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Tina & Tikki's Trip to the Beach.
Tina and Tikki go to the beach. What'll happen when they get lost? This is 3rd person POV.
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[Introduction] It was a hot, sunny day at the beautiful Ocean Beach in San Diego, the home town of Tina and Tikki. These two 17 year olds were the bestest friends ever. Their families would go together to beaches and amusement parks. Today, they planned to go to the beach nearby their house in San Diego. As the rest of the family were hanging out by the ocean, Tina and Tikki quietly sneaked out and ran in their little bathing suits to a giant tree. They hid behind the tree for awhile to catch their breath and laughed their heads off. Tina, who was briefly fixing her makeup, looked at Tikki with an "evil" look. Tikki understood. But, just to be sure, she still commented on Tina's look.
"Why are you looking at me like that, chica?" she asked, using a sarcastic tone. She brushed off some of the sand in her sandals and gazed up at the sky to see if a UFO would suddenly come down where the two ladies were and take them away to a fantasy-land where there would be clothes, bling-blings, and TONS of hot boys. Ah.. if only! Tikki waited for Tina's reply and sat down against the big tree. Tina sat beside her, fanning herself with her hand as if she was the queen of this beach.
"You know, Tikki? I wish a UFO would come down and abduct us away into a---"
"Fantasy-land, right?" Tikki interrupted while laughing,"I know Tina, I was JUST thinking about that!"
Tina and Tikki laughed and laughed until their stomach hurt. Then, they peeked behind the tree to check what the others were doing. Because the sun was going down now, Tina's sister Deepa and Tikki's sister Mangeeta were probably already sitting inside the van. Rahul, Tina's brother, was still playing football with Tina and Tikki's dads. Both of their moms were sitting in the sand with little Goodi, Tikki's sister.
"We should totally run away to nowhere!" Tina exclaimed. Tikki giggled, loving the idea.
"Yeah, but look what we're wearing!" she said, looking down at her swimming suit. Tina did the same.
"Oh, who cares?! Come on! We can't be like those freakin' freaks who cover up their bodies! At least we're covering the major parts!" Tina said. She tugged on Tikki's arm and Tikki right away went along with her. They ran like wild girls onto the random pathway in front of them. They passed by a middle-aged man wearing a boring old black business suit. They screamed and yelled and jumped around. The man smiled at them. Tina ran up to him, kissed his cheek, and ran away toward Tikki. Tikki laughed and Tina tried to go ahead of her. Tikki was very competitive. She took a quick deep breath and ran wildly past Tina. Suddenly, Tina was not behind Tikki anymore.
"Catch up, Tina!" Tikki shouted without looking behind her.
Tina did not respond. Tikki looked behind her and stopped, breathless. Where was Tina?
rileylover    The first thought in her head was that Tina must've gotten kidnapped by someone. She looked around her in no vain. She ran to a path which she hadn't noticed before because she was running too fast. Then she stopped and sat down against a huge oak tree.
"Where art thou, MY FRIEND," Tikki shouted out loud high-pitched.
Meanwhile, Tina was also looking for Tikki.

ekta    Tina had stumbled over a huge log in the middle of the sidewalk. "Wow, really," she said to herself. She looked down at her bruised knee that was slightly bleeding. She stood up very slowly and limped her way toward the path where tikki had went. "Tikki?" she screamed as loud as she can.



rileylover    "Where are you!" she exclaimed. She saw a huge oak tree and sat against it. Just then she heard someone breathing, like that someone was around the corner. She quickly stood up and looked at the other side of the tree. "Tikki!" she squealed. Tikki had been sitting down by the tree as well.

