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Sep 10, 2010 at 4:36pm
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Hello!

I'd appreciate any kind of feedback I can get on this short story about a May December love tale.

ID: 1698371   (Rated: 13+)
Marion's delight 
Marion and Jim Harris are like May and December.....
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embryo
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