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Laugh, Love, Leave...		Rated: E
Amelia has to leave. And with one choice she could loose her friend and her love forever.
by: Rose Grandson	This item has no ratings.

[Introduction] (Open with AMELIA looking at some pictures on her bed. Almost all of her things are packed up in boxes. There is a knock on the door and TRISTAN walks into the room. He is wearing jeans and a T-shirt with a band name on it.)

AMELIA:
O hey.

(TRISTEN walks over to the bed and sits next to AMELIA.)

TRISTEN:
Whatcha lookin at?

AMELIA:
Just pictures.

TRISTEN:
Ya I can see that.

AMELIA:
(Rolls her eyes) There just pictures of you and Stephan.

TRISTEN:
(Suggestively) Ooo just us?

(Amelia hugs her legs to her chest.)

TRISTEN:
(Softly) I thought you were ok with all this.

AMELIA:
With what?

TRISTEN:
Moving.

AMELIA:
I was…its just…I…never mind.

(TRISTEN leans over and pulls AMELIA into a hug. She rests against him while they talk.)

TRISTEN:
I know you well enough to know when something is wrong. Tell.

AMELIA:
(Silent)

(Long pause. TRISTEN waits for AMELIA to answer.)

AMELIA:
Well…(pause)

TRISTEN:
Ya?

AMELIA:
(Quietly) Its just, I’m going to miss you.

TRISTEN:
(Jokingly) Well we are going to miss you too! Who else will give Stephan a good kick when he gets out of line?

AMELIA:
(Long pause) Will you miss me?

TRISTEN:
Like I said before….

AMELIA:
I mean just you.

TRISTEN:
What?

AMELIA:
(Awkwardly) Will you…miss me more then Stephan does.

TRISTEN:
Uh…

(AMELIA starts to trace the lines on TRISTAN’S hand.)

TRISTEN:
Ya.

(AMELIA turns her head to look at TRISTEN. Their faces are close together. AMELIA closes her eyes quickly and TRISTEN leans in. They both jump apart and inch to separate parts of the bed when they hear a knock at the door. STEPHAN walks in.)

STEPHAN:
(Looks at both of them) What’s going on?

(Long pause.)

STEPHAN:
(Looks at them like they are crazy) Umm ok. (Pause) Should I go?

TRISTEN:
(Quickly) Hey uhh no you don’t have to go. We were just uhh..

STEPHAN:
Ya I can totally see that.

(STEPHAN walks over to look at the pictures on AMELIA’S bed. He does not sit down on the bed.)

AMELIA:
Stephan?

(Stephan looks up at her. He is smiling.)

AMELIA:
(Hesitantly) Tristan and I…we were just talking about how much I will miss y’all.

(AMELIA looks down guiltily. TRISTEN scoots over closer to AMELIA. STEPHAN looks at both of them doubtfully but doesn’t press the issue.))

STEPHAN:
O ya sure.

TRISTAN:
(Looks at AMELIA.) Why don’t you go get a frame and we can put our favorite picture in it?

AMELIA:
(Surprised) Ok. Ya (glances at STEPHAN) Ill go get one.

(EXIT AMELIA)

STEPHAN:
Ok what really happened? You expect me to believe that y’all were just “talking”.

TRISTAN:
I can’t believe it…

STEPHAN:
(Impatiently) What?

TRISTAN:
She finally did it. She chose.

STEPHAN:
You?

TRISTAN:
What?

STEPHAN:
Who did she chose?

TRISTEN:
Me.

(STEPHAN sits on the bed defeated.)

TRISTAN:
She’s leaving anyway. It doesn’t change a thing.

STEPHAN:
It does.
(pause)

TRISTAN:
I know.

(STEPHAN lets out a long sigh and gets up. He tosses a picture at TRISTEN.)

STEPHAN:
Here, tell her I chose this one.

(EXIT STEPHAN. A minute later AMELIA enters again carrying a frame. She looks around once and comes to sit on the bed.)

AMELIA:
You told him?

TRISTAN:
Ya.

AMELIA:
Is he ok with it?

TRISTAN:
He will be. (Pause) This is the picture he chose.

AMELIA:
Why’d he choose this one? He’s not even in it.

TRISTAN:
I know.

(TRISTEN reaches out and hugs AMELIA again.)

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