arrangement possible. Two would be unbalanced. With four any one drive that was a little off wpild make the ship wobble. But three was highly stable. Korba sat back in the deep cushions of his leather pilot's chair. His plan for a direct assault on the anthro planet was beginning to look shaky. It was based on receiving no opposition from the anthros. But apparently they had more technology than anyone expected. They must be hiding it in underground caverns because a complete surface scan of the planet had been completed. Nothing suspicious had been found in the scan. MS When night fell darker, the group gathered up as much warriors as possible to face the rebels. Jordan was selected to lead because of knowledge of these rebels. He sighed as he looked at each creature who stared at him with curious eyes."My name is Jordan Maxamillian. I am the Commander of the Black Scorpion strike fleet. We came across passing this system to reach the astroid field on the other side to destroy a rebel astroid colony base. The rebels had ambushed us, and a quick stealth strike came from none other then the rebel commander, Commander Kobra. He's a ruthless rebellious leader. He wiped out 25 capital ships with his quick strike stealth capabilities. The Black Scorpions was once formed to counter this threat, but we were short on one ship because the rest had to be taken for defensive purposes. I have no regrets, when I say I am responsible for exposing your kind to these kind of rebels... But, I am willing to atone and clear that mistake by assisting you, saving your planet. We have more numbers than they, and together we will crush Kobra and every single rebel! They may be dangerous, but, they are just like every other enemy you and I faced! Together, we can make a difference. Will you help me? Lend me your aid in defending your planet from our enemies we had brought to your home!" he called out. Twiga The Anthros agreed Jordan's plan he asked of them "Who are your bravest warriors?"A large shark-man stepped foreword "My name is Strike Fin." Said the large fish "I am the strongest hunter in the sea." A female Wolf stepped forward "I am Red Claw." She said "My mother was Blue Claw the founder of the Snow Wolf tribe." "Anyone else?" Jordan asked Steve Ellen [Please disable me. I took on some more obligations while this campfire was on vacation and now I've got more stuff facing me everyday than I can keep up with. But I like this Sci-Fi storyline!] MS Everyone who was in a tribe, or a warrior, or any skillful person, all stood up for Jordan. A lot had applauded for him and cheered. Vesta,who was controlled by Kobra with her mother seeing the whole group. He rubbed his chin aggervated a bit. The one thing he hates is his plan being blown. "Looks like I'll have to move with plan B." he said to himself. "We'll drag them into space. We'll make our stand out there." Twiga Kobra walked into his room his head hurt terribly"I'm not sure how much I'm going to be able to take." He said Proxy approached Jordan at sunset with a request "Will you join me to The River Heights?" "The River Heights?" Jordan asked "The most popular dance club on this continent!" Proxy said "It's a on the top of the tallest mountain on all Elder!" MS Jordan hesitated a little bit. He wanted to help gather the men and prepare them. But then he realized he was stressing himself with no ends rest."It would be an honor for me to join." he said. Proxy beamed red and squealed under her breath in happiness and grabbed his hand. "Thank you Jordan~! I will tell you that you will love the club very much~!" she replied. Twiga They ascended the Tram that headed up the mountain, Proxy spoke with Jordan along the way"I'm so glad you decieded to come!" She said "The River Heights is one of the most anchiant of our dance clubs that are still around today, This thing has been here since before we had airplanes!" Steve Ellen The Tram creaked to a stop. The top of the mountain had been flattened to make a space for the club. There were lights surounding the club, but not bright ones. Instead, there were thousands of tiny twinkling lights set into trees, the walls of the club, and the surrounding rock. "I've never seen anything quite like this. It doesn't look as old as you said it was," Jordan said. Proxy smiled. "Yes, it's been updated a few times but there has been a River Heights Club here for over five centuries. Wait until we get inside." MS As the group walked up to the doorway, a series of music emitted from the club. Jordan felt a bit nervous for the first time. He hadn't been this nervous since he joined the