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Message #1643964, posted on 12-29-07 @ 7:05 am EST,
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writing.
i swear.
i promise.
cross my heart.
just most of it on paper and i haven't had any time to put it on the computer.

but here is a little piece i just wrote and thought i'd share.

restless mind


my restless mind

running

clicking

like the pitter patter

of feet.

your there.

just out of reach

so far away

yet so close

why won't you

just take those steps,

come to me?

when i climbed

a mountain

to be here

at your feet.

begging,

please.

take those last steps

hold out your hand

let me rest in your arms

please.

if you can't do it

then the climb

over the top

and down

down the oher side

will be hard

but i can do it.

with or without

you.

if you cannot come

if you cannot take

the steps.

if you cannot

hold out your hand.

then the journey

from here

is on my own.

i'd like

you

to go with me

but i can't do it all.

by myself.

i can be strong

and soldier on

but if i'm to march with

you.

then you have to match me.

step for step.

or the journey

from here

is on my own.

time is short.

light is fading.

if you don't

make your move

then i will

move

on.

match me

step for step

or the journey

from here

is on my own.


Kimmy

"I can resist everything except temptation"
~ Oscar Wilde


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