ekta    "Oh my god! I was scared like crazy! Where were you!" Tikki exclaimed.
"Well...I kinda stumbled over a huge log that I totally didnt see in the way," Tina said.
"Wow, really? You are so clumsy Tina!" Tikki said.
"Yea, yea whatever. Let's go to the beach so I can wash my knee," Tina suggested.
Tikki looked down at Tina's knee and made a grossed out face. "Ew, lets go," she said.
So they both went back towards the sand and soaked themselves in the salty ocean water. "Ah this feels much better!" Tina said.
Tikki said, "lets go eat something...wait, the restaurant people would kick us out because of our...clothes."
"We could always buy somethin'. lets go!" Tina squealed.
So they both ran back towards the shops and went inside a boutique. After about 10 minutes of looking around the store, the two girls bought matching short sleeved, vneck, light blue shirts. Tina bought short khakhi shorts, while Tikki bought herself skin colored short shorts. After that they stepped inside pita pita and went up to the front counter to order their food.
"I'll have a veggie sandwich with coke," Tina said.
"Me too!" Tikki said from behind her.
"$6.50," the cashier said. The cashier was a punk teenager that looked like he hated his life. He had a piercing on his eyebrow and bottom lip. He was wearing pitch black clothes behind an apron saying, "welcome to pita pita!" The cashier gave them their reciept and the two girls stood in a corner to wait for their sandwiches.
"I'm starving," Tikki said.
Tina nodded and started to bite her fingernail. After a short 5 minutes their sandwiches came, pipping hot from the oven, and they both went to sit down in a table for two. The two started digging in like a bunch of hungry bears. "Oh man, this is good," Tina mummbled.
"Mhmmm," Tikki said, agreeing.
Just then someone called out their name, "Tina! Tikki!"



rileylover    Tina and Tikki groaned and looked behind them, their mouth still full of the yummy sandwich. They found both Tina's dad and Tikki's dad, sweating and looking as if they're the coolest dads in the world and they're the most athletic men in this whole beach. Tina ignored them by facing back away from them and taking a sip of her coke. Tikki looked at her nails to show how much she didn't care. Their dads stood in front of them, both crossing their arms as if they're Tina and Tikki's bodyguards. Tikki cracked up and some of the sandwich crust came flying out of her mouth and landed on her coke. That set her off and she stood up, grabbed the coke and angirly walked back to the bored cashier. Tina was laughing hysterically while the dads looked at each other in amusement and took their seats right next to Tina. They had a little talk. The whole time the bossy dads were chatting away, Tina was just texting away to her hotty boyfriend.
Tikki stood in front of the cashier, her expression saying "if you mess with me, I'll break every muscle you use". The cashier, with his tired eyes, stared at her, trying to remember what to say to a customer. Tikki was angry like hell and speechless.
"Yes?" the cashier finally managed to blurt out.
Tikki pointed at her soda and said, "I want a freaking refill, you moron... you better give it to me or else.."
She put her fist up and threatened to punch him. Tina watched all this drama and tried hard not to laugh because if she did, the dads would wonder what she's laughing at and look behind them. So she went on with texting. The cashier did give Tikki a refill and Tikki, still grossed out by her own eaten chunk in her coke, didn't even say thank you. She came back and sat next to Tina, taking a big sip of her new refilled coke.
"What do you guys freakin' want?" Tikki asked in a mean tone to the two fathers. Tina laughed, but not at Tikki. She laughed at what her boyfriend had said.

ekta    Her boyfriend had said, "I am going out of town for the whole week. Oh and by the way the high school convention is tommorow. I'm going." She could not hold it in anymore. She couldn't believe how stupid her boyfriend was. He was obviuosly lying becuase he had said that he was going to be out of town and yet he would be in town for the convention. How stupid!
Tina's dad, James, spoke up and said, "ladies, we want you to come home. It is getting pretty late and we dont want you two to be roaming out here alone. I mean if your friends were here with you then we wouldn't have to worry. The world is a very scary and cruel place. You two should come home now. "
Tina rolled her eyes and looked at Tikki. Tikki was looking down at her lap, so Tina assumed that she was texting. Tina looked back down to her cell phone and pretended to look at a text message as she replied, "well...I dont know, it's not late. it's like 6:30. So you two should head on home."
Tikki's dad, David, said, "no, we have to go home. your mom's are worried."
"That leaves us with no option other than to...run!" Tikki shouted as she and Tina got up out of their seats and ran as fast as they can toward the street. "See ya later aligator!" She shouted out while looking back to the dads and blowing a kiss.
"Wait!" Both of the dads shouted out. But Tina and Tikki ran away way too fast.
"Now what?" Tina said.
"Uhm...let's go inside this store!" Tikki said while pointing to Gap. They both scrambled inside the store and stood there huffing and puffing, trying to catch their breaths. "Let's go inside the fitting room, in case our dads find us again," she said. So they both quickly got inside one fitting room, closed the door, and sat on the bench, their backs to the mirror. "What a day," Tikki said.
Tina nodded then said, "So what are we going to do?"
"Uhm, I dont know...wait! I have an idea!" Tikki shouted.
"Yes?" Tina asked.