fleet corps.Proxy held onto Jordan's hand making him jump a bit."Ready commander?" she said giggling. Jordan began to sweat a bit nodding as they walked in. He took Nate and Kyle with him just to release the awkward tension of being alone. The other crew was left with repairs and preperations. "Proxy!" called out a Gryphon waving. "Armando!" Prox ran up to Armando and gave him a hug. "I miss you big brother~!" she said. Jordan almost fell over hearing the word brother. "Umm Proxy? That's your brother?" "Hehe yeah. He is. My mother had a mate and he was a gryphon. Armando has his dominant traits from dad and I had traits from my mom." Jordan smiled and understood what she said. Wherever something strange happens with two different species there is always Biology to help you out. (And I used to HATE biology! XD) "Nice to meet you uhh..." "Jordan Maxamillian." replied the commander smiling. "Hehe. I can see my sister has taken an attraction to ya?" Proxy squeaked and slapped him ontop of his head. "Armando!" "Just kidding!" Twiga The dance lights became dark, a powerful dance music began to play.The Anthros began a strange hard and fast dance, The Dance of Power. "This dance has magical properties." Proxy explaned "It increases out streangh and stamina." "Will it have the same effect on a human being?" Jordan asked "Let's find out!" Steve Ellen Jordan watched Proxy and did what she did. There was a lot of foot stomping, then the beat changed and everyone was waving their arms in the air. "I don't know what I'm doing!" Jordan said. Proxy grinned. "You're doing fine! Get ready to turn around." Jordan was glad she warned him because suddenly everybody made a half turn so they were facing the other way and he was only a bit late doing it. It felt odd because now he and Proxy were facing away from each other and he was facing a different Anthro. He wasn't sure what species. She reached out for his hands and he held hers. Suddenly they were whirling away into the crowd as the music changed again. Uh-oh, he thought. She probably thinks I know what to do and I don't! MS (No Steve. I didn not want that post to be there. Proxy and Jordan had been around long enough. And second, you have to try and be more realistic with your post.)After a while they stopped dancing and the Anthro wolf asked for his name. Jordan was quiet for a while until he blankly turned and walked off. The wolf was confused but decided not to bother. 'What was with me?' he thought to himself. 'What I did wasn't nice! But... I don't know but Proxy, there's just something about her I feel more attatched to.' He walked right back with Proxy who looked concern. "Jordan? What's wrong?" she asked. He didn't know what to say, and his mind was still blank. The only words that came out was, "Proxy will you dance with me?" he said. Prox blushes and smiled as she held onto his hands. "Of course Jordan." Twiga Meanwhile in the Training Camp of the Army that was going to fight the invading rebels, Kyle was about to have an experiance all his own.While wandering aimlessly around , Kyle bumped into an Anthro, "Oh... Excuse me sir..." He said absent mindedly " I'm a girl." Came a gruff but femmine voice "What?" Asked Kyle "I am a girl." He found himself being faced with a large plump yet still attractive Pig-woman! MS (Lol. XD Strange how anyone human would like a pig.)"Oh.. heheh my bad." he said rubbing the back of his neck. The pig woman giggled and smiled. "Sometimes a lot of people mistaken me for a male. Well, humans at least." she said. Twiga (I'm just trying to use creatures that aren't overused in the furry fandom besides, Lots of people got pet pigs)The Pig Woman said warmly "My name is Malisarda, most people call me Sarda." For short "OK Sarda." Kyle said "How come you came here?" "My Father is the leader of the Swine Clan." Sarda said "Which makes me the warrior princess." "You mean like Xena?" Kyle asked "I haven't the faintest clue what your talking about." Sarda snorted MS (Oh. My bad. heheh.)Kyle stood quiet a but until he realized she didn't know any Earth TV shows. Princess Warrior Xena was very popular back in the 20th century. "Uhhh nothing. Old TV show back on Earth." he said embaressed. Nate came to the two talking carying a huge crate. It was a bit difficult to heave. "Ugh. You know, it wouldn't kill any of yous to try and help a person out?" he said panting. Twiga Kyle smiled and clapped Nate on the back, he nearly fell over"Don't worry about it!" Kyle said "With all these Anthros here to help us this battle will be E-Z!" "Uh, yeah sure whatever." Nate said brushing the dust off