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Naruto the Ultimate Ninja
A Naruto novel I am going to make and it has a harem with many girls. Naru/Massiveharem
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[Introduction] Okay you can add to this, but if I find that the chapter has nothing to do with my story than it gets deleted. Alos no...

Feet licking, smelling, etc
Ass licking, smelling, etc
Breasts licking.
No sexual things other than french kissing.
And if you want him to have sex than too bad unless you want a 12 year old to have sex with older girls.
Eikenrocks2    A 4 year old Naruto was running from a huge crowd of people aiming to kill him.
" What did I do?!?!?!?!" he asked.
" You know what you did demon," they said. Naruto kept running when he ran past a corner and was trapped. " Hahaha now we got you demon," they said. They ran over to Naruto and started slashing him over and over again. Then they branded demon and monster on his back and chest they then put salt in it to make sure it doesn't heal. Naruto slipped into unconsciousness as they kept beating him.
Naruto Mindscape
" What happened?" he asked himself when he noticed he was in a sewer-like place.
" Come here," said someone, freightened Naruto went to where the voice was coming from and saw a cage with a tag on it with the kanji for seal on it. He then saw two huge eyes.
" Who are you?" he asked.
" I am the Kyuubi no Kitsune," said Kyuubi.
" You are the reason I have been tortued and beaten my whole life," he said angry.
" Yes," it said and then suddenly it went away and was replaced with a girl about 28, had blood red hair, red eyes, breasts that would put Tsunade's to shame, a red kimono, fox ears on her head, 9 fox tails, and she was crying.
" Why are you crying?" he asked.
" Because I am the reason you get hurt every day and I didn't even mean to be here," she said.
" Then why did you come?" he asked.
" Well I was coming home and when I went in I saw my mate and my kits dead and a guy with red eyes and a guy who smelt like snakes were there. The guy with the red eyes turned around and then used it on me making me attack here. Then the guy with blond hair used a jutsu to seal me into you," she said sadly looking at the ground.
Naruto thought she didn't deserve this so he walked over to the seal and ripped it off. He then saw a huge thing of red demon chakra that was shot into him and he grew two fox ears, 4 fox tails, and 3 whiskers on each side of his face. Kyuubi lost 4 tails and she saw her cage go away, but she then saw Naruto collapse to the ground in pain.
" Naruto!" she yelled and ran over to himand saw he wasn't dying because of him removing the seal, but the villagers on the outside of his body was killing him so she noticed she could get out so she transported herself out of his head and was now outside.
Outside of Naruto's body
The villagers who were beating Naruto stopped when they saw a light and then Kyuubi came out in her human form.
" It's the Kyuubi and it's in out from, kill it!" one of them yelled as they ran at her, but she just swiped some chakra killing them. She then walked over to Naruto and had to do a healing jutsu and the only one she knew was...
She picked him up and kissed him which started healing him. He then woke up after she finished healing him and saw that she was kissing him; she then noticed he was awake so she stopped healing him and faintly blushed.
" Um Kyuu-chan now that I'm a demon can you take me to train?" he asked.
She didn't expect this, but she decided to." Okay, but we will be gone for 8 years okay," she said.
" Sure lets go!" he yelled happily as she opened a portal and they walked through.
8 years later
Two figures walked into the village. One was woman who looked to be about 36 and the other had a mask on, but from his size he seemed to be about 12. They both had 2 fox ears, the girl had 5 fox tails and the boy had 9 fox tails. The two walked to the village gates until...
" Halt no going farther state your name," the two ninjas said, but the two figures just disappeared.