rileylover     Tikki really didn't have any idea what to say so she just laughed and said, "you silly goose! why would I have any idea? I'm just here to get away from my freakin' parents! But then again, we could redo our hair and makeup while we still have this mirror behind us!"
Tikki turned around and stared at herself. What beautiful eyes! Tina couldn't help it either. She turned around too and stared at herself. They both started fixing their already perfect hair and eventually ended up doing each other's hair. Tina made Tikki's hair into a French braid while Tikki made Tina's hair into two little ponytails.
"Hey, Tikki?" Tina asked while Tikki did her hair.
"Hmmm?" Tikki replied, concentrating on Tina's hair. She accidentally pulled Tina's hair too hard and Tina screamed.
They both regretted her high-pitched scream when some employee person knocked on their door and asked, "IS EVERYTHING ALRIGHT?"
"Yes!!" they both shouted. But the emlployee eventually kicked them out of the fitting room for being too "loud" and "talkative". That was such a rip off! Then what the hell werere fitting rooms for?
When Tikki angerly asked this question to one of the red-headed, big-nosed empoyee, she replied,"only for trying on clothes, not pigging around." Tina and Tikki laughed and "oinked" like a pig at the employee, whose name was Baconea. Tina and Tikki ran away from the store and had one place in mind to go to. Tina had suggested it but Tikki was thinking twice about whether to go there or not.
"Are you sure you want to go there?" Tikki asked. Tina nodded.
Just to be sure Tikki heard Tina right, she asked,"Wait, where are we going again?"

ekta    "Uhmm we're going home, and being good girls," Tina replied.
"Ohh yeah, thats what I thought. I kinda don't want to go home, let's go somewhere better...like a...bar or a party. Or even better! Hanging out with our boyfriends! For crying out loud!!!" Tikki suggested.
"Well...that does sound better than going home." Tina said.
"See!" Tikki said. They passed by a roaring car blasting music as loud as it can and literally jumped up and down as if about to collapse. "Ow," Tikki said to the car as if the driver could hear.
"I wanna buy something. I feel like spending mula," Tina said, whining.
"Okay that was way too random, Tina," Tikki said as she laughed.
"Please, come on. There's Bebe," Tina said as she pointed to a Bebe store across the street. "Race you there!" she said as she raced off across the street and entered the store in a huff.
"I didn't see that one coming," Tikki said as she entered a few seconds later. "Ohhh, there's alota' good stuff here," she said.
"Let's spend money!" Tina whisper-shouted. She ran off at one of the racks with pretty, short dresses. She immediately started grabbing whatever she liked and whatever would fit her. By the end of her shopping experience she had about 10 beautiful outfits on her arm, ready to try. She ran into one of the fitting rooms without even looking to see if anyone's in there. So, of course someone turned out to be in there. "OH!" Tina said as she entered into the fitting room and bumped into a good looking, shirtless, muscular, tall, and tan Italian guy.
"Bonjourno," he said as he grinned down at her. He was about 8 inches taller than her, standing at about 6'2", while she at 5'7". She had to look up quite a tremendous amount to meet eyes with him.


