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Created: 3:47pm on 06-07-2009
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Novel Focus Forum
To get started, please make a post that includes the item or entry # for your novel. If your novel is in book form, put the entry number. If it is in item form, please make a folder in your portfolio for your novel and post the item number of the folder. Don't link the novel. If you have a book cover illustration, you may provide that link as well.
Each author may decide what he or she needs help with, such as length, wordiness, suspense, etc. If the author doesn't have something in particular, the members may comment on what they feel needs the most work. Each member of the group has one month to finish the novel and give feedback. Each month will a different member's novel.
October and November's Novel
Author request:I would like help with my wordiness issues. As a side note, can you think of a tagline?
To give feedback: Make a new post with the subject line: Feedback: (Title). If you are commenting on individual chapters, include that in the subject line, as: Feedback: (Title, chapters #-#). You may make as many posts as you like, but to be considered an active member, you must make at least one post per novel. EVEN IF YOU DON'T FINISH THE NOVEL, MAKE A POST ON WHAT YOU HAVE READ.
In your post, please address these issues:
1) Whatever the author requested
2) plot
3) characters
4) setting
5) grammar
You may comment on anything else you feel is relevant.
For examples or more help, please email me.Tamara H ![View tsh32's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://imgs.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-40.gif "View tsh32's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]") ![Email User: tsh32 [Offline / Private]](http://imgs.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/mail-off.gif "Email User: tsh32 [Offline / Private]")
active members (must be an active member for 3 months before your novel is posted):
October/November Ms. J 
December Vampyr14
January Tamara H
February iLove2write
March NANO WINNER 59K LVS 4-ASOCIETY
inactive members (to become active, simply start reading and providing feedback!)
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Prestoni
AliceNgoreland
Frankie is NaNo'ing 
Liz
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Loreli
Legend:
= novel finished with feedback
= novel incomplete with feedback
IMPORTANT: more than 1 will be drop your novel back by one month
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