Ting Two! (Forum) http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums.php/item_id/1267761-Ting-Two I think your account should update automatically if I submit the script... It only makes sense. If not, would you like me to hack into your account? Heh, if you happen to have the same password that you had, I don't know, a few years ago, it's no problem. Although...I'm wondering how this works with different time zones....[Read Full Post] Sat, 30 Jun 2007 13:32:25 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1537841 LOL! Well - you don't have to wrap up the story if you don't want to. Maybe you can just get them into the room and have some people advance on them with razors or something andt then Valerie spills the beans or something (I don't quite remember how we were going to do that) But whatever! So yeah, I'd just say get to the 20,000 *^*Smi...[Read Full Post] Sat, 30 Jun 2007 10:26:52 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1537704 Lol! Oh, Ash, that was great I'd like it if we could draw it out a little more later--like you said, alluding a little more to Valerie knowing about Jackie and maybe more dialogue between Valerie and Will. I'm not sure what to do with my addition. Do you want me to just wrap up the 20,000 or should I try to finish the story? Hones...[Read Full Post] Fri, 29 Jun 2007 19:49:01 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1537348 Is the count I have, but it's a little off since I made some changes on my Word that didn't put in our campfire. Haha, what a pathetic way to leave it! But you can do the finishing 20,000 Anyway! I'm not terribly fond of my addition, I want to make more foreshadowing about Valerie knowing something about Jackie, or truly wanti...[Read Full Post] Fri, 29 Jun 2007 19:04:06 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1537326 Hehe, well I know that I didn't rip it off West Side Story because I haven't seen it in ages! Feel free to change it up a bit if it does seem too much like that though! I'm going to punch out my addition right now - but I'm so frazzled for time! I can't push it off though, so I apologize ahead of time for a short/lame addition si...[Read Full Post] Fri, 29 Jun 2007 18:07:04 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1537299 Hehe. It's more exciting this way! But I'm not really worried. I'm glad you liked my addition. I feel like a cheat though I basically stole Razzle Dazzle. I meant to comment on your addition, but things are suddenly really busy :-/ I've been working a lot and I'm taking 2 online courses (one of which is ...[Read Full Post] Fri, 29 Jun 2007 02:06:26 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1536939 I adore your addition! I will do my best to write mine before work tomorrow - otherwise after work. I'll do it before Saturday though, I promise! That way if I don't make the 20,000 words with mine you should have time to do it on Saturday! Haha, I never thought we would end up cutting this so close!!! -Ash [Image #...[Read Full Post] Thu, 28 Jun 2007 21:01:03 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1536817 So my addition turned out to be completely different than I thought it was going to be when I started, but I think it still works. The whistling song wasn't quite what I had hoped it would be, but I think it works. If you can think of some ways to alter it though, maybe we should because I'm not entirely happy with it. Oh well! Either way...[Read Full Post] Mon, 25 Jun 2007 15:05:21 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1534861 Of course we can come back after June! Though you have to kick me into gear about TOS - I just kind of havent' been in those reviewing forums in a month and I feel bad. Haha - whoops! Heh, yeah I've had a little trouble with the four different zombies - I'm sure we can kind of cut them out of the dialogue here pretty soon. Send them up ...[Read Full Post] Mon, 25 Jun 2007 14:06:45 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1534825 I'm not sure if my addition made sense and I can't recall exactly which parts I was uncertain about......Is it okay if we come back to it after June? Hehe. It's been so unbearably hot here it's made me lazy. I can't even cook my own food anymore since it involves using the stove or the oven which just makes everything hotter and all t...[Read Full Post] Sun, 24 Jun 2007 00:18:55 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1534066 No worries! My weekends are always killer anyway. I'll have time to write tomorrow night (being Sunday night) so that should work out just fine! I got your letter today! I'll be writing back asap! Except not now.... because I can't stay awake... Also, about the plot, I was thinking about what in the world is going to happe...[Read Full Post] Sat, 23 Jun 2007 19:24:07 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1533898 That makes me SO HAPPY. Hahaa! [Image #862555] Check it out: [Link To Item #385985] [Link To Item #431546] [Image #1175629] [Link: 'http://www.livejournal.com/users/madlune'] [Image #412762] "Why is it that, as a culture, we are more comfortable seeing two men holding guns than hol...[Read Full Post] Sat, 23 Jun 2007 19:21:14 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1533893 I just realized there are only 8 more days left in the month--and although I don't doubt we can pound out the remaining 5,000-ish words in no time, I think there's probably still a lot of plot points we'll want to discuss. So, I apologize.... I started this online writing workshop the other day, and 've been trying to catch up with my ot...