ekta    "I am so so sorry," She said as she started to leave.
"Hey, wait up. Hi, I'm Ralph," he said, as he did a side grin. Tina was already nervous at the sight of his amazing body and hotness. How could she manage to bring out a hi? She took a breath and managed to bring out a smile.
She answered, "I'm Tina."
"Nice to meet you...and that too in a very strange way. I'm sorry I should have locked the fitting room," he said
"Oh no, its my fault," she said, "I should've looked first before entering. I can make it up to you. I'm so sorry."
"Hmm, let's see. There's a really nice club downtown with a hella sick DJ," he said, "want to come?"
Tina thought for a while and then asked,"Can my friend come too?"
"Of course! Why cant she? If you're so gorgeous, then your friend must be too," he said.
"Oh gee, thanks. Well, I'll go now. Meet me at the register?" Tina asked.
"Yes, Tina. Nice meeting you,'" he said. Tina smiled back and then exitted the fitting room and took the one next to Ralph's. She tried on all of the outfits, but only ended up liking 6 out of 10 of them. So she hurried to the register and bought the outfits before Ralph came out, so she could tell Tikki about him. She went off in a search for Tikki around the store and finally spotted her, and that too in the underwear section.
"Tikki!" Tina said as she went up to her.
"Hello," Tikki said, "Look these are for sale. 5 for $20."
"Yea, yea whatever. Anyways, I have to tell you something!" Tina said in a hurry
"Yea?" Tikki asked.
"Well, so I went into one of the fitting rooms without looking and turns out theres a hot, muscular, shirtless guy in there. So obviuosly I bump into him and I say sorry like a billion times. And then I offer to make it up to him and he says that I can make it up by coming to this club with him in downtown. And then I asked him if you can come and he said yes! And so this brings me to the conclusion that...he's over 21! Ahhhh! And he can get us in. And that means, party time!!!!!!!!" Tina said, in a rush.
"Woah, woah, woah there. That was a lot of information. Oh and, I'm in! Let's go find this hunk, " Tikki said.
"We're supposed to meet him at the register. Let's go," Tina said. So they both went up to the register and he was buying his items. After he was done, he came up to them.
"Hello, ma'am. May I know your name?" he asked Tikki.
"Tikki," Tikki said as she extended out her hand for him to shake. And so they shook hands.
"Okay, so you two probably want to get ready right? Oh and, do you both want to go to a salon and get your face and hair tidied up before we go?" he asked.
"Hell yes!" Tina said, "so what do we do?"
"Okay, so first I take you both to a salon and get you both ready. Oh and by the way, the expense is mine, okay? And then you two change into your clothes, in my car if you want or a bathroom. Your choice. Okay? Oh and the party is at 9:30," he said.
"Sounds good!" Tikki said. So all three of them ran out of the store and scrambled into Ralph's car. They drove to a high end salon and got their hair and makeup done. Tikki got her hair done in tight curls and Tina got her hair in loose curls. They both chose the same palette of makeup, smokey eyes and natural face. After that is done, they went back to Ralph's car.
"So you both want to change in here? Or a bathroom?" he asked.
"Bathroom!" They both shouted in unison.


rileylover    "Sounds good!" he said.
So both of the girls went straight to a bathroom and each of them went into a stall. They came out at the same time, both looking equally beautiful.
"Wow!" Tina said as she looked at herself in the mirror, "don't I look so hot?"
Tikki was only paying attention to herself and fixing her dress, hair, and makeup so they looked absolutely perfect. She hoped that guy Ralph had an equally hot brother that was about her age. Even though Tina and Tikki already had boyfriends, it was always healthy to go out and be free so they could meet other guys. That was exactly what Tina was doing. Tina glanced an evil look at Tikki.
"What?" Tikki asked, finally looking at her best friend.
"You didn't answer me, god dammit!" Tina half-shouted. She was getting a little pissed off at Tikki, who was only paying attention to herself.
"What the hell was your question?" Tikki asked.
"Whatever," Tina said. She stormed out of the bathroom, Tikki 5 seconds behind her. They went inside Ralph's sexy car again, ignoring each other. Tina sat in the front seat and Tikki, with no other option, sat in the boring back. Ralph said, "ohh! Gorgeous, ladies! Anyways, are you two even 21? Not that I care, just wondering."
Tina and Tikki rolled their eyes, unintentionally, at the same time. Tina laughed randomly, probably thinking about some past times. Ralph started the car and drove off, going rapidly fast. Tikki answered his question.
"No, we're not even 18 yet... I hope you don't get all freaked out about that," she said, using a slightly sarcastic tone. This time Ralph laughed.
"Yeah, but my dad is a cop, that's why I'm asking," he said casually. Tina gulped. Tikki's heart started to beat fast, but she has been in these kinds of situations before. She would be okay. As long as Ralph's dad wasn't there.
"Are you 21?" Tina challenged. Ralph laughed again.
"Wow, um. No, but I'm gonna be in two weeks," he said. He reached over to the radio and turned it on, keeping it loud. Tikki danced to the beats. Tina was still holding a grudge on the bathroom "incident". As the car drove into a parking lot of a fancy club, Tina gasped when she recognized someone standing with another person she didn't recognize in the long line of getting into the club.
"OMG," Tina said, panicking.

