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Click on the Links Line to go to one of the main pages. _______________________________________________________________________________ ![]() ______________________________________________________________ ![]() ~ Week of February 5th thru February 11th ~ ~ and the most 5-point and 4-point reviews! ~ two weeks straight! ![]() ![]() 12/21 Nixie Focus on Plot/Conflict "Lightning Strikes the Soul- Chapter One" Review of "Lightning Strikes the Soul- Chapter One" by Michaelfrommountains Review of "My Everything Girl" by happyfingers Review of "What Love Creates" by Michaelfrommountains Review of "Lightning Strikes the Soul- Chapter One" by Giselle Review of "Lightning Strikes the Soul- Chapter One" by ~AJ Lyle~ Review of "Lightning Strikes the Soul- Chapter One" by Lady Katie-marie (6) 12/24 Julie D Please review written work only. 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(0) 1/14 Leila Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling Review of "A Kiss in the Rain" by Evertrap Review of "A Kiss in the Rain" by Lady Katie-marie (2) 1/20 penonpaper Review of "Ascending Spirit" by Michaelfrommountains Review of "Walking The Seawall" by Michaelfrommountains Review of "Break Free" by Candlemaker Review of "Ten Tall Trees Stood Together" by millershelly Review of "Unfinished" by KingArpod Review of "We Share The Same Mother" by Giselle Review of "Remembering Sky" by Giselle Review of "Love The Ocean" by Giselle (8) 1/24 Marsha Musselman Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling Please review poetry Review of "Can I Prove the Existence of God?" by Michaelfrommountains Review of "The Open Door of Friendship" by Candlemaker Review of "The Open Door of Friendship" by Michaelfrommountains (3) 2/01 Ellen Granger Please choose unrated items from this folder Review of "Vista" by Michaelfrommountains (1) 2/01 Bertiebrite Grindstone Nose Plot/Conflict "The Reluctant Sojourner" I want to know if the story is smooth. Are all questions answered? Review of "Social Warning" by Michaelfrommountains Review of "The Reluctant Sojourner" by Michaelfrommountains Review of "The Reluctant Sojourner" by Lady Katie-marie (3) 2/01 Hanna Short Stories Review of "Messed up world" by Michaelfrommountains Review of "The clown" by Michaelfrommountains Review of "Simian the Gatekeeper" by Lady Katie-marie Review of "Desert moon" by Kasia ♥ Thanks Anon! (4) 2/01 Michaelfrommountains Review of "Refocusing and Other Life Tricks" by happyfingers (1) 2/01 rajasri Short Stories ~ Please comment on Emotional Impact Review of "Trust,Value and Love Yourself" by Michaelfrommountains (1) 2/01 Brenpoet - Happy Valentine' Review of "Puddle Song" by Michaelfrommountains (1) 2/04 Vagabond Poetry Please Character Development Review of "Questions on Death" by Michaelfrommountains (1) 2/04 Jace Don't worry about Grammar, Punctuation, or Spelling. 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