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Message #1508235, posted on 05-12-07 @ 9:22 am EDT,
   by: Dennis Cardiff

 Subject:   Review Request: Let Me Sleep Until the Dawn
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Hi,
The form of the following poem is based roughly on Edgar Allan Poe's "The Raven" which, I believe, is a Sapphic variant. This is new To me. Any comments or criticism welcome.

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Let Me Sleep Until the Dawn 
Now I lay beneath the covers, worldly thoughts I try to smother,
by Dennis Cardiff

Cheers,
Dennis

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