ekta    She realized that it was her ex-boyfriend, Nick, and he was with a...gorgeous girl! Not that she cared. She was dating the hottest guy in town, and every single damn girl was jealous of her, so hah! Tina smoothed her silver, super short, sparkly, strapless mini dress in her seat as Ralph finally parked.
"What's wrong?" Ralph finally asked Tina
"Oh uhm, I just see a really good friend of mine...that's not my friend anymore...yeah," Tina said nervously.
"Okay Tina, I believe you," Ralph said as he chuckled, "Anyways, while you both were gettting your long-ass makeup and hair treatment, I went and got these!" He took two metallic cards from his pocket and handed each of them one.Tina examined the card very carefully and all of a sudden her expression went from blah to happy.
"Oh my god! This is a fake ID! Thanks!!! Wait...how did you get our pictures?" Tina asked gleefully.
"Remember when you two were getting your hair done, and I asked if I can take some pictures for 'memories'?" He said.
"You are an 'effing genious!" Tikki shouted. "Lets get out of this sucker!" So they all got out of the car and went where the line ends to enter the club. After about a good 15 minutes, they finally got in. Inside, it was extremely crowded, loud, and...intoxicated. All three of them headed over to the bar and each one of them sat down in their own stools.
"Well ladies, what would you like?" He asked both of them.
"Margarita on the rocks" Tina said.
"Me too!" Tikki said.
"Alright, I'll take the same too," he said. He then told the bartender their order and handed him a crisp $20 and $10 bill for a total of $30, $10 per drink. Once they got their margaritas, they drank away, one glass after another, totalling up to about five glasses each person. The bill was clearly huge, but Ralph paid it without any complaints. By now all three of them were super tipsy, you could say. "Do you both care for a dance?" Ralph asked both of them.
"How can you dance with both of us," Tina said, as she continuously laughed.
"Dont worry, I can handle anything," He said. And so they all headed to the dance floor. "Okay, Tina in front of me, Tikki behind me. Im in the middle," he said.
"Ohhhh I see, " Tikki said. So they did as they were told...and danced for a straight 30 minutes.
"Come with me," Ralph said after 30 minutes, and lead them outside the club for a fresh breath of air. "Come in my car," he said. Tina and Tikki were too drunk to not listen to him, so they did as they were told. When all of a sudden... before they entered the car, Ralph said, "Oh my god! Get in the car!" They all hurried inside the car, and then Ralph sped away from the club and away from any crowd. "I recognized my dad," he said.
"Oh my god really!" Tikki said.
"I should drop you both home." he said. "Its 10oclock."

rileylover    That's when Tina randomly started to laugh. Ralph started to get annoyed because this was serious! His dad was there and they could've been in big trouble. Tikki started to sing a song by Brittney spears and Tina joined in.
"Sing along!" Tina exclaimed to Ralph.
"Where do you girls live?" He asked, his forehead sweating.
"I-I-I DOON'TTTT KNOOOOW!!!!" Tina shouted right in his ear. She laughed again. Tikki looked out her window and saw wierd shapes.
"WHAT IS THAT IN THE CLOUDS? IT THAT A TEDDY BEAR? OR A-A-A MOONNNSTEEERR?" Tikki shouted.
Ralph suddenly realized that he had no idea where they were going now. He got a little angry because usually when he was drunk, his temper went out of control.
"Girls! Where the hell do you two live? I don't know where the hell I'm going! God freakin' DAMMIT!" He said. He slammed on the breaks and pulled over to the nearest pull-over spot. Tina leaned toward him and licked his ear. She laughed again.
"LET'S GOOOO! I NEED TO PEE!" Tikki whined. Tina turned to look at Tikki. Tikki could only see blurry visions and when she saw Tina's face, she saw that Tina had turned into a... napkin. "STOP ACTING LIKE A NAPKIN!" she demanded. She pointed her middle finger at Tina. Slowly, she began to see absolutly nothing. Eventually, she fainted. Meanwhile, Tina was trying to flirt with Ralph. His face was burried in his hands and he wasn't sure what to do.
"Hey, wanna have fun?" Tina asked while rubbing her finger up and down Ralph's arm. She bit her lip and her other hand reached for his hair. She tugged on it and made him look at her. His face was red with anger but Tina couldn't see that because of her blurry vision.
"Tina, seriously, where do you live?" Ralph asked. He pushed both of Tina's hands away from himself.
"UMMMM," Tina said slowly,"Weeee liivvveee....uhhhh.... in the.... in your car!" She laughed.
"NO!" Ralph exclaimed, "I mean, where is your actual home, actually?"
Just then, they heard sirens. Tina giggled at that sound because somehow, it sounded like Elmo. Ralph was shocked because he knew the cops were after them. He recognized his dad's car.
"We're in big trouble," Ralph murmered. Again, Tina laughed.