himself MS Sarda looked at the huge crated and snorted again."What's in those crates?" she asked. Nate cracked his back and pulled open the box. It was loaded with energy provisions. Kinda like a bar snack wrapped in foil. Used as rations but taste a little bit better than they normally do. "Provisions. Not many would fill a man up but it gives energy and caffine into soldiers who have trouble fighting. Better than drinking soda during a battle." he siad. (Normally, soldiers would drink coffee but Soda is another source for caffine. Not many soliders would have em.) Twiga Meanwhile Up above in enemy spaceships The Leader of the rebellion paced franticly"What do I do? What do I do?" He asked himself over and over again "Those Anthros are more powerful than I ever imangened!" MS (also like to note, this campfire may be more longer than any other I made. )The rebel soldiers formed together waiting for orders as they march upon the shuttles. One of the rebel officers walked up to Kobra and coughed. "Uhh sir? May I remind you that they are powerful in numbers? I think we should just strike when the time is right." he said. Kobra growled and clenched the console. "The time to strike is now I say. Mr. Maxamillian won't suspect a thing if we caught him off guard preparing. Twiga Jordan was with Proxy, they walked side by side as they watched the others prepareing."It's all so beautiful isn't it?" Proxy sighed "All these creatures working together!" Steve Ellen "Yes," Jordan said. "This is a beautiful planet once you get to know it. I hope nothing bad happens to it." Proxy clutched his arm. "Oh, Jordan. Nothing bad will happen, will it?" "I don't know," Jordan said. "I hope not." MS Jordan sighed and scooted over closer to Proxy. "But... if we succeed in defending your home, I just wonder if we see each other again once I leave the system..." he said. He turned around and held onto her paw. "I have lots of feelings for you Proxy... Its been, I don't know how long really.... But, I always want to be with you, either off planet or here." Twiga Kobra paced in his room, he didn't know what to do, this planet of Anthros was armed to the teeth and they were on Jordan and his possy's side.He decieded he needed rest before the battle so, he went to his medicine cabnet and popped a few seditive pills in his mouth He went to bed hoping he would be refreashed and inspired Steve Ellen But noooooo, he had one of those pesky drerams that happen to people who are all tensed up and stressed out and facing a difficult situation... "Kobraaaaa! Kobraaaaa!" his mother called. "Mom! Where are you?" He was alone in a high-ceilinged room. A very high ceiling. When he looked up it seemed a mile away. But it was descending! And making a whistling noise. He would be crushed! He ran to a door and tried to open it but it was locked! Frantically he shook the door. "Mommy! Mommy! Unlock the door!" The ceiling came whistling down to crush him. Kobra screamed and woke up. He wiped the sweat off his forehead. "I better take another one," he muttered as he staggered into the bathroom, opened the medicine cabinet, and fumbled for his pills. MS (That... is a bit... dude idk. Try be less imaginative about that. Yet it was weird as hell. O_____o)A day had passed, the rebels were in orbit ready to land. Jordan and the rest of his crew and companions were about to set their defensive strike. The wait seemed to be killing them. Nervousness and tension was arissing. Before any blow or shot had rung out into space, a huge nosed dive starship came into view. It held an ion cannon array from its front structure, wings stretched from its side structure taking the form of a whale's flipper. A spire was seen on the top of the massive beast. It seemed to be the command center, or overwatch of the ship. A large symbol was embended on its left wing. flying eagle, carrying a feather. "Jordan? Is that ship a friend of yours?" asked Proxy. Jordan stared in awe as the ship passes over the planet and over the rebel starships. It was bigger than Kobra's! Kobra stared outside his cockpit shaking, tumbling over the huge ship coming into view. The ship gave a low loud whir, then a voice spoke from it. "Attention! This is the Republican Nation of the Council! (RNC which is the Blues position.) You are in violation of tresspassing in our borders, AND attacking a neutral planet! Back down or you will be fired upon!" called out the humanoid creature from the megaspeaker. Twiga Jordan was frightened he didn't know what to do. Proxy however took out her megaspeaker and flew up into the sky."You're confused!" She said