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Message #1999233, posted on 11-17-09 @ 4:14 am EST,
   by: Vampyr14

 Subject:   Feedbck R & A Chapter 32
In this chapter you really make it clear how much Anne loves Richard, how much she worries about his well being. Despite all the crap that has gone on between them, she still paces and can't sleep when he is at battle. Now that's true love! Especially since it is the role of a king to be in battles and Anne must know this all too well.

I would like to know more about Joanna. She seems an interesting woman with her own strengths. Perhaps it is her strength that makes it difficult for Anne to warm to her. They are too alike?

This chapter leaves you on tenterhooks, really wanting to read on. Great work!

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