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 Forum for the Angel Army's In-Depth Reviews!
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Angel In-Depth Reveiws Reviews

Thanks so very much Jules~NaNoWriMadness View kaelett's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private] for the lovely awardicon!


Do you like to give helpful, encouraging reviews that explore the different aspects of the item at hand?  Do you like to dig a little deeper than the surface?  Would you like to expand the content and quality of your reviews, but aren't sure how?  If so, this is the place for you!

Angel In-Depth Reviews  [#1518817]
Header for the Angel Army's In-Depth Review forum.


In our time spent on WDC, we've encountered many reviews, and just as many reviewing styles.  All are an essential part of our community and vital to any writer.  The focus here is on the quality of the reviews you give, not the quantity.

Note What is an in-depth review, and how do I give one?

Good question.  There are many different techniques and styles a reviewer can implement.  An in-depth review isn't just a pat on the back to the author, or a few technical issues you may have noticed.  It explores your impressions as a reader.  What did you think about the characters?  Did the setting work for the story?  Did the writer show enough to make you feel like you were a part of it, or did they tell you too much?  Did the plot flow?  Did certain aspects drag?  What did you like?  What, if anything, didn't you like?  Were you left with unanswered questions?  All of these things play a part in helping the writer understand how their story impacted their reader.

The same goes for poetry.  Flow, format, technique, punctuation, and even the impressions left upon a reader, all help give a deeper understanding of what worked and what didn't.

Still not sure how to go about this?  That's fine!  We all start somewhere.  Smile  We learn by doing, by practice, and by research. 

Note How do I join?

Easy! We accept all members of the Angel Army.  If you would like to participate in the forum, please either leave a note here or e-mail me and I will add you to the group.  Bigsmile

IdeaOur group will have bi-weekly newsletters covering the different techniques, aspects, and concerns of  in-depth reviews.Idea

Note  What does this forum do?

We work in conjunction with:


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Angel Review Forum  [ASR]
Read, Review, Rate and Record all items read by the Army Angels.
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Every month, this forum will offer selected pieces from the port-raid authors, as well as from the author spotlight for in-depth reviews.  Your mission, should you choose to accept it, is to review these pieces.

This enables you to:


Note5  Get reviewing credits and gift points.  You must make reviews for this forum public and use and Angel Army signature to get credit.

Note5Get triple the Angel Points for completing the list!

Note5  Vote!  At the end of each month, you, the reviewers, get to decide which piece was the best from the port-raid group.  The item that receives the most votes will get a 50k ribbon on behalf of the group.  All spotlight authors will get a 10k ribbon.

Note5  Win your own prizes!  At the end of each month, three lucky reviewers will be chosen as the most helpful.  For their hard-earned efforts, they get a merit badge!  The most outstanding participant will also be awarded a plaque to honor their contributions.

In-depth Award of Excellence  [#1521009]
Plaque to be given at the end of each month to the Angel In-depth forum's star reviewer!


Note5  Learn and help other writers in the process.  Reviews benefit all involved.  Be it writing a review, receiving a review, or just reading a detailed one, we all take something from the process.

Star  When you have finished posting your public review, please leave a note in the forum, just in case I may have missed it!  Please be sure to use one of our group only signatures and/or use the group affiliation option to make them a bit more noticeable.

Angel In-Depth Review Signature #2  [#1520596]
Made by Kiya for the Angel In-Depth Reviews.
#1520596

Angel In-Depth Review Signature #1  [#1520592]
Signature made by Kiya for Angel In-Depth Reviewers to use.
#1520592


More will be added soon!

The Rules:


Star The selected items must be reviewed.  These will be posted in the forum.

StarIn order to qualify for any end of the month prizes, you must complete all reviews listed for the month.

Star Please use one of our group signatures and/or use the group affiliation option with your review and make it public.  Once you finish one (or however many) please leave a post in the forum and let me know.  I will find your review and award it accordingly.

Star ALL reviews from this forum must be completed before I will award any other you chose to do.

Star Please remember to be honest and encouraging!

QuestionIf you have any further questions or suggestions regarding this forum, please feel free to e-mail Adriana -33k! Go purple Team! View pradaprincess's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]

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How To Write an Encouraging Review  [E]
What's a well balanced review? What to evaluate in stories, poems? What's the Review Tool?
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Reviewing News and Views  [E]
Interested in a reviewing newsletter? Come on over!
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Ðungeon Щarden View gward's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]


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The Three Strings  [13+]
A long piece of string walks into a bar
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  and 

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The Bracelet Quest  [E]
A knight goes on a quest to find a princess, and kill a dragon, in a magical forest.
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Proofreading book 3! View tattsnteeth2's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]


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Beating Out a Rythm  [E]
One more for New Orleans
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Bayou Barataria  [E]
Bayou Barataria
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The Springfield Curse, Chapter 1  [18+]
The Springfield Curse, Chapter 1
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The Springfield Curse, Chapter 2  [18+]
The Springfield Curse, Chapter 2
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Dennis Cardiff View dcardiff's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]


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Heaven's Daughter  [13+]
Sitting near the water weeping, a lovely maiden in deep despair.
By: Dennis Cardiff View dcardiff's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]
and

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Timid Eyes  [E]
Musings on entering a romantic relationship and potential pitfalls.
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Anti View toni_g's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]


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Recipe of the Holocaust  [13+]
This poem was written for the millions of Jews that died during the Nazi holocaust.
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The Story of Another Hour  [13+]
Based on Kate Chopin's 'The Story of an Hour'. Loose sequel.
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Spink View spinsky's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]


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The Merit Badge Poem  [E]
The Semi-Famous Merit Badge Poem!
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StarStarSPOTLIGHT AUTHORSStarStar



CountryGranny View gjfindley's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private] 

1461231
A Saturday Surprise  [E]
Based on my Grandson - 1st in a series from, "A J. J. Jiggles Adventure."
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Reflection on being a "problem child"
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Georgie Flies  [ASR]
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