[Read Full Post] Fri, 22 Jun 2007 20:09:50 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1533420 I currently have the Script Frenzy site set as my homepage And you and I happened to be mentioned in today's Beat: There are nine days remaining in Script Frenzy. When you get right down to it, nine days is nearly one whole third of the month. One-third! That is a big chunk of the month. If you think about it in terms of eating cake, ...[Read Full Post] Fri, 22 Jun 2007 20:01:03 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1533410 Okay! So... that's what I did! i hope you don't mind but I added a little to your last addition and then actually took a couple of your lines and put it in my addition. I hope it works and I hope you don't mind! I was thinking in your next addition you could have them all in the submarine and then you could say what the plan was that...[Read Full Post] Mon, 18 Jun 2007 15:03:37 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1530567 Aw - you won't live in that adorable place anymore? I seriously can't imagine you anywhere else- that was so you. But I also /totally/ understand. It'd be hard to live in that small of a space with two people. Anyway, time your time letting me know but I wanna know anyway! Have fun with your Pa this weekend, what with father's day ...[Read Full Post] Sat, 16 Jun 2007 19:37:38 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1529546 Don't worry about it, working on the script helped me keep my mind off it for a while. It even made me laugh, kinda (i know that sounds kind of full of myself though :-/) I'll send you an email about it when I have the chance. Or write a letter. I'm at work right now (it's kinda slow) and my dad's going to be in town for the weeke...[Read Full Post] Sat, 16 Jun 2007 11:48:39 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1529303 :-O Honey! Dude - if you break up with someone you are totally and completely excused from writing for a while! What in the world happened? I have yet to read your addition but I will right after this. And then.... yeah, I might be able to make my addition on Saturday night. But still - I want to hear about what's going on!!!! ...[Read Full Post] Thu, 14 Jun 2007 18:52:30 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1528240 Sounds good! I'll put in the stuff about the submarine and, um... I don't know, we'll figure out the lion thing at the end [Image #552996] Check it out: [Link To Item #385985] [Link To Item #431546] [Image #726499] [Link: 'http://www.livejournal.com/users/madlune'] [Image #784393...[Read Full Post] Thu, 14 Jun 2007 18:50:07 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1528239 I know it's taken forever for me to post this! I'm sorry I didn't do much with my addition. I mean, it didn't realy move the story along or anything. I was kind of laboring to finish it.... I'm very confused, and I don't want to make excuses, but I'm really...confused. And not feeling much like myself. Justin and I broke up...[Read Full Post] Thu, 14 Jun 2007 18:27:13 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1528229 Heh heh. If you'd like to add that part about the submarine it'd be great Lol, although I'm not sure if coconut meat and salt makes a convincing glue We should keep it simply...Like boar guts and coconut. Hm, I don't know what happened to the lion. I think I messed up in one of my scenes and forgot he went ov...[Read Full Post] Thu, 14 Jun 2007 17:56:24 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1528216 Yup - that sounds good to me!!! I agree that does seem like a lot. Maybe you can just get them out on the ship and in the open water or just landing? Then I could either take them the rest of the way or get the boys started on their sneaking. Oh, and, of course, they would totally be able to get a wooden submarine right into the port because our...[Read Full Post] Tue, 12 Jun 2007 23:47:49 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1527262 I think it would be plausible that they just escape by boat. You wouldn't think they could make a submarine.... though that would be pretty dang funny. You know what - never mind. They should totally make a submarine too. It's so outrageous that it's perfect. Then the decoy would be perfect! BTW - did the lion ever make it to the isla...[Read Full Post] Tue, 12 Jun 2007 23:45:09 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1527260 Sorry I didn't reply to this sooner! You were right about the timing being off--But thanks to your addition it's all settled now. So, just to keep everything straight in my own mind (and make sure we're on the same page) in my addition: - Leo and Jeffery will settle the Belleza issue--much to her distaste. - They find disguises and ...[Read Full Post] Tue, 12 Jun 2007 23:08:32 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1527236 Brilliant, indeed! Heh, I liked how Jackie was so matter-of-fact about the bombing. This solves all the timing issues, I think...And it's definitely safe to assume they have a radio on the island ;) Even if they don't have a ridiculous amount of batteries, it could be one of those um, wind-up radios? I don't recall their proper name. Crank...[Read Full Post] Tue, 12 Jun 2007 22:09:42 EDT http://www.Writing.Com/main/forums/message_id/1527210