ekta    "PUT YOUR HANDS UP! NOW!" Someone said over a loud intercom. Ralph immediatey put his hands up and noticed that Tikki fainted so she couldn't do it and Tina was too stupid right now to do it too.
"Tina! Put your hands up," Ralph said, trying to stay calm. Fortuanetly, Tina did as she was told, and Ralph scrolled down the window on his side. The cops came toward the car and fortuanetly it was his dad that came up to his window. "Dad, I can explain," He stuttered.
"Oh no, boy. There's no explaining here. I'm afraid I am going to have to do a DUI even though it's quite clear these two ladies are drunk," his dad said.His dad took out a machine "thingy" and examined it. "Open your mouth boy."
"No dad, come on. You can't be such a mean dad! Damn it! Let me off the hook, just this once. Please!" Ralph said.
"I've let you off the hook so many freaking times! This time, I am not!" his dad shouted. "Now, before I do the DUI test, let me ask you a few questions since these ladies can't speak."
"Oh yes! I can speak! Officer! Officer! I can speak!" Tina shouted.
"You stay quiet okay," his dad said.
"Yes sir!" Tina said, as she saluted him.
"Now, start from the beggining," his dad said.
"Well, what do you mean?" Ralph asked.
"What did you do with these girls and how come y'all are drunk?" he asked.
"Uhmm, well we...we...," Ralph was thinking of what to say, because clearly he could not tell his dad about the fake I.D.'s.
"Come on now, speak up!" he shouted.
"Officer, let me explain pleaseeeeeeeeee!" Tina said.
"Okay, let's give it a shot," his dad said, clearly frustrated.
"Well..we-" Tina started to say.
"No! Stop!" Ralph interrupted. Just then Ralph quickly put his keys in the ignitions, put it on park and accelarated to get some speed, and then put the gear of drive and speeds out of there. "Hold on ladies!" He shouted as he made a narrow turn into the barren street.
"Woooooow, this is fun. Where are we? Wait! We're in Disneyland! Weeeeeeeee!" Tina squealed. Ralph drove as quickly as he can and soon realized the police car was not following him. Once he realized that, he parked on the curb and put the car on park.
"Why isn't my dad following me?" He said, kind of to himself.
"I know why! Pick me! Pick me! Pick me! Pick me!" Tina shouted, annoyingly.
"Yes, you. what?" he asked.
"Well, he can always deal with you at home! Duhrrr!" she said.
"Holy crap! That's so true! Damn it! I can't go home. Do you two mind if I stay over for a night! Please," he asked.
"And we could have fun! Let's go!" Tina said.
"I don't know where you live," he said.
"Ohhh, neither do I. Maybe it says in my phone," she said, "Here look through it." She handed him her Android phone and let him look through it. He looked through it with immense focus and then came to a realization.
"I found it! It was in your notes, for some reason," he said.
"Oh yipee!" Tina squealed.
"Let's get the fuck out of here!!!" He shouted as he sped out of there and towards their destination.