The Hokage Office
' I wonder where you went, Naruto,' thought Sarutobi.
" Hey Sandaime," said the small figure who appeared out of nowhere.
" Who are you?" he asked.
" Aw you don't remember me old man," said the small figure.
" Naruto?" he asked.
" Yep," Naruto said as he pulled up his mask.
" You're finally back and who is this?" he asked.
" This is Kyuu-chan or as you know her Kyuubi no Kitsune," Naruto said.
" What the get back Naruto she's evil," said Sarutobi.
" Don't worry she isn't evil besides if she was I could easily beat her," Naruto said.
" What the," he said shocked.
" Shut up you only got that way because of me Naru-kun," she said grabbing him.
" I'm sorry Kyuu-chan, but that's the truth," he said.
" Um Naruto what is going on?" asked Sarutobi.
" Oh sorry well Kyuubi is actually nice because..." he told Sarutobi what happened to Kyuubi and why she attacked Konoha. After he was finished Sarutobi asked," Okay I get it, but I need to ask exactly how strong is he?"
" He could defeat the Sannin and all the Hokages that ever existed in 5 min," she said.
At this comment Sarutobi's jaw dropped through every floor in the tower and he passed out. When he woke back up he said," HE'S THAT STRONG!!!! HE CAN BECOME HOKAGE RIGHT NOW IF HE WANTED!!!!"
" I don't want to become Hokage until I become older, but I do want my father's scroll of his jutsus and the Forbidden Scroll which is mine because my father the Yondaime, Minato Namikaze, was the one who inherited it by becoming Hokage," said Naruto who shocked Sarutobi even more because Naruto knew who his father was.
" You know, how?" he asked.
" It isn't that hard. I mean if I was about 18 I would probably look just like him except with my fox features," Naruto said.
" Also Naruto has 2 bloodlines," Kyuubi said.
" 2?" he asked.
" Yeah the first one is called Sunpoukatoen (Dimension Crossing Eye) it lets him travel across dimensions and the other doesn't have a name, but it lets him cancel out other people's bloodlines for 24 hours," she said making Sarutobi get more shocked by the second.
" So what rank do you want to be?" Sarutobi asked.
" I want to start at the bottom so I'm going to the Academy is that okay old man?" he asked.
" Sure I'll tell Iruka you start tommorow," Sarutobi said.
Naruto and Kyuubi walked out of the office after getting his father's scroll and the Forbidden Scroll. Naruto also got the keys to the Namikaze compound.
" So Kyuu-chan what do you want to do?" he asked.
" I know what I want to do," she said and started giggling.
" I told you not until I was older," he said.
" I know, but we can do other things like make out," she said.
" Oh I am okay with that," he said.
Those two started making out until a ninja came and knocked on the door.Naruto got up and walked over to the door to see who it was.
" Yes?" he asked.
" The Sandaime wants to see you," the ninja said then he vanished.
" Well I'll be back later Kyuu-chan," he said as he walked out the door.
Naruto walked over to the Hokage tower, but didn't see he was there so he walked over to the council room. He walked into the room.
" How dare you walk into an important council meeting uninvited," said one of cilivian council people (He has a mask on that is why they don't know who he is)
" Don't worry he is a part of this meeting actually," said Sarutobi.
" What do you mean?" they all asked.
" Okay do you know how Naruto Uzumaki vanished 8 years ago," he said.
" Yes it was so great we organized a party," some of the civilian side said.
" Well guess what he's back," he said.
" WHAT!!!!!" all of the civilian side yelled.
" Naruto take off your mask," he said.
" K old man," Naruto said as he took off his mask. All of the council was shocked to see Naruto was still alive and he was back. All of the civilian side immediantly got angry.
" Kill him he is a missing ninja since he left the village," one of them yelled. " No I'm not I was 4 and wasn't a ninja so I'm not a missing nin," he said smirking.
