Ratatosk Writings - Poetry Review Forum (Forum) http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums.php/item_id/1108422-Ratatosk-Writings---Poetry-Review-Forum item number - #1835464 looking for honest feedback ! thanks, rhea Sat, 24 Dec 2011 12:56:08 EST http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/2338426 item no. - #1835234 looking forward to honest feedback ! :) Sat, 24 Dec 2011 04:49:09 EST http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/2338320 [Link To Item #1739441] ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Demo Tue, 22 Mar 2011 22:01:13 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/2216235 [Link To Item #1609728] Tue, 20 Oct 2009 17:59:08 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1985847 [Link To Item #1409312] Firefly Nights if you have time, I would appreciate an honest review. I'm new to WDC, I hope I ve done this correctly. Thank you Thu, 03 Apr 2008 18:04:22 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1701189 Please review this [Link To Item #1395684] Thank you! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** [Link To Item #1381132] [Link To Item #1364493] ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Sun, 02 Mar 2008 21:36:34 EST http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1682258 You mentioned that we could submit chapters of stories, so if possible, could you review the prologue of my novel, Coming Home. [Link To Item #1340071] If you prefer to review a poem though (seeing as this is a Poetry Review forum), please review, [Link To Item #1340056] Thanks, Nicolina ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** I...[Read Full Post] Thu, 08 Nov 2007 14:19:56 EST http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1617208 {item 1309695} {item 1306677} {item 1303215} Fri, 28 Sep 2007 09:07:56 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1589080 I think that by commenting on specifics and trying to force your poem into a rhyme scheme, rather than let the poem talk to you and make its own is not very helpful. It roughly adheres to the sonnet form - and in these modern days of fluidity, I personally thank that is enough. I liked the poem exactly as it is - the words convey power and poignanc...[Read Full Post] Sun, 26 Aug 2007 08:35:21 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1570658 This is a newer piece that I would love feedback on. Have a great day! [Link To Item #1267758] Elizabeth ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Im...[Read Full Post] Wed, 13 Jun 2007 01:29:06 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1527298 [Link To Item #1265292] Wed, 30 May 2007 07:23:37 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1518845 [Link To Item #1268666] Have fun and keep writing, Yours truly, [Link To User rklaffarsmith] ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Mon, 28 May 2007 21:34:02 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1518117 Hi, The form of the following poem is based roughly on Edgar Allan Poe's "The Raven" which, I believe, is a Sapphic variant. This is new To me. Any comments or criticism welcome. [Link To Item #1260129] Cheers, Dennis ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ ...[Read Full Post] Sat, 12 May 2007 09:23:50 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1508235 What a lovely forum [Link To User phethean] I'd really love reviews for my poem. [Link To Item #1251375] Thank you! Have fun and keep writing, Yours truly, [Link To User rklaffarsmith] ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ...[Read Full Post] Sun, 22 Apr 2007 00:48:12 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1495103 When you have the time could you please be so kind to review: [Link To Item #1237152] or anything in this folder of new poems: [Link To Item #1075385] Thank-you, K. Fri, 06 Apr 2007 22:52:43 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1485989 Let me know what you think about this one. Thanks very much! [Link To Item #1233556] ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Fri, 16 Mar 2007 12:27:22 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1472050 I'm submitting this new poem to a contest. Be brutal. I really want to know what you think and what suggestions you may have. [Link To Item #1232484] Cheers, Dennis ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ...[Read Full Post] Wed, 14 Mar 2007 08:11:31 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1470624 [Link To Item #1211637] Thanks! ^_^ Sapphire Never give up and never give in! Check out my Portfolio! [Link: 'http://Writing.Com/authors/sapphire_black'] ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By ...[Read Full Post] Wed, 14 Feb 2007 12:43:38 EST http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1453889 Hi Shari, Please review my poem. Thank you. [Link To Item #1214935] &&emerin Sat, 10 Feb 2007 16:32:40 EST http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1451511 Shari, Reviewng is hard work so I take my off to writers who assist others by critiqing their work. Thank you in advance for your time and effort. Take care and try not to work too hard. Please review [Link To Item #1205842] Thank you again and bless your heart. Write On, Elaine...[Read Full Post] Sat, 20 Jan 2007 22:53:53 EST http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1438635 Please review any of my new poems which ever you like best please!! ~Lost Fri, 12 Jan 2007 19:26:13 EST http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1432652 Striking and well crafted with a good backstory, easily engaged with by the reader. Very poignant in its tale. The lyrics were beautiful and the snapshot of a memory was portrayed beautifully The piece scanned well on the page, as well as working when read aloud. I really enjoyed it, and the neat simple conclusion was easily identifiable and fee...[Read Full Post] Wed, 13 Dec 2006 07:25:21 EST http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1416799 Striking and well crafted with a good backstory, easily engaged with by the reader. I particularly enjoyed the contrasts.. It scanned well on the page, as well as working when read aloud. I really enjoyed it, and the neat simple conclusion was easily identifiable and feelings mutually shared by any mother. Well done and thank you for sharing. ...[Read Full Post] Wed, 13 Dec 2006 07:22:37 EST http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1416796 Clearly set out on the page, with a good backstory, easily engaged with by the reader. I particularly enjoyed the way the verse was interwoven and concluded by repetition. It scanned well on the page, as well as working when read aloud. I really enjoyed it, and the neat simple conclusion, really framed it well... Well done and thank you for s...[Read Full Post] Wed, 13 Dec 2006 07:19:34 EST http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1416795 Your honest opinion means a lot. [Link To Item #1186776] Thanking you in advance: ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Tue, 05 Dec 2006 16:10:29 EST http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1412702