rileylover    They drove all around until finally, after maybe half an hour, they found their destination. Ralph parked along the curb and turned off his headlights. Tina saw a random guy walking down the sidewalk and saw that he was wearing glasses! Tina got out of the car and ran toward this guy and blocked him by putting her hands out and her legs spread. The guy looked at her like he was scared. Tina half-smiled.
"Hey.... What's you? I dunno you, are you a zombie?" She asked with a drunk tone. The guy didn't answer her. He tried to keep on walking but Tina grabbed his shirt from behind and held it with her firm grip. The guy looked around for help and saw that there was the car that Tina had come from and there were a few people there. Ralph was getting Tikki out and was carrying her. He came toward Tina and the new guy. Ralph was drunk, too, so he laughed and tried to keep hold of Tikki at the same time.
"What's your name?" Ralph asked, "Do you live in the neighborhood?"
"Yeah!! Where do you live? By me? Is your name Ralph, too?" Tina asked, her hand still gripped on the guy's t-shirt.
"What do you guys want?" He asked. He clearly had problems and he was trying to escape from these crazy gang of teenagers. Although, he was a teenager himself. Maybe around Tina and Tikki's age.
"You!" Tina said as he made his lips smash on hers. The guy tried to pull away from her kiss but he couldn't hit her because she was a girl. Finally, after ten seconds, Tina let go of him but still held on to his t-shirt. She giggled.
"What do you call yourself?" Tina asked. Ralph was more serious now and he was getting impatient. He had to inside but he couldn't without Tina.
"Tina, um, let's go... My dad can trace my car anytime," he said quickly.
"No!" Tina said stubornly.
"Please! Pretty, pretty please?" Ralph asked. Tikki's weight was getting heavier and heavier. The guy was trying to run again but Tina was unusually strong.
"Stop!" she shouted,"I won't go until I know his name!"
"Please, can we know your god damned name?" Ralph asked.
"Ben!" He shouted angerly.
"You have a last name? What is your last name?" Tina asked him like she was a cop.
"Peter," Ben said, again angerly.
"Prettyyy!" Tina sang. She let go of him and ran to her front door while Ralph quickly said thanks to Ben and walked there, too. She rang the doorbell three times and swayed around, trying to hula dance.
"Wait," Ralph said, "your parents won't be okay with you here, drunk. And they especially won't be okay with me!" He hid behind Tina, although Tikki was seen behind her.
"Hahahaha. No! My parentsssss are nicccce. Now, do the hula, you maccho man!" She said, using a smooth tone. The door opened and Ralph ran to the driveway and stayed there, afraid of what they're going to say. Tina found that it was her coolest family member: her brother, Rahul.
"Hey, Tina," he said. Although Rahul was only about 15, he was so, so cool in Tina's eyes.
"Heyyyy! What Uuup?" she asked him as she ruffled his hair up, "Come, Ralphy!!"
Ralph stood there and hesitated, wondering if he should go there or not.

ekta    Tina and Ralph entered inside of her house and realized that everyone was asleep except for Rahul. Ralph entered in awkwardly and looked around the house cautious of parents. "Who's this guy?" Rahul asked, "I thought that your boyfriend was someone else. And Tikki too..."
"Oh Rahul! He's...he's...a friend. I don't know his name," Tina replied.
"Okay, well you guys do whatever you want. I'm going to my room," said Rahul. Ralph followed Tina to her room, still carrying Tikki. Once they reached there he set Tikki on the bed and Tina collapsed on the bed next to her. Ralph awakwardly stood there, wondering what to do. Tina stood up and walked up to him.
"Are you going to sleep or not!" She asked.
"Where?" he asked, confused.
"In the bed, you fool! Come on!" she said. She dragged him on the bed and made him sleep next to Tikki and her, in the middle of them. "What's your name?" she asked Ralph.
"Ralph," he said. He turned towards Tikki so that Tina wouldn't bother him.

rileylover    After a few minutes of "sleeping", Ralph decided that it would be best if he left. He'd rather deal with his father's punishments than Tina and Tikki's crazy selves. He got up slowly, making sure Tina wouldn't wake up. Tina was breathing extra loud, to show she was asleep. But, of course, she was secretly wide awake. Ralph was about to open the bedroom door when Tina yelled, "INTRUDER! INTRUDER! INTRU---"
Ralph quickly ran towards her and covered her mouth. She was smiling instead of frowning. Was this some kind of joke? What if Ralph got caught? Ralph was sweating and breathing really hard. He tried to calm down.
"Please, Tina," he begged, "I- I'm not an... intruder. I am your... cousin? Yeah, I'm your cousin..." He wasn't sure what else to say so he just shut his mouth.
Tina laughed and said, "OHH! You're my cousin! SO... your're cousin Barney? Yes! you're cousin Barney! Barney the purple dinosaur!"
"You have a cousin named Barney?" Ralph muttered, really talking to himself, "I mean, yeah... as you can clearly see, I'm a big, fat, purple reptile." He laughed at himself for saying that.
"Barney... Are you allergic to kids?" Tina asked seriously, again acting like a cop.
"Ummm...." Ralph hesitated, then said, "Yeah. But I still play with them."
"Hmmmm...Suspicious.. And very interesting..." Tina murmered. She stood up and looked at him, a slight grin on her face. She pointed her first two fingers at him, like a gun. "If you move, I'll shoot."
"Okay..." Ralph said, putting his hands up as if to surrender.
Then, there was a knock on the door. Ralph and Tina froze. Uh oh.