" Who cares you are still a demon so kill him!!!" one yelled. " It doesn't matter I'm not a demon I'm a hanyou a half human half demon and Kyuubi isn't in me anymore," he said shocking all of them. " Also I am the son of..." he started, but was cut off by Sarutobi. " Now now we don't need to know who your father is now so Naruto I'll see you later," said Sarutobi. Naruto walked back to his house only to see Kyuubi asleep so he walked over to the bed, lied down in it, Kyuubi grabbed him in her sleep and cuddled up next to him, and then he fell asleep. The Next Morning... Naruto got up, got himself unattached to Kyuubi, and got dressed back into the same clothes he wore when he came to Konoha. He was about to leave when he heard Kyuubi wake up. " Hey where do you think you're going and withoout giving me a good bye hug or kiss geez," she said in a fake angry voice. " I'm sorry Kyuu-chan I just didn't want to wake you up," he said. He walked over to her and kissed her which ended with her grabbing him and them having a make out session. When they were done Naruto left and walked towards school when he suddenly decided to just poof there. He put his arm in a sign and he was gone. He then showed up right outside of the class and he was late because of his make out session with Kyuubi. He put his ear near the door and heard Iruka say we have a new student so he used the same jutsu and appeared in the classroom (Oh yeah he is going to be at half power all the time which is enough to make any Hokage shake in fear so imagine what it will do to a lot of kids and some chunins). Right when he did everyone in the classroom fell to the ground in pain. " Who...are...you?" asked Iruka. " I am your new student Naruto Uzumaki," he said. " What are you doing to make us be like this?" asked Iruka. " I am only standing, but that is my chakra at half of its full power also before you ask about my fox tails and fox ears that is because I am a hanyou," said Naruto." Well can you turn your chakra down we can't stand up?" asked Iruka. " No, but here," Naruto said making a hand sign and everyone could automatically stand up. " Okay well welcome to the class," said Iruka." Thanks," he said and walked to the back looking for a chair. Lets see what everyone is thinking about him...Sasuke-' If I had that power I could defeat my brother Itachi,'. Hinata-' Naruto I haven't seen him in 8 years oh my gosh I can't believe he's back I am gonna to tell him my feelings now,'. Sakura-' Who cares how strong he is he is no match for my Sasuke-kun.' Naruto walked back to where Sasuke was sitting and he sat down next to Sasuke. Sasuke then whispered to him," How about you tell me where you got your strength," he said. " How about no I won't you bastard," said Naruto. " How dare you talk to aN Uchiha like that," said Sasuke. " I know what happened to the Uchihas and I know how the civilian council gives you everything you want on a silver platter, but I won't and PS Itachi is a weakling," said Naruto who then fell asleep.
What Naruto last said got on Sasuke's nerves so he decided to show Naruto a lesson during the rookie of the year since today was the last day of the academy. Iruka was teaching since today was the last day until he saw Naruto asleep so he threw an eraser at him, but Naruto in his sleep grabbed it and threw it back at Iruka. The whole class started laughing so Iruka walked up to Naruto," Naruto why did you throw an eraser at me?" he asked, but he didn't get a response so he picked Naruto up and noticed he was actually asleep. About an hour later Naruto finally woke up when he heard that they were going to have a rookie of the year taijutsu duel so he said," Hey I'll be in that so who am I fighting?" he asked. " Okay you can fight. You are fighting Sasuke," said Iruka. They went out to the field. " Okay start," Iruka said and right when he finished saying that Sasuke was unconscious and Naruto didn't even look like he moved. " What happened?" asked Iruka. " I was moving so fast that when you said start I ran over punched him and ran back so fast it looked like I didn't move," he said..