to the Humanoid creture "These people are newcomers, they didn't know there was intelligent life in this part of the galaxy, and they are helping us by protecting us from their enemies!" Steve Ellen "Lady, you are the one confused," said the voice. "I am Commander Arnold of the Republican Nation of the Council. I don't know who you are but you are interfering in things you don't understand. This planet Elder is a neutral planet and no ships of any nation can land here during wartime." "But they didn't land!" Proxy said. "They crashed because they were being chased!" "There is an orbiting ship. There is a crashed ship. We are aware of the situation. All parties are in violation and must be prosecuted. Do not interfere or you will be prosecuted for interfering with the business of the RNC." Proxy looked at Jordan. "Is it even possible to have a rational conversation with these guys?" MS Jordan just stared in awe as he watches the ships hover."You know these guys?" he asked. Proxy sighed and nodded a bit. "To tell the truth, a little. We never seen or had actual contact with them, but they are the community we talked about when you crashed." she said. Jordan looked up to see the flagship coming in for a landing. Kobra and his fleet were being indocturned. "We might just have to negotiate with them." Steve Ellen Commander Arnold wore a flashy uniform with lots of medals. "You are all in violation of The Code," he said as he stepped off the landing ramp of his flagship. Proxy put her hands on her hips. "Commander, don't you ever give people a chance to explain what is going on?" MS (lol in case no one noticed, Arnold was in the SHIP. But to cease confusion, im going to say, he beamed down like those in Star Trek.)The commander sighed and crossed his arms. "I do. But if forigners brought war, they should keep it in their space. Not neutural or our Government Space. Were in enough war as it is. I'll let them off this one time since you are defending them. But the next time a violation occours, I won't be so kind." he said. Twiga Proxy was rather disgusted by Alnold's dispostion but she had no choice but to agree with him... Steve Ellen "If that's what is necessary," Proxy said. "But what do you mean by 'let them off'? Does that mean they can stay here if they want to?" MS (Im coming back to bring this story back to life~!)Arnold was getting a bit irritated. But decided not to argue anymore and sighed. "Do what you will... Your not part of our community anyways. By ancestors your all just like the Alliance..." he said. He shifted his body and walked back to the beam. With a swoop, he and his guardsmen were beamed up into the ship. The starcruisers and battleships began to move, taking the rebel ships with them. (To imprison for violation.) Proxy sighed a bit, relaxing now that they got the situation under control. She looked at Jordan and giggled. "Sometimes I have a way with words." she says. Jordan smiled and chuckled. "You sure do... Im glad we don't have to shed anymore blood..." he replied. Twiga Proxy and Jordan walked hand and hand...they quietly looked up into the sky"Jordan." Proxy said in a half whisper "Where do you think it all began?" "What?" Jordan was confused "Life, The Universe...It had to start somewhere." "You're getting oddly philosophical." Jordan said raising an eyebrow "It's just so much has happaned over the past few days." She said blushing "Humans have been trying to answer those questions for thousands of years." MS Jordan smiled as he looked at Proxy."But life is what it is. Its how we believe each individual started out its life...." he said. He walked over and hugged Proxy. "And I want to know more about your life... All of you are so similar to the indingnious creatures on Earth... Its a marvel to see such same beings and yet so smart." Proxy smiled and blushed after his hug. "Well... It'll be a bit difficult to explain being that I never heard of your world." she replied. Twiga "It's a little hard to explain, But it all started millions of years ago when the first animal life appeared on this planet." She said"As soon as Animal life came out of the Sea, something began, we were starting to become civilized." Steve Ellen [I'm confused. Is there another campfire with Jordan and Roxy in it? I just made an addition to that campfire a couple of days ago with Jordan telling Roxy about The Legend of Earth. Am I going crazy?  ]© Copyright 2009 MS, Twiga, Steve Ellen, (known as GROUP). All rights reserved. GROUP has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work. |
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