ekta    "Tina! Honey! What's all that noise? Are you okay?" her dad, James, shouted from the other side of the door.
"Oh daddy! Come on in! We're having a party with Barney!" Tina shouted. Ralph quickly covered her mouth so she could say no more.
In his best girl voice that he can do, he said, "I'm just kidding! I was remembering something funny...with Tikki!"
"Tikki is here?" her dad asked.
"Oh yes, I didn't tell you? She...uhmm...she was feeling sad about something that hapened...so...she came over...yea!" Ralph said. Tina struggled to set herself free from Ralph's captivity. He held her down as strongly as possible.
"Okay honey, I'm not coming in because I trust you. Good night hun," her dad said. Ralph could hear his footsteps leaving down the hall back to his room.

rileylover    When Ralph let Tina go, she quickly stood up and went to the bedroom door. She opened it and poked her head out, smiling like a crazy person. While Tina was being ridiculous, Ralph took the opportunity to escape. He went up to her window and quietly opened it. He looked down outside and saw the long way down. It was after five seconds of looking down the window that Ralph noticed the barely noticable rope kind of thing in the side. Did Tina usually use this to... escape? As Ralph considered this, Tina went out the room and closed the door behind her. She tip toed to Rahul's bedroom and loudly banged on his door.
"RAHUL! WAKE UP!" Tina shouted outside Rahul's door. Rahul woke up and jumped out of bed, worried that something happened to his sister. He opened the door and let her in. The second he saw that Tina was not scared or anything, he got angry that he even believed something was wrong. He kicked his mini soccer ball that was just laying around.
"Hey! Whatcha doin'?" Tina asked, hugging her little brother. Rahul pulled her away and frowned at her.
"Tina, I thought something happened to you. Why'd you wake me up? Dude, I need to sleep," he complained.
"Ohhh... Sowwy," Tina cooed, "I was just wondering... if you wanna party with.... Barney the Dinosaur?"
"Get out, please," Rahul said, "I don't wanna have to call mom and dad. Go back to that boy friend of yours... Ralph, is it?"
He softly pushed her toward the door and opened it. He forced her to go out of his room and slammed the door on her face. Meanwhile, Ralph was kind of succeeding at escaping. He had managed to go out the window and climb one step down the wall with the hidden rope. By now, he was shaking with fear. He was trying not to look down as he thought about how he was going to overcome his fear and climb down the whole way.
"Don't be scared, don't be scared, don't be scared..." he kept on chanting this to himself. He took a deep breath and awkwardly climbed down three more steps. "Oh my god, this is hella scary."
Tina saddly walked back to her room. She shut the door and sat down on her bed next to Tikki. She had forgotten about Ralph and was only thinking about Rahul, the little brother who had kicked her out of his room. That's when she heard Ralph outside.
"Oh, freakin'.... ugh!" Ralph was saying. Tina looked at the open window, wondering where that voice was coming from. She cocked her head to the side and tried to listen for more. All she heard was someone's shoes jumping to the ground then the voice of Ralph saying, "Yes!" She heard him running away and then his footsteps faded. She finally stood up and walked toward the window. When she looked outside, she saw no one.
"Who is it?" She asked too quietly. When no one answered, she shrugged and walked back to the bed and sat there. After five minutes, she yawned and said, "I'm sweepy." She laid down in the bed next to Tikki, falling asleep within two minutes.

rileylover    That was the end of another day of the crazy lives of Tina and Tikki, two girls who would be best friends forever. The end.

The End!



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