Eikenrocks2    Naruto walked back into the crowd of students not even caring about their shocked faces until Sakura walked up to him and grabbed him by his collar while yelling," How dare you hurt Sasuke-kun!!!" Naruto flinched at the sound of her voice, but he just replied back," It was a taijutsu fight of course I'm suppose to hurt that emo-teme," he said. He saw her cock her fist back and get ready to punch him so he didn't move. Right when he was about to get hit he kawamiried with the unconscious body and saw as he was punched by Sakura making him fly into Lower Earth's Orbit.

" Hehe wow that was far never would've guessed that you were that strong because I know you don't have much training in the art of taijutsu, ninjutsu, and genjustu...hm if you control your anger problems you might be able to become a great healer," he mumbled to himself while ignoring Sakura screaming at him about how he made her hit her precious Sasuke-kun. Naruto sat down in front of a tree and watched as the rest of the taijutsu matches went on. He saw Sakura get beat by Ino and then Hinata beat Ino.

He heard Iruka yell for everyone to come in so they can show off their ninjutsu skills and if they are able to do 3 easy jutsu then they will pass. After waiting about 15 minutes Naruto heard his name be called so he walked down to Iruka who told him to do the Kawamiri no Jutsu. Iruka threw a kunai at Naruto who substituted with a chair. Next they told him to do the Henge no Jutsu. He first made some Kage Bunshins and then he had them all henge into the 4 hokages. " Okay I was going to ask you to do the Bunshin no Jutsu, but I guess you don't need to. You pass Naruto Uzumaki," Iruka said as he handed him the headband.

Naruto took it and put it around his head and shunshinned away leaving shocked faces as well as an angry and injured Sasuke thinking 'I need his power!'

Naruto appeared in his house. He was about to go find Kyuubi, but he was tackled to the ground by said person. " Welcome back Naru-kun," she said with a foxy grin that looked exactly like his." Hehe thanks Kyuu-chan," he said. Kyuubi smirked before giving him a passionate kiss which Naruto gladly returned. Naruto decided that they should make out in a more comfortable place so he shunshinned them to the bed and continued kissing.

After a few minutes Naruto and Kyuubi was snuggled up together when Naruto heard his doorbell ring. He got up and started to angrily mumble about stupid who get in the way of his kissing. When he opened the door he saw the Inuzuka head. " Why hello Inuzuka-sama what may I owe this gracious meeting?" he asked. Tsume looked at him before saying," It's okay I don't like using titles so please call me Tsume," she said with a feral grin.

" Ok I will if you call me Naruto Tsume-chan," he said with one of his foxy grins. Tsume blushed slightly before saying," Okay Naru-chan," she laughed when she saw his annoyed look. " Okay back to business I'm here to ask if we can make an alliance?" she asked. " Why would you want to make an alliance with the demon brat I mean I'm nota clan head or anything," he said hoping she would fall for it.

" You can't fool me I know the Yondaime's scent and yours smell almost the same as his," she said. " *sigh* I guess you found me out yes I am the son of the Yondaime," he said.

" Okay I was hoping that we could have an alliance?" she asked. " Sure, but how should the alliance be formed?" he asked.

" Well the only way I can think of i a marriange alliance," she said. Naruto nodded before he realized what she said. " WHAT!!!! But I have Kyuu-chan," he said. " Oh okay, but do you realize that you are under the CRA?" she asked. " What's the CRA?" he asked. " The CRA is the Clan Restoration Act. It was made so that a male who is the last of his clan can take multiple wives to keep his kekkei genkai alive," she exlained. " Oh well before I agree let me ask Kyuu-chan," he said as he ran back to his room. When he got there he ran face first into Kyuubi's cleavage.When Kyuubi felt it happen she just hugged him until she felt him squirm for air. She let go of him and, after breathing in some air told Kyuubi what was happening.

" Hm I don't mind since in the Kitsune dimension some male kitsunes take multiple wives, but in those relationships the wives usually fall in love with the other women as well as the male so I'm telling you that I will not fall in love with my harem sisters in a romantic way and I will not have a threesome with one of them," she said not noticing Naruto's huge blush. " O-O-Okay," he said as he ran back.

" Okay I will agree to the Marriage Alliance," he said. " Okay now who shall I get to marry you...Well I would suggest Hana, but she is in love with someone named Tsukaine. All the rest are married except.." she said before looking at him. " Well the woman you're marrying is me," she said. " What! Are you sure?" he asked. " Yeah I'm sure I don't want to ruin my life and I want what's best for the clan," she said. " Hm okay if you're okay with this than do you have the paperwork?" he asked. She put her hand down her shirt causing Naruto to blush, but he saw her pull the paperwork out.

" Here you go," she said handing it to him. He got a pen and started to sign everything he needs to. He hands it to her and she shunshins away to get her stuff so she can move in with him. Naruto just sighed before he felt himself being pulled back into his room by Kyuubi.

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